Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 95

Once again superb writing

Today is my steal-time-from-work day; i am sure payback is right around the corner, but at least i caught up with all the parts 😛.

Indu - i don't know which ones i liked more...all three parts were so beautifully written. I like how you moved the story to Yash - he needs a few parts to himself before Arti is back.

Arpita is ...no words to describe the pettiness and meanness involved in the act. And she is not even the type one would feel sorry for. Instead i feel sorry for her parents - poor things.

And how does Yash become the devdas Arti meets?? Will just wait for you to unfold the tale...


Oh - correction. I do know my favourite part - its the poem Yash reads in the journal:

Holding me up…..when I am weak
Helping me find what it is I seek.

Catching my tears….when I cry
Pulling me through when the tide is high.

Just being there….through thick and thin
Protecting my heart from within
You helped me to begin.

All the poems you pen in your stories are beautiful - but this one - this one is special.

Originally posted by: J12L85

Hello dearest Indu, firstly a million apologies on not commenting and reading updates so late, life has just been a rollercoaster with not enough time in a day...sigh. Indu I have lost all words of praise for you so I'll sum up the the last 3 updates as "PHENOMENAL". Each update is truely like a breath of fresh air. The way you have managed to intertwine Yash and Aarthis lives and experiences although they have not yet met directly is just brilliant. I love the way you are bringing about the comparisons between the two ie: Yashs dadima and Aarthis naanimasi, the tug of war effect of both and the push and pull felt by both their situations is so mesmerizing and captivates their characters beautifully. The journal and its wording Indu is just brilliance and it adds to the essence of this unknown force to both currently and which will later on be known as what we know as "SAMARPAN". Yash has been scorched so deep by the word TRUST and I can understand how deep he must be broken which only makes me realize just how difficult it must have been for Arya to build what they now have. The path may have been rocky and steep but the security that was born of it makes it all worthy. Arpita grrr ...can u toop any lower, its clear it was all planned and she has played on Yashs humanity and sincerity. So its quite clear that Payal is the result of Arpita and Rahul...omg is she going to handle this truth that neither Yash or Aarthi are her biological parents. will the love created in her world by Arya be enough to see her throught her true identity. Will Arya divulge the entire truth to her or not? Will Payal feel betrayed or like the luckiest girl in the world to hve been saved from the harsh realty of life? I have so much more to add Indu but unfortunately time does not permit:( May u always be blessed Indu with the creativity of magic that surpasses all boundries, you manage to find and create happiness even in the painful reality of life. Till my next read buddy...

Hi J...I missed you...But I do understand. Real life can take a toll at times.

You rendered me speechless with such sweet words. How do I respond to such beautiful compliments. Thank you so much. The fact that the characters are getting through to you and you are catching on to all the shadowy elements is compliment enough for me. You hit all the right nerves...even the ones I am yet to dwell onto...This speaks volumes of about how much you have come to understand the title of the story and where I intend to go eventually with it. A special thanks and hugs for that.🤗

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Once again superb writing

Thanks my beautiful poet friend. 🤗

awsome update ...wonderfully written...loved it .thanx for update and pm😊.

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Today is my steal-time-from-work day; i am sure payback is right around the corner, but at least i caught up with all the parts 😛.

Indu - i don't know which ones i liked more...all three parts were so beautifully written. I like how you moved the story to Yash - he needs a few parts to himself before Arti is back.

Arpita is ...no words to describe the pettiness and meanness involved in the act. And she is not even the type one would feel sorry for. Instead i feel sorry for her parents - poor things.

And how does Yash become the devdas Arti meets?? Will just wait for you to unfold the tale...


Oh - correction. I do know my favourite part - its the poem Yash reads in the journal:

Kat...thank you so much for taking time off. These words of appreciation are so precious.

Yash's psyche needed understanding before he met with Aarti. Although he had a wonderful support system in his family and friend Aman, he still had to face his quota of tribulations. For Yash, I am touching only those aspects and bends in his life that affected his emotional constitution toward Trust factor.

Originally posted by: pvejani

awsome update ...wonderfully written...loved it .thanx for update and pm😊.

Thank you for the appreciation.😊

Finally exams are over i m back to IF

Originally posted by: KrantiGuru_JKR

Finally exams are over i m back to IF

but i think i will have to read whole story again as i have lost the flow where story was going

will read all parts tomorrow finally 😊

thanks for pming all parts di

-Miti

Hey Miti...Welcome back! I missed you. Don't mind if I continue calling you Miti...I am comfortable with its familiarity.😳

Take your time. I am right here waiting. 😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey Miti...Welcome back! I missed you. Don't mind if I continue calling you Miti...I am comfortable with its familiarity.😳

Take your time. I am right here waiting. 😊