Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139)

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Dishaini

@disha_rajdev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Indu di...u didn't PM me again😔

Haha😆 its okay di,I managed to find Samarpan.I wont miss any updates regarding Samarpan.❤️❤️

Di..now u finally had bring it to the part where Yash first met Aarti with that beard look😉I got it di...I got it!!! ❤️❤️❤️

U are really a fab writer di..👏

Somewhere u had hooked me with ur story..👍🏼

Thank u di for the wonderful update😃

Take care always Indu sis🤗

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rachna1970

@rachna1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Sorry for the last reply

Wonderful upadates Indu

Aarpita is so wicked

Poor yash

Loved ur story a lot dear

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#963

thankyou so much for a fantastic update. even after coming across all those diggers, must appreciate yash for taking responsibility of a kid thus setting a positivity towards future. felt sad for aman , how ironic that both friends being such gems, have got into an unhappy relation. atleast yash came to know that arpita is not the writer of the journal...waiting for next one already

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Jaggy

@--Fairy--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Amazing update ..finally past is over

arprita that bi*** woman ...

poor aman ..loved the way you co-ordinate yash-aarti meeting

waiting for next update

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doratalk

@doratalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#965

Gooose bumps! Loved it! How beautiful! And sad and soulful and lovely and positive- all at the same time!

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#966

Indu this was another one of your fantastic pieces. I was totally into it. Loved the background to Yash and Arpita's relationship and the fact that Yash still has hopes of meeting the person that wrote the diary. Loved every bit of the update.

Edited by saf24 - 12 years ago

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jikky_84

@jikky_84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#967

What is this Arpita? She didn't even want to see the child she gave birth to. Will she ever love any baby she will give birth to if this is her attitude?

Good, finally Yash and Arati met and we can see what happened between them 😛

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Leevi05

@Leevi05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#968

awesome , wonderful update indu

aarpita 😡

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kinny_ranvir

@kinny_ranvir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#969

wow amazing update...Arpita is so sick..deepa is even more worst...
truely these two friends had a very ba luck regarding women...
but yash soon to have best woman..Arti...
sad of Aman ...

finally Arya meets..

thanx for superb update