Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 92

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

My name is Carissa...BTW- did I miss how Arpita got Aarti's journal??😕😆😳

Originally posted by: ns1970

WOW what a twist indu superb update didn't expect yash to marry and she's pregnant .hoping for a bit of light to come yash way example the author of the journal .still hating arpita

Originally posted by: Surish

Excellent piece of writing dear!

Originally posted by: smileymj10

😊 🤗

Indu Di, sorry for not being there as quality things takes time so i was getting ready for this spl tale of your on our AarYA

so to begin were i left Part3 where payal is nothing but wat aarti sees a s mother a daughter who just keeping her heart door closed for someone who will be his prince charming will not be as her dad rather than to feel n experience by herself rather

yash and aarti really spl bond which is offcourse has become strong but not in one second but after a beautiful diffcult journey which you covered later

one thing as we all know our loved one's insecurities we try our bbest to overcome n make them strong which is beautifull demo is your wriute up of yash kurti to aarti scars which has much more to it than it shows

the part 4 n 5 was literally shivering so i have said earlier in my previos post n honelstly not have guts to reread like i did fo 1st three chapters of blissful aarya journey.

but one thing i said n will rep\eat i like you visions of paintings you define its awesome n yash nad aarti anjaana hi sahi but ajeeb sukoon wala part the way yash has been there for aartii in her major turns..love thid beauty which you defined as i will call supreme power who runs all himself we just play

Is it your writing if yes its beautiful love it and actualy reread to understand the depth
Holding me up…..when I am weak
Helping me find what it is I seek.

Catching my tears….when I cry
Pulling me through when the tide is high.

Just being there….through thick and thin
Protecting my heart from within
You helped me to begin.

Pandit dadu words echo in my ears"I will live again when you teach them to your children"

ppl move on with time but the imrints of loved ones remain the same

I really have immense repect fopr malti wat she did for aarti really god has still kept the good part in world due to which it is still standing n surviving

Satya pain is more like obsession..a denial of the truth which burn aarti life for sure but his own life was more than a misery

aarti finally got her graduation done n looking forward to work n open n fly in loose air but again they dint let her fly
in between again once yash advice of sprayto be brave n face the world has become aarti strengths
n yash reading her journal.. hmm aarpita was a blessing in disguise for aarya milan
nanimassi was later but as it says its better to be late than never...

the way you take us to the stroy it doesnot sound like one its about a gal called aarti n about her life which although beautifully covered by you in owrds but will be able to graspp it all i dont thinks so
very heavy one honsestly will move to next chapter which will have hope of meeting yash and aaryi better life...😃

so aarti new chapter begins with nanimassi or i shud say she finally got a HOME if her own with the people who love her repect her n r there for her in each corners of life

n then how interstly you bring more colrs like chris anna in her life to her grandparents father got wat law of karma or yes which we call lady luch which thy never acknowlwdge

3.5 years of aarti life was better n bilssful glad to know abt it with hope yash coming soon to make it worth more :)
Godparents woo wat a beautiful word
byt hey ther O comes into between omg she dint hads even these 3.5 years with complete peace :(

SO iis this Mr. P kyaaa omg will come back again may be not tdoay buit later
sigh so much to write but not good at words kasie likhte oh yaar i mean i give up bbye for now cya sooon😃😃

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Great update dear👏

Glad yash was connected to aarti's journal only⭐️

"A long conviction of worthlessness builds strong walls.

The nearer you approach me'.the blinder I may strike back.I fight against the very thing I want as my defender,I fight against surrender.I am told that love is stronger than strong walls'.and in this lies my hope.And if I know myself'I will fight against even that hope."-- I really loved this stanza😳 ...Heart touching poem 👍🏼

Oh no😭 yash and arpita married😭

Arpita is sick lady😡 😡..She lied and trapped yash and how dare she coolly behaving to yash after the truth..Really a disgusting😡😡 lady...

Really felt sad for yash. 😭 😭 he will be heart broken so much🥺. Arpita deserves to be a punishment😡

Waiting for next part

Thanks for pm😊

Originally posted by: cynthiagem

Thanks for the update. I so love the poem. It essays feelings both of helplessness and hope that Aarti (from her POV) copes with everyday. I love the emotions that the words evoke in Yash, of wanting to protect and make the writer smile forever; that even before meeting her, he had felt the tie that binds him to her.

So, Arpita's decision to marry was based on a lie too. The confrontation between Yash and Arpita will be very interesting and the decision that they will choose regarding their marriage. I can only imagine Yash's anger regarding the pregnancy lie and the added regret and disillusionment once the truth is out regarding the real author of the journal. Looking forward to the next update. 😊