Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 91

Originally posted by: disha_rajdev

Wow Indu sis👏

Really its very beautiful.The way Yash connected to the diary was very beautifully explained👍🏼

Arpita what was plan😕..no idea about that😕

may be Payal is that kid *curious and head spinning*🤪

😆haha...see sis I am more eagerly waiting for ur next update.

Thnk u for the PM sis ❤️❤️and take care always🤗

Thanks Disha.

I promise I'll solve the Yash/Arpita puzzle in the next chapter itself.😊

You take care of yourself too. 🤗

Originally posted by: freya123

grt part

Thanks Freya.😊

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Arpita is so clever, how tactfully she impressed Yash by keeping the journal in front of him when he met her. And due to the thoughts, the writing, the stories, the poems in the journal he got ready to marry her. Arpita is pregnant and want that Yash would give his name to her baby. And above all she is planning something with Rahul, who is supposed to be the father of the child. I don't want Yash to become Mahaan and give his name to Arpita's baby.

Shashi...(bold) Bull's eye!

Err...about the pregnancy...it's not that complicated. I can only say that Arpita thinks of herself first...every single time. Plus she is very ambitious...I mentioned this part of her character earlier as well.😊

Originally posted by: Abie10

Indu the poem was soo beautiful 👏 awesome update 👏 👏

Arpita and yash wedding happen in such a haste..yash felt for a moment that the person he saw,and the writer were different soo true. Arpita what an evil she is, from her convo with rahul it's like her marriage to yash was a plan 😡 so that baby is Payal huh?
How dare she congratulate yash with a smile?disgusting!

Pls continue soon eagerly waiting for yash n arpita convo..

Abie...thank you so very much. The wedding was done hurriedly because of dadima, who wanted to see her favorite grandchild married before she underwent any surgery.

Arpita is definitely working on a plan here...The pregnancy news has just come as a minor hindrance to her. Her last line suggests that by the time Yash came to speak with her, she had already planned her next course of action.

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Hmm...So based on what I've observed in the last chapter, Arpita's intent is to stay there until she has given birth to the child. Once that is over with, she seems to have planned to elope with Rahul, leaving the child in the process. Yash's family will be embarrassed, and his dadima will be devastated. Dadima may die, and Yash will be upset that he did not follow his original instincts and save the family from the ensuing fallout. Of course, I'm simply creating things from nothing, so I'll be quiet and let you weave your magic.

Stupid me: Awesome update Di😆. Yash's thoughts and emotions were expressed with your usual poetic imagery, and you know I'm a sucker for it😳. Poetry in motion is one of the phrases that comes to mind every time I think about your writing.

Hmm...Not fair. You know me inside-out.😉

Thanks lil one, you are my alter ego in many ways. Love you...🤗

I am really glad that even though Arpita confused some, everyone understood Yash. I too am a sucker for the divine play...and who else knows about my fetish better than you. Here too, I wanted Yash to realize real love in Aarti's essence...and he does. Her journal are a mere collection of her writings, yet he is pretty much obsessed with them and somehow reacts very personally to them.

Originally posted by: balaraba

awesome update dear👏, i guess now payal is arpita's daughter. and rahul is he not tanya's bf nd wat link them to arpita something is fishy. ur last sentence is she in her senses she is telling yash congrat instead of apologising, thanx for the pm and this lovely ff.👍🏼😊 update soon dearie u re awesome😊

Thanks balaraba.😳

Tanya's boyfriend was Saahil (Part 5). Rahul was always Arpita's boyfriend. The last sentence sort of gives away what Arpit's intentions are.😊

awesome update
love the way yash felt connected to writer through journal
omggg whattt arpita pregnant😕
and she tricked yash😡😡😡
now I am just complete shut what to say


waiting for next update

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Very Nice Update Indu

It is scary to see evil side of someone (Arpita) and worry how the good person (Yash)can work out things.

Eventually Yash will work out this toughest period of his life. That is what life is.

Facing the toughest moment and coming out with success. The journey will not be a pleasant journey but victory is waiting for Yash.

Thanks Sarada,

It's just fate that Yash repeatedly came across wrong sorts of girls. People like Arpita cannot look beyond their own nose...She is a manipulator and an opportunist. Obviously she wants something out of Yash.
One good thing that goes in Yash's favor is that he has a beautiful, loving family who know him well, so his support system is strong...something which Aarti lacked in through her childhood and teen years.

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Third time's not a charm for Yash 😔.

Poor Yash! This is the third time he was deceived by a girl! And Arpita just assumes that Yash will take to being called the father of the baby when he knows he's not?

Fantastic update Indu!

I'm so eager to find out what happens next!

Thanks Nina.

Well Yash thought he is marrying the girl he connected with through the journal...so even though he was made a fool of again, at least he would (hopefully) know that the girl who wrote those pieces is still out there somewhere. He should take heart with that.