Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 90

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

I have no doubt that the next update will dispel any remaining fog! 😊 I don't know whether to read that update when it comes...just like I am not sure whether or not to thank those house guests of yours whose cancellation prompted this update! 😛 😆 No, I shall thank you and them, because I love this update and your comment even more!

@bold: No, no tangent at all from where I'm standing! That is a beautiful analogy! Aaah, you know, all these comments of yours make reading your updates even more wonderful. They add so much meaning to them!

*sigh* The tunnel analogy. That is one that always comes to mind when I think of Yash and Aarti, whether in your stories or any others. So true about the hope...So true.

I always shall be...trekking along in silence, hopefully not for too much longer 😳. Didn't I say something earlier about you being on another thread before I could review everything? If I didn't, well...now I have! 😉 😆

Originally posted by: lulujjj

indu dear Awesome part i knew arpita would take advantage of yash and she would not say the truth about the journal, manipulative cunning mind of arpita. And the poem was marvelous and arpita pregnant didnt shock me either i knew this would come in a surprise package the story is proceeding very interestingly and when and how did yash meet aarti eagerly waiting to know.

Originally posted by: maha9

yeah i forgot that dear. but i cant tolerate this wicked arpita 😡 please make yash chase her off dear

Originally posted by: sara1990

Awesome update

How did Arpita get Aarti's journal??? Is she up to something???

Is Payal, Arpita's daughter????

Hope Yash meets Aarti very soon

Thanks for the PM

Waiting for your next update

Originally posted by: saf24

Beautiful poem at the start Indu. Amazing upadate.That was a twist with Yash getting married to an already pregnant Arpita. I really like the fact that he doesn't make hasty decsions and give her the benefit of the doubt. Looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as usual.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Thanks Borna...and I remember about the Thread quip. That's the kind of break that works against someone like me in a way, cause what I wrote in earlier parts need reread at times in context of what's going on now...The chapters are interdependent in a way. Already some of my friends forgot how the journal landed up with Arpita. Even then I knew the route of that journal...the word connector between Yash and Aarti, which will join them silently. Arpita was just the via media.


Having said that, a new thread shouldn't come between your thoughts and me.🤗

Originally posted by: AliciaZA

Hey Indu

Wow, just wow. Here I was prepping myself for heartbreak and devastation of Yash loving and losing that cow Arpita - and I get smacked in the face with a different plot entirely!! Your diabolical mind and phenomenal writing blow me away!

Now, more than ever, I'm certain that Aarti saved Yash just as much as he saved her. The question in my mind now is that when Yash met Aarti in the last chapter was it a coincidence... or was he looking for her specifically?!

And now this chapter: Poor Yash!!! First Tanya, now Arpita. I'm very surprised that he doesnt have any bitterness and hate in him. I'm so immensely proud of him that (even though she did not deserve it) he considered what her circumstances might be. His dad, Suraj was amazing - itna vishwas in his beta Yash:). And Arpita that *&@$%. Shamesless, absolutely besharaam that she doesnt seem the slightest bit concerned about deceiving Yash and his family (I'm actually pcituring Ishita as Arpita).

Stunning chapter. Just when I think I cant read this story anymore cos its too heartbreaking, you give us an amazing chapter that keeps me gripped and desperately for the next chapter!!! Can't wait:)

Indu, have you ever thought that maybe after the poignancy of Sparsh and Samarpan you could try your hand at an Aarya rom-com story:)? You write so fantastically well, I would love to see what you would do with an out and out mad caper:). Your fan, Alicia

Originally posted by: shalini28

another great update sis.

loved it so much

waiting for the next one di😳

The nearer you approach me….the blinder I may strike back.

I fight against the very thing I want as my defender,

I fight against surrender.

I am told that love is stronger than strong walls….and in this lies my hope.

And if I know myself…I will fight against even that hope."-- I really loved this stanza😳 ...Heart touching poem 👍🏼

Oh no😭 yash and arpita married😭

Arpita is sick lady😡 😡..She lied and trapped yash and how dare she coolly behaving to yash after the truth..Really a disgusting😡😡 lady...

Really felt sad for yash. 😭 😭 he will be heart broken so much🥺. Arpita deserves to be a punishment😡

Waiting for next part

Thanks for pm😊