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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#871

Originally posted by: InduG64

Than ks Maha.

She maroed Aarti's journal in college...remember? I promise all confusion will be cleared by Part 10.😊

yeah i forgot that dear. but i cant tolerate this wicked arpita

please make yash chase her off dear

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#872

Originally posted by: InduG64
Thank you so much pal...I understand that the way this part ended leaves many questions. All will be cleared by the next one. We still have a three-year period to cover before we reach that encounter in Brownies.

You have summed Yash's part beautifully. In a way Yash agreed to marry Aarti, the girl who wrote the journal, as that girl was in his heart and mind all the time.

Anytime Love! 🤗...Yeah there are many questions but I know that you will answer and cover them perfectly 😃

I know Yash agreed to marry the writer of that journal and wished to shower her with all the love cause he could tell from reading the poems that she was broken but her soul was a beautiful as a rose garden 😭 😳 😳 and he wanted to be the one to make her see that she is one in a million

Can't wait for the next installment Pal 😊

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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#873

Awesome update

How did Arpita get Aarti's journal??? Is she up to something???

Is Payal, Arpita's daughter????

Hope Yash meets Aarti very soon

Thanks for the PM

Waiting for your next update

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#874

Beautiful poem at the start Indu. Amazing upadate.That was a twist with Yash getting married to an already pregnant Arpita. I really like the fact that he doesn't make hasty decsions and give her the benefit of the doubt. Looking forward to what is in store next. Fab job as usual.

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 12 years ago

#875

Hey Indu

Wow, just wow. Here I was prepping myself for heartbreak and devastation of Yash loving and losing that cow Arpita - and I get smacked in the face with a different plot entirely!! Your diabolical mind and phenomenal writing blow me away!

Now, more than ever, I'm certain that Aarti saved Yash just as much as he saved her. The question in my mind now is that when Yash met Aarti in the last chapter was it a coincidence... or was he looking for her specifically?!

And now this chapter: Poor Yash!!! First Tanya, now Arpita. I'm very surprised that he doesnt have any bitterness and hate in him. I'm so immensely proud of him that (even though she did not deserve it) he considered what her circumstances might be. His dad, Suraj was amazing - itna vishwas in his beta Yash:). And Arpita that *&@$%. Shamesless, absolutely besharaam that she doesnt seem the slightest bit concerned about deceiving Yash and his family (I'm actually pcituring Ishita as Arpita).

Stunning chapter. Just when I think I cant read this story anymore cos its too heartbreaking, you give us an amazing chapter that keeps me gripped and desperately for the next chapter!!! Can't wait:)

Indu, have you ever thought that maybe after the poignancy of Sparsh and Samarpan you could try your hand at an Aarya rom-com story:)? You write so fantastically well, I would love to see what you would do with an out and out mad caper:). Your fan, Alicia

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#876

another great update sis.

loved it so much

waiting for the next one di😳

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Dishaini

@disha_rajdev

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Posted: 12 years ago

#877

Wow Indu sis👏👏👏👏

Really its very beautiful.The way Yash connected to the diary was very beautifully explained👍🏼

Arpita what was plan😕..no idea about that😕

may be Payal is that kid *curious and head spinning*🤪

😆haha...see sis I am more eagerly waiting for ur next update.

Thnk u for the PM sis ❤️❤️and take care always🤗

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Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#878

Originally posted by: Deepti1808
A wise unselfishness is not a surrender of yourself to the wishes of anyone,
but only to the best discoverable course of action.

Oh no Indu PLEASE do not make Yash MAHAAN. Please... These lines scare the hell out of me.

Best course of ACTION is to give your name to someone else's baby??????😔
Yaar NAHIII

Arpita is so clever, how tactfully she impressed Yash by keeping the journal in front of him when he met her. And due to the thoughts, the writing, the stories, the poems in the journal he got ready to marry her. Arpita is pregnant and want that Yash would give his name to her baby. And above all she is planning something with Rahul, who is supposed to be the father of the child. I don't want Yash to become Mahaan and give his name to Arpita's baby.

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#879

Indu the poem was soo beautiful 👏 awesome update 👏 👏

Arpita and yash wedding happen in such a haste..yash felt for a moment that the person he saw,and the writer were different soo true. Arpita what an evil she is, from her convo with rahul it's like her marriage to yash was a plan 😡 so that baby is Payal huh?
How dare she congratulate yash with a smile?disgusting!

Pls continue soon eagerly waiting for yash n arpita convo..

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Kittya Cullen

@Kittya_Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#880

Hmm...So based on what I've observed in the last chapter, Arpita's intent is to stay there until she has given birth to the child. Once that is over with, she seems to have planned to elope with Rahul, leaving the child in the process. Yash's family will be embarrassed, and his dadima will be devastated. Dadima may die, and Yash will be upset that he did not follow his original instincts and save the family from the ensuing fallout. Of course, I'm simply creating things from nothing, so I'll be quiet and let you weave your magic.

Stupid me: Awesome update Di😆. Yash's thoughts and emotions were expressed with your usual poetic imagery, and you know I'm a sucker for it😳. Poetry in motion is one of the phrases that comes to mind every time I think about your writing.

Edited by Kittya_Cullen - 12 years ago

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