Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 55

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Beautiful Update, Indu ji.. 😃👏👏

I can see how obvious Aarti herself was so disturbed and broken due to her family.. 😭😭 But wow.. despite of the sadness in her life, I really love the talent she had.. She's superb girl in arts.. 👏👏

And 😃😳.. Yash as hero, came and rescue his 'girlfriend'.. 😳 And I loved the relationship of Malti and Aarti.. 😃 Hmm.. god! Yash will face a sort of betrayal now..

Waiting for more.. Update soon! 😳 Thanks for the PM! Great Job, Indu.. 🤗

Thanks Isya. Yes, Aarti has found her way through her sorrows...She has discovered art, which gives her a lot of happiness.

Thanks again for the encouraging words.🤗

Thankyou for the pm and nice update. Feeling very sad for arthi. People dont realise that their egoistic comments would damage one's self respect to a great extent. Not everyone has yash as companion.

Originally posted by: freya123

grt part

Thanks Freya.😊

Oh goodness Indu this update made me feel so damn upset that a little girl stayed away from Malti (a person who's like her sister) as she thought and probably still think that she's jinxed to such extents that if she were to attend Malti's wedding, something bad would happen. That's how badly she was affected via the hatred continuously shown/showered on her.

So far I've never met (thank goodness) anyone who thinks he/she is the bearer of bad luck/negativity and that's why upon reading this, I was beyond shocked and couldn't comprehend the extents of aarti's self hatred. Her innocence were snatched away by the people who were supposed to preserve it.

Yash came into the picture again as aarti's saviour. First he indirectly resulted in her getting an education and now he saved her from a goon. The most heart wrenching part I have to say is when aarti told malti that she'll never love anyone or even if she does, she'll not go close to him as she not only feel she doesn't deserve it but she's also worried that she'll ruin his life. From here I can conclude that it would have taken a lot of effort and convincing by both yash and aarti herself for her to finally marry the man she loves.

Seriously Indu you're a fantastic writer and I salute you for this work. It's easy to write a romance piece as either we have gone through it or dreamed/fantasized about it but to write such pain, insecurities and emotions which we never want to feel/go through in our entire life really requires talent and immense imagination. I really don't know how you managed to write Aarti's pain in such depths. I'm shell shocked and rendered speechless with your brilliance Indu. You're fantastic and here is my jhappi and hug for a woman with beyond this world imaginations. 🤗

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome update
aarti is sooo cute and sweet
omggg yash's heart broke down😭😭😭
tanya is sooo 😡

waiting for next update

indu can you please color code the dialogue of arya
please don't mind if you can otherwise please forgive me😉

Thank you Jasraj.

I don't want to disappoint you my friend...but I am not very comfortable with the color thing. I mean it won't be me if I try to do that. I'd be totally lost. I hope you understand and don't mind.😳

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina

Superb update Indu!I loved the short conversation between Aarti and the punditji and especially the conversation Aarti had with Malti. Poor Aarti is so damaged from the lack of love she's received from her family that she can't trust herself to be loved by others.

Loved the part when Yash came to her rescue. He is god-sent and will be that person in her life who teaches her that she is capable of being loved just as anybody else.

Fantastic 👏!

Thanks Nina.

There's nothing worse than to tell a child over and over that she was the cause of her mother's death and that her birth caused two deaths in the family. She is a kid after all. She is bound to believe what her family drills into her day-in-day-out. And when it comes to the people we love, we don't want to take any chances with their lives.

Originally posted by: J.M.Singh

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Thanks JM.😊

Wonderful update...

Read the chap 4 & 5 together...!!

wow superb update...loved it..poor Arti...she is really mentally affected loads...

loved Arti-Yash interaction...