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Posted: 12 years ago
Indu dear just mindblowing...u are as gifted as our Aarthi truely:) The way you changed the ambiance from the previous update is not a easy thing to do and yet you have done this beautifully. This update was so mellow yet so insightful at the same time, lots of other emotions surfaced to better understand Arya. Malti and Aarthi share such a pure and strong bond and I'm so glad that Malti is apart of Aarthis life cause she not only has been her confidant but she has been there to reinstate to Aarthi that she has a purpose in life and has a right to happiness and love. She has kept the flame alive in Aarthi, showering her with love and filling her life with colours. Pandit has also played an equally important role and I believe that he tried to fill the role of a father. Aarthis artistic talent was a world of escape for her from all the negativity and it was the retreat she needed. Wow Yash again saved Aarthi (divine intervention) and again helping her and encouraging her to empower herself...a true gentleman and a selfless human being. I just loved the moment where both Yash and Aarthi remembered each other. Although Aarthis memory was mentioned through Pandits words, I am sure she rmembers their 1st encounter clearly cause Yash was the reason for the start of her eduacation. Yashs memory of her stirred by her behaviour...sigh even though it was so breif its etched in his heart. My heart went out to Yash on hearing that horrrible Tanyas words but so glad that he did find out the truth.This heartache will definitely create trust issues for Yash..makes sense now cause in an earlier update Yash and Nanimaasi mentioned this in one of their talks. I also foresee this trust issue and Aarthis emotional pain causing misunderstandings for Arya when they do meet. Maltis parting words to Aarthi was just brilliant and I am sure she will remember and heed this advice when she deals with future situations. Aarthis mind has been tortured and broken so bad that she can'even think about love and thinks she would be a curse on her soulmate:(...can only imagine how hard Yash had to work to break this mindset that she formed about herself. You yet again steppped up Indu and delivered magic...your talent is just wow. Can't wait for the next piece.
PS: In response to your earlier comment to mine, I am doing much better thanx, been down with the flu. Thanx for the well wishes and concern, its really appreciated...big hug:D <3
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Wow ..Superb update dear..👏 👏 👏
I hate aarti's family😡 ..How much they are torturing an innocent soul..😭
Liked pandit blessing to aarti⭐️
Omg..yash and aarti meet was awesome😛..Yash thinking that she is shy girl..
Poor aarti😭..She shutting herself because of her family..So heart wrenching 💔
Malthi and aarti convo superb👏...Liked the way malti strengthening her confidence.. ⭐️⭐️
Tanya😡 😡😡 ..Glad that yash came to know about her true face
Continue soon
Eagerly waiting for next



Thank you for the appreciation Radha. Aarti's family is just a prisoner of their inane, archaic beliefs. Unfortunately Aarti has become the victim of those extreme beliefs. Thankfully she had people in her life who somewhat balanced out the negativity.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shwty

Yash saved Aarti but they didn't recognise each other. Both of them are very lonely maybe the next time they meet will be the start of a new relationship. I really hope so.



Thank you.😊
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Thanks Sarada.😊
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What would have happened to girls like Aarti, if people like Pandit Dadu and Malti didn't exists in this world. Because of them Aarti was able to keep her inner talent alive. And Malti made sure that Aarti will out the forms for her further studies. I am feeling so proud of them and so happy for Aarti. 👏

Aww loved it when Pandit Dadu gifted her that statuette of Goddess Saraswati, which she later on gave to Payal.

OMG I'm in love with the following line

"Her subtle, delicate actions reminded him of the touch-me-not flower, who is expressively articulate and at peace amidst trees, flowers, and birds but at any human contact withdraws into herself." 👏 👏

So once again Aarti's savior Yash came for her protection. And he still remembers her from childhood. Just he didn't knew that she is the same girl.

Poor Yash is also heart broken. Hope Aarti will mend his broken heart somehow.

Indu I forgot to mention it before, I loved the way you wrote how Aarti got her name, when she was a baby. That was the most beautiful way of naming a baby and it was so symbolic also. 👏

Missed my Aayu though 😭 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: guruandkratz

I absolutely loved the bonding between Malti and Aarti.⭐️

YASH...our superman...always there to save the day!😃
Tanya...hmm, waiting to know more about her!! And Aman is here...😳

Fantastic update!!



Thank you.😊

Yeah, I needed a best friend for Yash whose life will have a lot of impact on Yash later...so thought of Aman.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Hey! It's awesome. Yash met Aarti at medical store. He helped her and again, teach her to defend herself in these type of situations.

Thanks for the PM.




Thank you Shashi.

Yash is popping up at the times she needs most, just to provide her a nudge in the right direction...all very providential so far.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maha9

wow great part indu dear.

I am so sad hearing the story of sadness filled life of arthi.
So yash's broken trust with tanya and arthi to find her love makes the union of arya !!!!
please continue sooon dear




Thanks Maha.

As far as Yash and Aarti's union, there are many miles still to go...They are still very young. So much could happen between now and then.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: scorpiodreams

Thankyou for the pm and nice update. Feeling very sad for arthi. People dont realise that their egoistic comments would damage one's self respect to a great extent. Not everyone has yash as companion.




Thanks...Gosh, you are so right: People don't think twice before trampling someone's self-worth. Most often than not they do so just to cover up their own weaknesses.

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