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smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#531

Originally posted by: InduG64

Hey Barbie...Comments can await. You enjoy your time with the little one. Give him a hug on my behalf. 🤗

Sure will do, were just having a break at this moment, he is playing on FB while am reading ur post..
Hope ur having a Great day too!!

HUGS BACK from my little one...

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#532

Originally posted by: princess121993
i m speechless indu di...i cried again...awww...my poor aarti...n now poor yash...that stupid tanya broke his heart...

it is so lovely update...a wow...i have no words...

please update soon

Thanks Charmi. Appreciate your words. With this chapter, I have touched a bit on Yash's past. Let's see how we go from here and merge their lives finally.

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#533

Originally posted by: ns1970
awesome update as always👍🏼
so sorry aarti feels this way about herself but i am sure yash will chage this soon

Thanks ns. *Sigh* Right you are about Yash...that's what this journey is all about.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#534

Originally posted by: balaraba
Awesome, perfect, u entertain us with ur beautiful writing what more should I add here a lot to add dear it was *muahhh* thank u for d PM a d WOW! update *waiting for d nxt part*

Thanks bala. So glad this story appeals to your senses. This support is what keeps me going.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: cynthiagem
I always get excited receiving a pm for the next chapter. I get so engrossed in the story that it is always never enough when I reachthe end. Thank you so much for the effort you put in writing such a gripping story of Aarti and Yash.

Thank you for the encouraging words, Cynthia. I write what I feel, pal...it's just that I am very fortunate that I have everyone's support here. 😊

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Shashi1984

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Posted: 12 years ago

#536

Hey! It's awesome. Yash met Aarti at medical store. He helped her and again, teach her to defend herself in these type of situations.

Thanks for the PM.

Edited by Shashi1984 - 12 years ago

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#537

wow great part indu dear.

I am so sad hearing the story of sadness filled life of arthi.

So yash's broken trust with tanya and arthi to find her love makes the union of arya !!!!

please continue sooon dear

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#538

Originally posted by: saf24
Another fantastic update Indu. Beautifully written. Loved every bit of it especially finding out what Aarti's life was like and the little glimpse of Yash re entering her life. Superb job.

Thanks Saf. So far so good...😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: pvejani
awsome update dear👏👏👏.love it❤️.thanx for the update and pm😊.

Thanks pvejani.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#540

Originally posted by: kdsubs1
Indu - i loved the delving into Arti's psyche. Explore that more would you? Painful as it is, its fascinating to see it unfold. I know i know - i complain about torture of children on one hand and on the other ask you to delve into her psyche - and how can you do one without at least touching on the other?? Sigh...but you are doing this so well, so go on, do.

Don't rush the Yash the saviour angle yet - i may be one of the few asking for this. But Arti and her damaged psyche needs the time. Unless you are going to use Yash to unfold more of her thoughts, as you did Malti.

Why do i even bother making suggestions?? I am just rambling. You will write this as you thought it out and will do a wonderful job of it. And i will sit back, read and absorb...

Hey Kat...Your ramblings are music to me pal. Keep them coming. Suggestions are always welcome. I promise I'll do my best as to what you suggest.

Thank God Aarti is no more a kid but well into her teens, so I am breathing a little easy now. It was very difficult for me to visualize her going through all the abuses that I touched upon. If I wished, I could have been little more graphic about a couple of punishments, but I deliberately left it to the readers to guess how bad they were, considering the kind of self-loathing Aarti carries now, and concentrated on the after-effects.

As for Yash, that's a different angle I am exploring at the moment. That's why their meetings are so few and far between and incidental...just three in her fifteen plus years of life.

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