Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 48

Originally posted by: miti16295

di just read last two parts

part 3 & 4 both r awesome di

aayu is really cute boy love him ❤️

i love yash as aarti's husband . he is so caring and loving.

aarti's past is really painful

i understand satyendra was in grief of losing her wife but why he blamed a poor child 😡

don't he understand aarti is a 'last nishani' of shobha 😔

but i know and i understand what aarti must have gone through as i have seen the same thing with someone i m really close

uff a glass hit on her chest 😭

but i love yash has always been their to support aarti even in childhood.

because of him she could go to school😊

even loved radha and aarti's uncle -aunty😊

but the worse is maya .i have seen in our society a women is one who tortures and harass other women more than men 😡 what need of her made her to tell aarti that she was a curse and all she is such a 🤬

superb updates di 👏

and do bear with my late comments pls

Miti...you took time out to comment on the chapter...that itself is reward, so don't apologize please.🤗

Thank you for liking the chapters. Well, Satya may not be evil, but he is a a very self-centered and rigid man, whose love for his dead wife borders on unnatural obsession.

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update
good to know how much poor aarti has gone through during her childhood😭😭
poor her
waiting for next udpate

Thanks Jasraj.😊

Originally posted by: freya123

awesome part

Thanks Freya.😊

I'm not one to read a story and have tears filled in my eyes

Originally posted by: RA17

Part 4 is really afull of pain and miseries.. our childhood is a foundation now aarti seems all ok in present tahnks to YASH but she has really faced which I even don't want to imagine.. its all bahut dard bhara ' really you make us smile , happy n now feel the worse we can feel for somebody like a small gal .. really radha maa is really a great lady then pandit n malti who was there a support which make her sail thru the rough path which marks or I shud burden still haunting her' like we read in chapter 3/' now I am more glad tht we know the end is not scary as she has gone thru'.tthanks pal' have a rocking time.. take cr..

words n emotions r not getting their [ath well i will read this as only update.. dont want to feel as my heart went for poor innocent soul😭

Hey Ria...Yeah, that's why I wanted us all to have the happy family picture at the back of our mind when we face Aarti's unhappy past. Her self-esteem was the biggest casualty of her childhood...We'll have to wait and see how Yash helps her out of this lowness.

Thank you so much for the appreciation. It helped to know that the part was well accepted.

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Indu - pal, apologies due first. I wasn't in a frame of mind to comment on your earlier part , and now here you are with its extension 😭.

Abuse of a child is one thing i do not hold with. Completely unacceptable - but a harsh reality too. And when its emotional and psychological abuse, its worse in a way because there are rarely any physical evidences of it.

This part reminded me so much of that old movie - Anupama. Sigh...i had a hard time holding back my tears when i saw that film - and i had a hard time with this update. So i can just feel for you as you are writing it pal.

Kat, my dear friend...you need never apologize to me.
I know, pal...I know I have kind of touched a very sensitive issue here. If I have to name one chapter that kickstarted Samarpan, I would say it is this one. I met a girl who went through similar trauma as Aarti a few days before the idea came to me. So, you see we do come across such instances right in our daily lives.

You are so right...psychological scars are hard to erase. Even after twelve years of being happily married to Yash, Aarti still feels the pangs of those days at times as if they happened recently. When she is disturbed, she still ties herself to him, afraid he will leave her. So, although one has moved on and is happy, it just needs a trigger for the memories to rush back.

Anupama is a classic movie. One of the best of Hrishikesh Mukherjee. Now that you mention it, I can see the similarities. I sure went into a pretty traumatic zone while writing this chapter...it wasn't easy, I tell you. I had to write about a totally indifferent and insensitive father, when I myself had the most wholesome relationship with my own father who passed away not long ago. My father remains my only best friend to date.

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Very Nice Update Indu

Thanks Sarada...You never fail to put in two words for me, and I want you to know how much I appreciate your quiet support.🤗

Originally posted by: J.M.Singh

gr8 wrk. 👏i just read out all so far 😃

Thanks JM.😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

was hesitant about reading - as you know- so sat on it till i couldn't help myself. afterall- it's your writing!!! can't stay away. and so glad i didn't 😊

not saying it didn't make me equal parts angry and sad for aarti...but it didn't...oh i don't know the correct words. you're the wordsmith here...it didn't kill me. i could handle it, even though it hurt to see aarti like that

adored yash here

sad to say i know ppl like dubey females

fantastic as usual Indu :)

Rutu...yours was one reaction I was waiting with bated breath, knowing what your feelings were regarding the past. Thanks for the green signal pal...I breathe easy now. Aarti did get the raw end of the deal, but all was not dark...there were people who were there to help her and to care for her.

Thank you once again for keeping your faith in me.

Originally posted by: neetusidhu

Great job cant wait to read more

Thanks Neetu.😊