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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Wow wow this story is so nice dear. and the speciality lies with the grown up kids and i like aayu so much !!!

This is really lovely and the way yash describes his love for arthi is so sweet !!! Please continue the first part soon dear i am so eager to read it

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Awww very intriguing start Pal 👏 👏 👏...Glad to see that you took that leap of faith 😉 🤗

ooh Aayu and PayPal are too adorable 😳 ❤️

Can't wait for what comes next 😃

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Indu - pal, that's probably the silliest question you have asked!! Of course you should continue - and that answers your niggling doubt - yes ma'am, it definitely has potential, a lot of potential.

Did I miss Ansh in the prologue? I liked the glimpse into the older Payal and born-and-decisive Ayu. He's sooo cute!!

Yes definitely - do continue.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Samarpan ...wow just wow

prologue extremely interesting

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PADMA VARANASI

@padmavar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Indu, you started another story, thank you. I loved Sparsh and was sad that it ended. I love your style fo writing and looking forward to Samarpan. Awesome prologue.

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MaTanGini

@MaTanGini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Wow Indu. Are you going to write a story? Whats an SS? Well everyone seems very excited about this and so am I. I love stories.

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Abie10

@Abie10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

WOW indu, u are back with another SS am so happy..So love the convo between Aayu n papa Superb👏👏

Eagerly waiting for next part how papa met mama.

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rachna1970

@rachna1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

wow,,,indu u are back

I m so so so happy dear

Samarpan after great story Sparsh

Super excited

Pls update soon n pm me too

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scorpiodreams

@scorpiodreams

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

very interesting ... please continue.

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vidya29

@vidya29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#20

You are Back! Missed your words,a lot.

So,Samarpan,intriguing. When I read the title,I thought maybe you are going to explore the whole falling in love phase.With Sparsh,it was patience,knowing and trusting the touch of love.

This seems about exploring the whole getting to trust someone wholly.

I love the song Tu bin bataye,from Rang de Basanti.For me it shows how a person lets go of all the fears,inhibitions,reasons and blindly surrenders oneself to the other.Out of love.Out of the trust born out of the very same love.The title reminds me of it.

Look at me here,getting ahead of myself.I'll simply surrender myself to you,enjoying as you leave me in awe of your story-telling,once again.

I look forward to this story very much.

P.S.I miss Ansh.Is he not going to be a part of this story?YAsh's Family for me is simply incomplete without him.

P.P.S Kindly don't bother with the PM, incase .My Parents aren't relinquishing my Tab and the proxy software on my lappie doesn't allow me to log in.

Edited by vidya29 - 12 years ago