Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

OMG

I just can't believe it.

Here you are back where you belong writing from the heart about sweet-hearts.

THANK GOD you did not take too long to come back to us.

Was missing your words terribly (Apart from your takes and SR of course)

But hey its 🥳

And what a beginning, just too intriguing as it is making me all the more anxious to know more and more about it.

Deepti...I can't believe it myself. As with "Our Life" and "Sparsh" this too came out of nowhere. I had absolutely no plans to get back into writing another story so soon...that too only after two weeks of Sparsh and especially when my real life is virtually a busy mela these days with me juggling various roles. Last weekend we had visited someone and met this girl...that's when this seed was planted. It kept coming back...till I had to put it down. You write...so you'd know the feeling.
Let's see where I go from here...it's an unchartered territory at the moment.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Can't believe that I am second to comment. Read it at one go. Loved it.🤗

What I meaningful title👏 loved the way you've described the meaning of the word " Samarpan " 👏

So their kids are grown up, sounds interesting. Loved the bonding between the trio 👏

Can't imagine a quite Aarti 😕. My reaction was like Aayu's, Aarti and quite 😕, but I am sure something major must have happened in her life. Can't wait to know what it was, but I know I'll have to wait for it 😭. But sometimes waiting is good, hai Na? 😉

And OMG Yash first saw Aarti on the day she was born, so that means their love story started from that day

Indu please please please update soon and PM me.

And Indu thanks for coming with another story, I am sure it'll be as good as SPARSH ❤️

Dear me Nikki...you are such a biased sweetheart.🤗 I really needed an honest opinion as to whether this was worth progressing with...Guess, I should have known better where you are concerned.😆 Thank you for liking whatever came out as a prologue. I don't know where this will go, but it is going to be somewhat different from Sparsh...Please give me some time to think about the nitty-gritties of the storyline.

Originally posted by: princess121993

oh wow...absolutely amazing...i m speechless...please update soon and pm me the next update..please

Thanks. Sure I'll mail you as and when I come up with Part 1.😊

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

Wow re!! 👏👏 You came back with another S Story... 😳

After I was missing the Sparsh.. here come another S.. Samarpan!!

OMG.. Just loved the prologue! ⭐️👏 Another beautifully written piece of writings! 👏⭐️

Aayu is here.. 😳 The conversations are too cute of the mini family here.. Palak, Ansh and Yash Papa! 😉

Excited for more, Indu!! 😃 Thank you for coming up with another story! 🤗

I want PM pls.. 😳😳

Thanks Isya. Of course, I'll let you know when I finally begin...😊

Originally posted by: gcluv

yupieee Indu .. you started a another story

I am very excited

thank you dear

Will read and then shall comment on it

Thanks Aditi...Pls read it and give me your honest opinion. I don't want to stain your expectations by getting into something that you all may not accept wholeheartedly.😳

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

For new ss dear👏 👏 👏
Great title...⭐️
Amazing prologue 👏 👏 👏 ..So interesting..😛
Wow..cute little aayu and yash convo superb❤️ 😳
Eagerly waiting for first part dear

Thanks Radha...😊

Originally posted by: miti16295

di di di🤗u r back

u r my fav. writer di🤗

wow

i m so happy that u r back with another SS

first of all nice title 😊 so meaningful 👏

beginning was excellent👏

thanks for starting another SS so soon

di just like aayu i can't believe aarti & quiet😕

ur starting has made me more curious to know more about this story

pls pls pls update soon and pls pm me 😃

PS - di can u give me the link of SPARSH

i lost it 😕 and i want to read it again

Thanks for the confidence Miti. I have this vague idea about the story...Just don't know where it'll take me.


Here's the link to the first thread of Sparsh:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3308447

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Indu! A new story?! You're asking us if this has potential or not? I haven't read the prologue yet, but you should know my views on the aforementioned matter. I received such a happy shock when I saw this after I came online just now. So happy to see this!

*RESERVED!*

Borna, my friend, I was banking on you to come out with a neutral opinion...the on-your-face one. Don't want to get into something that I won't be able to do justice to. With Sparsh, I knew the beginning and I knew how it'll end...but here the beginning itself is the ending...it's the in-between I shall have to pan out. At the moment my mind flies in various directions regarding the characterizations of Yash and Aarti. I am going to be a little slow at the beginning with this one...till I charter the course and there's clarity.

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG OMG OMG... Indu when I saw your name and the title Samarpan( An SS) I was literally jumping in joy..

You've no idea how I terribly missed your writing. I was really hoping so badly that you would write a new SS and now knowing that you've started a new one, I'm over the moon happy... YAYYY.. One of my favourite writer is back in action.

Again another title which made me go wait what's Samarpan. Thank goodness you explained it and the prologue is so intriguing Indu. I absolutely loved it and am starting to get really curious as in to why Aarti was silent before.

Please please please do continue.. It has all the potential in the world, especially if the writer is you.. Plus asking that question itself is a crime. Love it and love you for starting a new one.
Here is a jhappi and super tight hug from an overly excited me...😃🤗

Sheema...I am going to take my jhappi first.🤗 Really need it especially when you refuse to give me an impartial opinion. The whole idea of putting this as a prologue was to request you and all my friends to give me an honest opinion. I was so apprehensive that I posted it and went to sleep over it. Didn't even pm anyone

Having said that, I have to say I am simply overwhelmed at this blind confidence. I have my fingers crossed now as I tell myself, "Indu! Hope you know what you are doing?"😳

Originally posted by: maha9

Wow wow this story is so nice dear. and the speciality lies with the grown up kids and i like aayu so much !!!

This is really lovely and the way yash describes his love for arthi is so sweet !!! Please continue the first part soon dear i am so eager to read it

Thanks Maha.😊