Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 13

wow, awesome way to start👏

omg...wow...excellent brilliant..u r a great writer indu di...lovely awesome...do update soon n thanks for the pm

Oh gosh Indu Indu Indu... You made me blush like crazy reading this update that I was covering half of my face with a pillow so that my parents don't notice my emotions. I'm still trying to calm my heart down which can't stop racing after reading how yash "removed" the icing on aarti's cheeks and lips. ☺️And just desserts!!! haiyee Indu if Yash receives his just desserts, I'll be a goner for sure. 😆.. You write and depict romance in the most brilliant and beautiful way that even the cheesiest pick up line can make a girl (me) ,who averse these kinda lines, go all dreamy and make my legs wobble..

Ok more to the serious notion, I'm pretty sure Aarti's past was dark and somehow feel that her father blamed her and avoided her for the death of her mother. It's just a feeling though..

Arre Indu I still can't believe you were skeptical of yourself when you started this SS. The first part itself is so fantastic and beyond words beautifully penned. I love every bit of it and I mean it not just coz I love you and your work but it has the potential to become a masterpiece (the starting is already mindblowing). Great work indu and I have the feeling this is going to be in my archives too..
So here is a super super tight hug from your loyal and awed fan..🤗

Ah (sigh)! Couldn't have enough of your story. Very good storytelling! Thank you.

Oh god Indu Dear how on earth do you manage to be so damn captivating always, you never fail to deliver. The small recap into the past and Aarthis birth gives us an intake that there was some really painful and emotional memories related to it as Yash did not want to divulge to much info. Omg the moment she held his hand was just truely beautiful. Loved how Yash explained to Aayu the value of relationships and trust. The joint family moment with Pari, Prateek and Nanimaasi was lovely and shows that they are indeed a very close family. Hehehee Yash n Nanimaasi moment was cute and love how he calls her his girlfriend. Lol my favourite part was the kitchen scene, gosh can cake tasting get any more hot n sexy...love love love the naughtiness between Arya. Oh Indu how could you torture us with the final part lol Aarthi is a real smartypants putting Yash through a treasure hunt for his gift...super eager to see what she got him and how the celebrations continue:) I cannot express how happy I am that you have started Samarpan and we get to read more outstanding work. Update soon and thanx for the PM:)

Wow indu awesome update👍🏼

nice dear like it aarya kitchen romance 😆