Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

What the rumplefunk is his problem?😡

Originally posted by: ummisco

I must say u know just the place to stop...A real cliffhanger...

The bedroom scene was so beautifully written...

Why does Yash have a grim voice after all he was fully conscious of what they were doing...(hope he doesn't have any regrets)

Pls continue soon...

Oh dear nice update yash grim voice is making me scary , and their love is so beautifully written. waiting for next update deepti.

oh wow 👏

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Now that I'm partially over my upset with Yashuda*s...whoa didi. I think I blushed. That was pretty heated, the intensity was flowing off the screen at me. I love the way his attention makes her feel desirable and attractive. Shows her that she's valuable. I love the fact that he crosses his inhibitions and makes his best efforts to make it "perfect"😉. Now I've got a silly smile on my face

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Oh dear nice update yash grim voice is making me scary , and their love is so beautifully written. waiting for next update deepti.

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh wow 👏

beautifully done! caught the essence of the moment without all teh rest 😉

oh no! grim voice?😕

OMG!!! Deepti Di, that was fantastic!!! 👏 I was blushing all through the first part! ☺️

@Deepti: "Oh no" was my first reaction at the end...Yashbabu is at it again it seems after spending such an exotic night with his gorgeous wife. 😳

That was very aesthetically written Deepti...you have my heartfelt applause for this piece. Without touching on actuality, you brought out the emotions of the night so realistically. Superb!!!👏