Always,Only You--(fiction) THREAD 1 - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.
but worried after reading last line so pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: miti16295

Beautiful update๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘.

but worried after reading last line so pls update soon


Thank you.
The ending is to keep the suspense going hope you do not mind too much


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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic update Deepti...a perfect mix of everything. Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amezing part, love it dear, : )
but whats wrong with yash ?
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

Fantastic update Deepti...a perfect mix of everything. Loved it.


Thank you.
Your appreciation means a lot
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: kholita

Amezing part, love it dear, : )

but whats wrong with yash ?


Thank you.
I will try and tell what's wrong in the next chapter. ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
you know what i've read all the story again right from the beginning and i found that there are lot of points here in the story yet to reveal and i really love this suspense because it made the story more and more interesting.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ And i'm really really enjoying your story dear.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I felt that yash is hiding something from the very beginning. And i'm eagerly waiting for your next update sweety. thank you very much for the pm too.๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: KS1000

you know what i've read all the story again right from the beginning and i found that there are lot of points here in the story yet to reveal and i really love this suspense because it made the story more and more interesting.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ And i'm really really enjoying your story dear.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ I felt that yash is hiding something from the very beginning. And i'm eagerly waiting for your next update sweety. thank you very much for the pm too.๐Ÿค—



That was an awesome response.๐Ÿค—
Yes i have left some loops open and a few questions hanging.
I just hope i get around to closing all loops.



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Posted: 12 years ago
I must say u know just the place to stop...A real cliffhanger...
The bedroom scene was so beautifully written...
Why does Yash have a grim voice after all he was fully conscious of what they were doing...(hope he doesn't have any regrets)
Pls continue soon...


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Posted: 12 years ago
What the rumplefunk is his problem?๐Ÿ˜ก

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