Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 94

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Posted: 12 years ago
indu .

lovely piece of writing
lovely update
So , our Yash is trying his level best to make his MISTI to speak about her love to him
Loving the cupid play of kids
enjoying the story very much
waiting for your next update
Indu ,

you are a magnificent writer who brings life to each and every words
👏👍🏼⭐️

Edited by gcluv - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love the poem at the beginning...
Before Aarti was reluctant to go with Yash to buy the ring but now she's more than eager to go with him after the telephone conversation...

He forgot her touch…and it hurt…it hurt very much. And it hurt to see him do things for someone else….speak of someone else…feel for someone else. And she could do nothing about it….

I tought that's what she wanted.she's now confused..."No disguise can long conceal love where it exists or Long feign it where it is lacking"
Both of them will eventually get tired of playing this game with their emotions...

Yash is also hurting himself together with Mishti in his attempt to make her admit her identity...

"Mishti broke off, looking away, chewing her lip"...I believe this is the third time Mishti has chewed her lip if am not wrong.She does that whenever she is nervous or at a loss of words.Moreover Yash has also noticed and he wants to make her stop...
Love the ending..... "Papa,don't go!!"...Cant wait to see what Mishti's reaction is going to be...
As usual another wonderful update...👏
Tanx for the pm


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Posted: 12 years ago
My dear dear friends,

This is the thousandth Reply post...I have to thank each one of you for making Sparsh reach this milestone. You all are amazing with your responses. I have not much experience how it is supposed to be...but believe me and I say this with the core of my heart that I treasure each little word that you all pen down in response to each part. There are times I just sit and read...sit and read...sit and read...the past comments from page 1. It's such an overwhelming emotion I have no words to express with. Yup...words fall short even for me. You have made this possible...and given me so much happiness in return. I love you all...oh so much...🤗

Indu


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Posted: 12 years ago
last sentence made me flinch... ansh 😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Ummisco: There you go again my friend...picking out my favorite part...the part where Yash finally gets through to her, though he doesn't know it yet. It's only when it was spelt out to her that she realized how it hurt to lose him. As for the habit, I think I have mentioned quite a few times how Mishti chews on her lower lip during all the instances you mentioned. It's a long-drawn habit and was there six years back as well. You are spot on with such nuances...I love you for being so observant. 🤗And last but not the least the quote you mentioned is so apt...it's beautiful:

No disguise can long conceal love where it exists or Long feign it where it is lacking"
Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
He had one more stop to make in VM before he finally left.
-- So it was him who made Neema to call Mishti to that place.

I know the way Yash behaved today is very much required, for Aarthi to let her true feelings out so she can get the real happiness she deserves. But my heart went out to her while reading the below lines. 🤗
He forgot her touch…and it hurt…it hurt very much. And it hurt to see him do things for someone else….speak of someone else…feel for someone else. And she could do nothing about it….
"Hmm…(a long silence as babuji waited)…It hurts babuji….but I'll be fine. As long as I have you and Anshu, my life is complete." She looked up with a smile.
"Plain? Yes…I know…sometimes being plain has its disadvantages (glancing at Yash)….You are very beautiful Miss Madhu. Congratulations!! You have my best wishes."

My little ones are playing cupids. 😃 Waiting for that picnic. Enjoyed the Ansh-Palak/Ansh-Aarthi/Ansh-Yash moments. Looks like Babuji(Dubey) is also going to do something for his stubborn daughter's happiness.🤔

And how can I ignore my hero. Loving him more and more with each update. ❤️ 🤗
"Oho…don't worry. I know her size….After all I have held her hand many times. I'll return this by tomorrow. Good day, Aartiji!!"
He had hated himself the moment he had looked into her wounded eyes. But he had to do this…give it a final try.
He reached out for her hand and squeezed it in reassurance.
"He'll be fine, Mishti….just fine."
"There's nothing to apologize for…. I should be the one saying sorry…I hurt you." He gazed at her soulfully, as she looked back confusedly.
-- My favorite lines of Yash. Your words are so heart-touching that am not sure whether I do enough justice in my replies to explain my feelings and how much I enjoy your work.

Once again a very beautiful part, Indu. Another part of Sparsh where we(the readers) went through varying emotions along with the characters. 🤗

Loved the last line. Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gcluv

indu .

lovely piece of writing
lovely update
So , our Yash is trying his level best to make his MISTI to speak about her love to him
Loving the cupid play of kids
enjoying the story very much
waiting for your next update
Indu ,

you are a magnificent writer who brings life to each and every words
👏👍🏼⭐️




Aditi...thank you. Your appreciation is always such a morale booster. Love you...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant.. amazing.. wow... That what i can say for now..
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Posted: 12 years ago



Thanks Shashi.😊

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: anushaarja

last sentence made me flinch... ansh 😭




Anusha...🤗

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