Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 92

Originally posted by: srirad

Great update👏

Beautifully written⭐️

Eagerly waiting for next

Thanks Srirad. 🤗

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Beautiful indu as usual

Prasadini...thank you. The red rose has a big role to play in this story...hai na?🤗

Originally posted by: kholita

Love it , great work 👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Didi, I'm gonna crucify you for making me all tearful😭😭😭

Come here for a cuddly hug my crybaby sis🤗...Now with that over, tell me...if I get crucified and go out the zone, who will be morally bound to complete Sparsh? Bolo, bolo...tell, tell!!😛

Originally posted by: smileymj10

Good timing for a single soul here who's having a real life sentiments at this moment.. 😕😭

Anyway, that was another good chapter dear! 👍🏼
I can feel the pain that Mishti have inside, thinking about her Yashji..
Seeing him with another girl and thought that he forgot everything, her sparsh!

But destiny is always there to play.. And let the things put into the right place..

Loved the last line of Ansh "Papa, don't go.."

Looking forward for the next, loved it as always...

@Smiley: Hey Barbie Doll...I had no intentions to hurt you luv...I am so sorry if this touched your still-raw wounds. Love ya...🤗

Thank you...😳

Originally posted by: RA17

Well Indu ji what a update👏 another great piece of writiong will read again and update further⭐️

Thank you Ra ji...I'll be waiting right here...😃

Originally posted by: maha9

Wonderful indu dear 😳 The last part was superb but I feel sad for mishti.

I am so excited to see her reaction on ansh calling yash papa !!!

please continue soon sweety 😳

Thanks Maha.😊 Ansh's secret desire is bound to make Mishti rethink...but but but...😛

Originally posted by: Deepti1808

@Indu: Grrr .. Yash ... he hurt Aarti.

But then he was sorry towards the end. I know he is only trying to make her accept the truth.

It is costing her a lot. Every ounce of self-control and then some to withstand the thought of Yash with someone else. Uff... bechari Aarti.

I am in love with your Aarti and Yash. I wish we could see this enacted somewhere. Big screen-small screen anywhere. It would be such a treat to watch. You have created a complete package all i see lacking in it is b/g score which i think i will add for myself when i read the next update. LOL.

Deepti...Tough times have made Mishti tough, but already twice she has let him take care of her without any fuss. In fact she has subconsciously surrendered to him when she extended her hand and found him there: first time for herself, and the second time, for Ansh. He was always there. She needs to process this sincerity of Yash and trust him.

Gosh Deepti...what do I say to such an encouraging compliment. My Yash and Aarti are not much different in emotion of love from the PV ones. When they love...it's for keeps. They are passionate but not obsessive...Their understanding lies in the undercurrents.
As for the BG score, believe me Deepti, there have been so many instances where I wanted to incorporate an old classic, but...but...but...I am techno challenged, remember?😳

Originally posted by: ns1970

loved it as usual indu keep up the good job

Thanks ns.😊

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

Wow it was amazing and awesome update. I love every part of this story turns me out craving for more.

Thanks Sunrio.😊