Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 95

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Posted: 12 years ago
@Morris: You get a special hug from me for catching that one-liner regarding Yash meeting Neema before he left.🤗 I'd have explained it subsequently...but at that point of time it would have seemed overexplanatory.The effect had to be subtle and by the way.

Well...what can I say...you have hit upon all the key sentences of this part. Your hero is indeed any girl's kind of hero. Everyone wants to receive that kind of unconditional love and understanding. Yash is that and much more. He hurts one moment...and the very next becomes the healer. She runs away from him one moment...and the very next moment she is leaning onto him so very naturally.

You do more than justice to your responses, my friend...you give me so much happiness. I cannot thank you enough for taking time out for Sparsh and penning down your thoughts.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PuvZ

Brilliant.. amazing.. wow... That what i can say for now..




Thanks Puvi...You get well soon my friend and be ready with a longer comment before Sparsh finishes...Love ya...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Cry baby? And me? No one would ever believe you😛
Uff! Now when you put it that way, I certainly can't crucify you and send you out the zone😡. You've escaped this time Didi, now give me more of Mishti aur Yash😆



Hey lil one...what I meant was if I happen to vanish today, there's only one person I trust to finish this...and you know who that is...🤗
Edited by InduG64 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Well let to tell you my friend for someone who has never experienced romantic jealousy you did an incredible job 👏 👍🏼

Aww I knew you had a great time writing the kids part, they were so adorable ❤️

You'll always have my support Pal 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update dear👏👏👏
i really love this part "Hey handsome….How was your day? Can I give my big boy a kiss?"

"No kissiy-wissy, mumma…How many times should I tell you that boys don't do that….(then, as Mishti pouted falsely, he looked here and there and then whispered)..OK, one little one."

it's some how very much natural and same time it's so sweet

poor mishti don't know what happening in front of her eyes

and loved palak and ansh conversation too👏👏👏

love your update very much dear ❤️

❤️and thanx for the pm too 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
And i forget to say this dear but this is must to say

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Posted: 12 years ago
@KS: Thank you.🤗 The kids parts come naturally because of the influence of my own children. Ia m so glad you relate to them. The kids are an integral part of the story and as such their interactions should not be too jarring. 😊


Aww that is so endearing...thank you so much for the approval.😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Another breathtaking update Di!! 👏 👏 The emotions were flowing so freely!!! I loved it!!

Poor Aarti! She's so strong, yet vulnerable! I 😭 loved how you included Yash's admiration of her courage and strength!

I hope Madhu doesn't stick around for too long to provoke my dear girl! 😭

I love her(Madhu's) character though! 😆

Ahhh..the last part! Such innocence! So beautiful!!! I can see the picture-perfect family forming slowly, but surely!!!

Ansh is such a sweetheart! Even subconsciously, he accepts Yash as his father! Such is the void in the kid's life! 😭

Please continue soon! I'm impatiently waiting! 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: InduG64




Pankhudi...thank you.🤗

About the DP...I guess that's a natural assumption of anyone who doesn't know you. Please keep the little one till Sparsh is over. I love to see the cute darling and try to decipher his/her expression...it's such an animated one.😊


ok dear i will not change it 😳😃
Edited by pankhudi11 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
So touching, thank you Indu

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