Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 93

Originally posted by: Zetter

Awesome Pal 👏 👏 👏

Ooh Mishti was so jealous and hurt when she heard Yahs on the phone in her office, Yash was so playing her 😛 😆 ...Awww I loved the way he took her hand and she felt as thou he didn't recognize her when it's just the contrary...he knows her better than before, he is just waiting for her to open up to him and say she is Mishti 😳 😳

Love the relationship between Ansh and Palak, they are too adorable ❤️...the last part with Ansh addressing Yash as papa and asking him not to go was just heartbreaking 😭 😳 😳

Can't wait for Mishti's reaction! 😃

Another beautifully written update, keep up the wonderful job Love 🤗

Thanks my friend...I am so glad this went fine. I have never experienced the emotion of romantic jealousy so wasn't sure whether I was developing it well or not. I was really nervous with this one...

I absolutely love writing the kiddy parts...It's almost like revisiting my own kids' babyhoods.😃

Need that support all the time...love ya back...🤗

Originally posted by: doratalk

Indu

I caught up with parts 9-12 and what can I say- your writing is so fabulous! I am just so glad your updates have been coming so quickly!!! I cannot wait for the next one! Great job!

Dora

Dora, I missed you...but then I understand...it was the vacation time. I try to put two updates per week...have succeeded so far. Hope I am able to keep the tempo, till this is over, which is going to be soon enough I guess.

Thanks pal.😊

Originally posted by: pankhudi11

oh this part was so touchy... 😭. i so love it😳. i really loved ansh and palak's phone conversation it was so cute 😳...since when they become so mature😆.

thanks for PM indu ... waiting for your next update/PM😳 !!!

Pankhudi...thank you.🤗

About the DP...I guess that's a natural assumption of anyone who doesn't know you. Please keep the little one till Sparsh is over. I love to see the cute darling and try to decipher his/her expression...it's such an animated one.😊

Originally posted by: sia221

I don't know who is getting hurt more..Aarti..for not telling the truth..or yash..in the process of making her admit it..??
Seriously Indu stop torturing both of them..and us too.. 😆
Oh..the last line..Papa don't go??
Guess..what jealousy couldn't achieve..love will..Hopefully Aarti will speak now.. 😊
Amazing Indu..Thanks... 😊

Thanks Sia...Oho, Yash is done. He won't be able to hurt her anymore. She got a double blow today...out of which he gave one . They are just going around in circles...so one of them has to take a decision now...and it is more likely going to be Yash...

Sia, I loved that part in bold...😃

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Aarti was feeling so jealous by Yash's phone conversation. But later I felt sooo sad when Aarti was feeling so helpless and lonely and that's because she can't think of her own happiness as her first priority is to look after and take care of her Babuji.

Yash is also feeling bad for the way he was hurting Aarti by making her so jealous. But it is necessary.

But I feel that jealousy is a great feeling as it will help her to finally accept her true feelings.

Loved the way Yash took Aarti's ring for her measurement. He is becoming more and more naughtier day by day.

Aww Ansh and Palak's phone conversation was so cute. They have already started treating each other as brother and sister and Yash and Aarti as their parents. That's why in the end Ansh says

" PAPA DON'T GO". I felt like giving him a biiiggg hug and tell him that don't worry Anshu your Papa is here. Very soon he'll take you and your mummy home. 🤗

Superb Indu.👏

@Nikki...Once again your comments brought this huge smile on my face. Your feedbacks are almost like an episode analysis...Thank you so much. 🤗

Every child who is deprived of a parent wants that gap filled especially when they see others being happy in a complete family. Ansh and Palak were drawn to each other precisely because of this lack. From Palak Ansh understood how wonderful fathers are..E.g., "They take care of everything"...and Ansh elaborated to Palak how beautiful moms are...E.g. "They tell great stories"...and much more of such stuff, till they hit upon the perfect solution.😊

Indu I can comment on each and every word in Each and every line that you write. But that would fill the entire forum as I have a very bad habit of analyzing things in detail.

Originally posted by: rutu83

awww

i like the two little ones playing cupid..a picnic huh?

wonderful as always 😊

not gonna comment on the jealousy part- i always feel what the characters feel with your writing- and while the last few jealousy bits weren't as hard hitting (cute/sweet really 😉) this one just hit home so feeling as crummy as yash and aarti

Thanks Rutu...The jealous thing had to be built up...Mishti now knows that she cannot see him with another...period. It kills her...yet she is strong enough to realize that her family will always come before her own personal emotions.

Originally posted by: InduG64

Come here for a cuddly hug my crybaby sis🤗...Now with that over, tell me...if I get crucified and go out the zone, who will be morally bound to complete Sparsh? Bolo, bolo...tell, tell!!😛

Amazing writing Indu

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Amazing writing Indu

Every part of it is fabulous

Aarti's pain ,her jealously every thing is so touchy

pls continue soon

Thanx for PM

Thank you for the appreciation Rachna.😊