Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 91

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Posted: 12 years ago
I don't know who is getting hurt more..Aarti..for not telling the truth..or yash..in the process of making her admit it..??
Seriously Indu stop torturing both of them..and us too.. 😆
Oh..the last line..Papa don't go??
Guess..what jealousy couldn't achieve..love will..Hopefully Aarti will speak now.. 😊
Amazing Indu..Thanks... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aarti was feeling so jealous by Yash's phone conversation. But later I felt sooo sad when Aarti was feeling so helpless and lonely and that's because she can't think of her own happiness as her first priority is to look after and take care of her Babuji.
Yash is also feeling bad for the way he was hurting Aarti by making her so jealous. But it is necessary.

But I feel that jealousy is a great feeling as it will help her to finally accept her true feelings.

Loved the way Yash took Aarti's ring for her measurement. He is becoming more and more naughtier day by day.

Aww Ansh and Palak's phone conversation was so cute. They have already started treating each other as brother and sister and Yash and Aarti as their parents. That's why in the end Ansh says
" PAPA DON'T GO". I felt like giving him a biiiggg hug and tell him that don't worry Anshu your Papa is here. Very soon he'll take you and your mummy home. 🤗

Superb Indu.👏
Edited by lovely_nikki - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Pankhudi: Thank you...😊

Is that your baby's pic in the DP? He/she is so adorable.❤️


OMG !!🤣 indu, you are one of those 10-15 forum members who asked me the same question when they saw my DP 1-2 unknowns even PMed me and asked that😆 . its so funny for me because i don't have kids as am not married i am 2nd year college student 😆. what makes you feel that its my baby's pic ??😆. BTW i also feel that baby is so cute and adorable that's why i didn't changed it from long time and now i will not change it ever .

yeah thanks for asking me this question i don't know why but i feel good when someone ask this question, strange 😲.
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Posted: 12 years ago
awww
i like the two little ones playing cupid..a picnic huh?
wonderful as always 😊
not gonna comment on the jealousy part- i always feel what the characters feel with your writing- and while the last few jealousy bits weren't as hard hitting (cute/sweet really 😉) this one just hit home so feeling as crummy as yash and aarti
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Indu.. this was so damn beautiful again.. I just love Aarti's jealousy phase and the way Yash heart wrenched knowing how much he has hurt her was just amazing.

I can't even start to explain how I was literally going SAY IT AARTI SAY THAT YOU CAN'T SEE HIM WITH ANOTHER.. That was how intriguing it was. Plus the last part where Ansh said papa, don't go was just so touching as Ansh has already started to feel that connection with Yash and this will definitely bring Mishti closer to Yash and give her more courage/confidence to disclose who she really is..

You've made my Sunday way way way brighter and here's a HUG from me🤗 and also a jhappi for such a fantastic update.




Sheema, thanks. Aha...today I have a jhappi for a bonus...thank you so much. Hug you back...🤗

That jealousy scene was much required...Seeing yours and everyone's comments I am relieved that I didn't make a mess of it.😳 Like I said, Mishti needed to see with her own eyes where her decision could take them. It is one thing to wish him an alternate life from far...it's quite another thing to actually witness it up close. I am not worried for Mishti's resilience here...she has tons. It's still her feelings versus the well-being of babuji and Ansh. When it comes to it, she will always choose the latter. It is Yash I am thinking of now...His patience is wearing thin. He has seen enough of the problems she faces in her daily life to allow her to be alone now. He'll have to catch the bull by the horns sooner...than later.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Beautiful... Awesome👏👏👏...

Oh Mishti... from whom is she running away?? this man in front of whom she can break down... the man who can heal all her wounds... the man who is never going to let her fall.
I really can feel the pain today which Yash had to undergo while being close to that other girl...
Ansh is such a cutie pie... his murmur definitely is going to make Mishti go back and think about her decision.
Thank you for making my sunday😃🤗




@Ash...Thanks. You made my day with that line in bold.🤗
I so wanted Yash's angst also to come across...that he too underwent the same torment as Mishti during that game plan. Thank God I didn't fail there...cause that part was very important, given what Yash's subsequent actions might be.

Yes..Ansh's sleepy wish is something Mishti never accounted for. The fact that Ansh might wish for a father had never occurred to her. So yeah, let's see what this new knowledge does to Mishti's resolution.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

really good update dude so Yash was staring at Aarti's bare back... PERVERT!!!😛 {JK}




Kesha...(***Indu shaking her head...'whatever am I going to do my naughty little friend'***).
My poor, gentleman, Mr Goody-to-shoes Yash...He can't even admire his Mishti from all angles without Kesha making him all 😳. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: saf24

This is a great start to my Sunday morning. Words are starting to fall short to describe the feeling after reading your updates. I loved this part as Yash tried to make Mishti jealous enough to admit her feelings but she was strong enough to resist this time. I'm sure as the story progresses though she will have a harder time resisting. Looking foward the next update.




Saf, thanks my sweet friend...yeah, with that line in bold you have hit upon what is bound to happen now...especially Mishti coming face to face with her son's secret wish.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: AmeTz

Aww !! Such a beautiful updates...👏👏👏

Oh poor Mishti...How could Ur yashji miss to feel his love's Sparsh !! Love tat Jealousy and possesive mishti...😆 who s madhu Btw?? Is she a sis of pari or Yash Fiance..😉😆
And love D last line...Papa Dont go" !! How both children desperately yearning for Papa and mamma..😭..
So touchy❤️ ...Continue soon di..😳😳




@AmeTz: Thank you.😊 Mishti is definitely heartbroken. She could never imagine that Yash could forget her sparsh.😭

Madhu is Pari's cousin. Yash used her presence to make Mishti jealous. Madhu had no idea she was being used. She is by nature an extrovert and overly exhibitive with emotions. She may harbor a crush for Yash...but all that she wanted from Yash now was his favor to further her career.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Amazing Update Indu 👏

Congratulations Indu, in this update You have Outdone Yourself.




Awww Sarada...thank you so much my friend.🤗 This really means a lot. Because if I mess this up now...when the story is at its most crucial stage...I'll only be failing not only myself but also you and everyone else here who have been unfailingly with me on this journey of Sparsh for the past month and a half.

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