Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: sidu12
amazing dear

Thanks Sidu.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: miti16295
you always make me speechless with ur writings..
so wonderfully written .
i love the kids in ur story they r so adorable .
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Thanks Miti...I too enjoy writing for the kids...😃

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: lulujjj
Oh that's a wonderful update Indu dear loved it to bits.

Thanks Naeema...Glad you approved. These are crucial phases in the story...and I get very nervous before clicking on the Post Reply button.😳

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#884

really good update dude so Yash was staring at Aarti's bare back... PERVERT!!!😛 {JK}

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#885

This is a great start to my Sunday morning. Words are starting to fall short to describe the feeling after reading your updates. I loved this part as Yash tried to make Mishti jealous enough to admit her feelings but she was strong enough to resist this time. I'm sure as the story progresses though she will have a harder time resisting. Looking foward the next update.

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Ammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#886

Aww !! Such a beautiful updates...👏👏👏

Oh poor Mishti...How could Ur yashji miss to feel his love's Sparsh !! Love tat Jealousy and possesive mishti...😆 who s madhu Btw?? Is she a sis of pari or Yash Fiance..😉😆

And love D last line...Papa Dont go" !! How both children desperately yearning for Papa and mamma..😭..

So touchy❤️ ...Continue soon di..😳😳