Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#891

Didi, I'm gonna crucify you for making me all tearful😭😭😭

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smileymj10

@smileymj10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#892

Good timing for a single soul here who's having a real life sentiments at this moment.. 😕😭

Anyway, that was another good chapter dear! 👍🏼
I can feel the pain that Mishti have inside, thinking about her Yashji..
Seeing him with another girl and thought that he forgot everything, her sparsh!

But destiny is always there to play.. And let the things put into the right place..

Loved the last line of Ansh "Papa, don't go.."

Looking forward for the next, loved it as always...

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RIYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#893

Well Indu ji what a update👏👏👏👏 another great piece of writiong will read again and update further⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#894

Wonderful indu dear 😳 The last part was superb but I feel sad for mishti.

I am so excited to see her reaction on ansh calling yash papa !!!

please continue soon sweety 😳

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Deepti1808

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Posted: 12 years ago

#895

@Indu: Grrr .. Yash ... he hurt Aarti.

But then he was sorry towards the end. I know he is only trying to make her accept the truth.

It is costing her a lot. Every ounce of self-control and then some to withstand the thought of Yash with someone else. Uff... bechari Aarti.

I am in love with your Aarti and Yash. I wish we could see this enacted somewhere. Big screen-small screen anywhere. It would be such a treat to watch. You have created a complete package all i see lacking in it is b/g score which i think i will add for myself when i read the next update. LOL.

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ns1970

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Posted: 12 years ago

#896

loved it as usual indu keep up the good job

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Sunrio80

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Posted: 12 years ago

#897

Wow it was amazing and awesome update. I love every part of this story turns me out craving for more.

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#898

Awesome Pal 👏 👏 👏

Ooh Mishti was so jealous and hurt when she heard Yahs on the phone in her office, Yash was so playing her 😛 😆 ...Awww I loved the way he took her hand and she felt as thou he didn't recognize her when it's just the contrary...he knows her better than before, he is just waiting for her to open up to him and say she is Mishti 😳 😳

Love the relationship between Ansh and Palak, they are too adorable ❤️...the last part with Ansh addressing Yash as papa and asking him not to go was just heartbreaking 😭 😳 😳

Can't wait for Mishti's reaction! 😃

Another beautifully written update, keep up the wonderful job Love 🤗

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doratalk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#899

Indu

I caught up with parts 9-12 and what can I say- your writing is so fabulous! I am just so glad your updates have been coming so quickly!!! I cannot wait for the next one! Great job!

Dora

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Pankhudi

@..Pankhudi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#900

oh this part was so touchy... 😭. i so love it😳. i really loved ansh and palak's phone conversation it was so cute 😳...since when they become so mature😆.

thanks for PM indu ... waiting for your next update/PM😳 !!!

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