Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 85

Originally posted by: RA17

Indu Ji Kya hai

I mean phele drama of aunties, then cuteness of Kid😃 then herione style ⭐️

thn here comes our Hero to save our herione😆😆

phir planning to get back to his love😉😉 n last not the Least jealosy concering her...😳😳😳

Pura update hi filmy tha such a rollar coaster ride

Oh Man kya likhte ho /... just awesome😆

👏

Ra ji...thank you ji...for so many claps ji. 🤗
Was it really that filmy?😳

Originally posted by: swaggerchick16

OH lord well I'm sure mishti is gonna be singing lyk a canary soon 😛😆

Thanks Kesha...Yeah, I guess so...Yash is cornering her fast and with an urgency.😳

Originally posted by: Sunrio80

It was a lovely and awesome update. Really love the character of Yash and Aarti's stubborness made the story more interesting. Looking forward for your next update. Thank you for the pm and Happy new year!😳

Thanks Sunrio. Appreciate your comments.😊

Originally posted by: Prasadini

Thank you, Prasadini.🤗 I wish I knew how to post images, then I could return your appreciation back in kind.😳

Originally posted by: KS1000

it's really getting too much interesting dear

love that palak part she is so cute girl and the way you handing those characters are very impressive

i love the way you showing each characters specially this part "walking slowly balancing a tray with a glass of water"

don't know why but i like this words very much

love the way yash saving his mishti from that man

have to say this is one of great story i had ever read in IF

and now i'm waiting for next update too

and thanx for the pm sweety🤗

Thanks KS.🤗 I am glad you are liking Palak's character...I'd want the kids to be important part of this story...and remain the kids that they are in their actions. 😊

Originally posted by: maha9

Wow wonderful part dear. So mishty is not able to see another girl talking to yash. Continue soon dear

Thanks Maha. 😊

Originally posted by: srirad

Wow..Great story👏👏..Interesting concept⭐️

all the updates are Amazing and wonderfully written..👍🏼

Beautifully portrayed the character of yash and aarti👏⭐️..Loved it

Eagerly waiting for next update

Thanks for pm😊

Srirad, thanks a lot for finding the story readable. Really appreciate it.😊

@Smiley (Barbie Doll): Thanks...The return gift is accepted with all the love it was given with. A beeeg hug to you from moi.🤗

Oh yes...you were the only one who guessed whose hand it was.😊 I am so glad you enjoyed those little instances.

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Wonderful update, Indu! 😛 Getting better and better...am waiting for the next one!

Happy New Year! Hope you write many more stories this year and that I get to read all of them! 🤗

Shobha, thank you.🤗 I am not sure about the bold part...I am not a prolific story writer...actually not much of one either. I am just enjoying doing something I love to do...and something that's become dear to my heart. I may not be able to conjure up another one...but then again, maybe I get an inspiration...and want to try my hand at another one...cannot say.😳 But thank you for showing so much faith in me.