Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 86

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi,my apologies for the late response to your PMs as i have been away and not logged in for a very long time...
My joy knew no bounds when i opened my inbox to find 4 updates on sparsh...it was like opening a late Christmas gift...

Now coming to the updates,

(8)
Love the way Yash was determined to find out who Ansh's mother is...And the way palak and Aarti bonded was so nice...
Only Aarti knows how she felt when she was told that Yash has never been married...and now according to his mother is too late as he also approves of the choosen girl...

"Yashji, I found you once….and lost you twice."...

It was like the sacrifice she thought she was making for Yash's happiness unknown to her is actually his cause of pain...

"Aarti beta…Yash Scindia is sitting in the Living room."...

I dont know what i would have gone through had i not been reading the updates together(a real cliffhanger)

(9)
Aarti is determined to make Yash stay away from her thinking yet again it's for his own good...
Ohhh,the way she kept each red rose he gave her safely in a wooden box and took it with her shows how much Aarti values him,his heart and anything related to him...just beautiful!
"STOP IT!!! Don't say that."
Mishti was taken aback with the sudden anger. He leaned forward, hands on the table.
"You know very well, nothing of that sort happened. Yes…a very grave tragedy occurred…you lost half your family at the hands of that bas***rd, but Mishti didn't die that day…. In fact she is here…now…sitting right in front of me, isn't she? Isn't she, Mishti?"
Mishti was too shocked to react."

Now Yash is 100% sure that it's his Mishti sitting in front of him,all he has to do is the very challenging task of making her to admit it...

(10)
Yash is going to have a hard time before Mishti actually gives in as she has a fit reply to all the questions thrown at her to make her admit and he actually liked the challenge...

"I asked first...so I deserve an answer first"
"Stubborn, aren't you"?
"I am waiting" .

I loved the way you brought this line out again as she once used it on him and now he is using it on her...moreover she replied exactly the same way he did...(wonderful)

The amused smirk he had on his face is because of the little hope she gave him when she sounded like a jealous cat before making a hasty retreat...
Even his little Palak is playing matchmaker together with Ansh...
What was Yash thinking when he suddenly announced that he is ready to get married but not to Mr Joshi's daughter...
How on earth is he going to convince his Mishti to agree in such a short duration?...so Aarti is going to be organizing her own wedding unknown to her...hmmm intresting!!!!
She should at least give him the benefit of the doubt as destiny is knocking at her door giving her a chance to be happy again...

(11)
Aarti has unknowingly given herself away and nothing she does or says is going to make Yash stay away from her now...
Love the way he made Aarti admit she kept the roses...and the magic of their first sparsh after so many years...
The possessive Yash totally rocked...
Ahhh, of course there has to be Maya were there is Prashant...it was so sad the way Aarti was treated...but I know Yash will make it up to her!!!

(12)
Coming to the lastest update,I don't know what to say anymore as the story keeps getting more intresting...
Love the innocent Aarti-Palak interaction...
Ohhh, this Ammaji is just as exasperating as pv's Taiji...
The entrance of the knight in shining armour to protect his lady love was outstanding...

"Of course we are sweetheart.I am so looking forward to this"

OMG,I am also so looking forward to the next part...What is Yash trying to do? responding to the girl in a husky voice...I bet he is going to make her so jealous that she will not even be aware when she finally blurts the truth out...

Tanx for the Pms...and heres wishing u a very happy and prosperous NEW YEAR!!

Ps: sorry for the long post








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Posted: 12 years ago
@Ummisco: No need for apologies, my friend. Story reading is an off-time relaxation...not something to be thrust upon. And this was vacation time for everyone. I am just glad that you not only came back to read Sparsh but also wrote me such a beautiful and comprehensive feedback. For that I am so grateful. I loved your comments...they made me feel so good. You picked some of my favorite parts as well...especially that repeat conversation...when Mishti caught on to Yash that he was trying to trap her. You are the only one who pointed that out. 😊


Thank you and a very happy new year to you too!!🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64






Ra ji...thank you ji...for so many claps ji. 🤗
Was it really that filmy?😳

No it was not filmy actually i was not geeting a correct word may be unlike you who r too good in casting each word.. all i was saying it was with lots of emotions which we humans feel is coming up as a beautiful update of this story...thanks you for writing such pieces...😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part XI

Enjoyed reading this one. 🤗

Yash is indeed a charmer ❤️. OMG, how badly he was instigating her..but she deserves that. 😃

He saw her open her eyes and wipe away her tears before getting up. He was about to turn back when she came back again and sat down….this time she had what looked like a small box in her hands. He looked on curiously as she kept the box on her lap and opened it. She put her hand in and very carefully picked up a bunch of flowers….dried flowers….roses…and very softly kissed them and then kept her cheek against them very gently, closing her eyes, smiling tenderly as she murmured something. Yash didn't realize that the moisture in his eyes had spilled over, as he smiled through the running droplets, "Thank you Mishti."
-- This is so beautiful, Indu. I was moved so much by the emotions behind the words that I felt like am watching them in front of my eyes.

"Wha…I mean Good morning…I mean...can't you ever talk straight?" (No…no…Mishti, don't let him rattle you. Remember your resolution of last night? Mature…proper…aloof….yes, that one…that resolution…) 😆😆

I had a smile on my face while reading the entire interaction between AarYa, Mr.Lamba and Neema.

Oh, Maya is here and that too MIL of Gayatri. But the last line retains my hope. 😊

Will be back after reading Part XII.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it dear , keep up soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part XII

Oh, it was Palak who stopped Mishti. You break our predictions mostly but what you give us is more beautiful and more natural. 👍🏼

I understand Maya's beliefs. Its difficult to change the mentality of such people unless they want to.

I loved how Yash stressed his views to his mom and grandmom. The conversation between AarYa after Yash hit Bunty should be my most favorite in this part. Palak is a sweetheart.

Kudos to Aarthi for fighting everyday against social stigma but still full of life and optimism. Huge applause for this Aarthi and lot of other women like her in this world. 👏 👏

So what game Yash is playing now?? Aarthi - You are gone. 😃

Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Morris: Thanks pal...I look forward to your comments. About Aarti/Mishti, I did want to stress in these parts the kind of hardships she is facing just because she has to work for a living and is a widow (by circumstances).

It would be very easy for Yash to blow apart her subterfuge, but he doesn't want to upset whatever reasons she is functioning under...his respect for her is holding him back. Hence, the only recourse left for him is to make her spell out herself...after which he can take that final step toward her.


@Kholita: Thank you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for PM indu ...😳 update soon !!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Pankhudi: Thank you...😊

Is that your baby's pic in the DP? He/she is so adorable.❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




Thanks Kesha...Yeah, I guess so...Yash is cornering her fast and with an urgency.😳


with an urgency??😛🤣

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