Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 83

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Great job Indu! I enjoyed reading this chapter. Sorry I can't post much, I don't have much time right now.

Thanks Saffi...and a special thanks for taking time off from studies to read and comment.🤗

Originally posted by: Zetter

Wonderful update Pal 👏 👏 👏...hehe I love how Yash is going all out to make Mishti come clean by making her jealous 😛 😉

Awww Palak was so adorable the way she hugged Mishti 😳 😳 Maya needs to get used to the idea of seeing Aarti cause she will be the Scindias' bahu soon if Palak and Yash have anything to say about it 😃

Yash coming to Mishti's rescue like was beautifully done and I love the employees reactions as well.

keep up the great writing 🤗

@Zet: Thanks...oh, the man is on a mission and is trying every trick in the trade.
I am glad you found that Bunty part OK...Yash is finding out the kind of problems Mishti faces in her life because of the life she has chosen for herself. He is trying to be there for her now...in any which way he can.

Keep posting these words, my friend...they are my booster doses. 🤗

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Indu you're just mind blowing I tell you..
Such a superb update
The emotions running through Mishti after being insulted by dadi was fabulous..
I absolutely loved the last part when her hands fisted in her dupatta..JEALOUSY!!! loved the way you penned that part down.. It was just one line but it gave the oomph of a hundred beautifully written ones.
I really don't know how to praise you any more than this. I can't seem to muster the words deserving enough to praise your Sparsh.. Each part has left me more spell bound then the previous one and that Indu is what I call excellent writing. You draw your readers deeper and deeper with each part, making me beg for more. I always anticipate for an update and when I saw it today, I was literally smiling and bouncing in joy. Thank you for writing Sparsh. It's definitely one of the most beautiful stories I have read.

Here is another big and tight hug from me..🤗

Sheema...aha, there's my hug. 🤗I have come to expect them as much as I have come to look forward to your appreciation.Your words make me feel so good...every single time. I have mentioned earlier also...this love is what I'll carry of in the sunset when Sparsh ends. Already it has crossed the number of parts I had in mind...Goes to show how inexperienced I was in judging how many parts it will take. I could finish "Our Life" in three parts...but Sparsh seems to beg for a little more.😳

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome Update Indu 👏 👏

Every Part of the story is getting better and better.

Sarada, thank you so much🤗 ...we are in a very crucial stage part of the story. I only pray that I don't falter now and disappoint you and everyone here.😕

Originally posted by: padmavar

Awesome update. TFS.

Thanks Padma. 😊

Originally posted by: lulujjj

Indu an another wonderful write up dear, the story its getting better and better , poor Palak cried when mishti left made my heart ache , mishti is getting more jealous i am loving it common yash go.

Naeema, thanks. I am really happy that you like the little instances that make the story.😊

Originally posted by: rutu83

oh good job yash 👏 he figured out

but that sweetheart oaf is gonna make his mishti jealous huh😆

i loved his response to when she corrected him with prateek's name. awww❤️

Rutu, thanks. You liked that name dropping...eh! How do you know that Yash didn't do it on purpose?😉 😃

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous part. Yash will take care of his Mishti on the harsh paths of life.

Thanks Shashi...Yup, you caught the crux of Yash's efforts. He has realized that Mishti's hasn't exactly been a bed of rose petals...but more like path strewn with thorns...so he is trying to make life easy for her as much as possible.😃

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

Beautiful update👏👏. And what a turn with Palak holding her hands and stopping her from going👍🏼... i thought it was going to be Yash...

I loved every scene of Yash and Aarti esp. both of them with Palak too. It is going to be cute little family of four. Mishti is burning in the fire of jealousy and Yash knows exactly what he has been doing and why😉. It will be fun to watch if she follows him to see who the girl is...

These lines are so true

"what's it with my girls and hands on the hips'first Arpita, then Princess, and now my adorable Mishti")🤣🤣🤣.

waiting for the meet with that girl😉😛...

@Ash: Thanks my dear🤗...Oh yes, Yash is setting her up alright. He is in a hurry now. People like his dadi and Bunty have alerted him to the gravity of the problems Mishti faces in daily life...apart from taking care of an invalid father and a small son. So Yash is following "It's all fair in love and war" adage now...just so Mishti discloses her self to him asap.😊