Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

First Previous

Page

107

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Banana

@Mr.Chief

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#611

This is great! Loved the update

Quote

Zetter

@Zetter

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#612

Well you did again Pal 👏 👏 👏...I love the confrontation in the cafe, they were trying to outsmart each other the push and pull dialogue between them was to awesome but Mishti thought she had the last word when she dropped that bomb about the double wedding on Yash but little did she know that he would the one to have the last say 😛 😆

Though I know he hated hurting her hat way but like he said she didn't leave any choice...Could those two precious angels be anymore sweeter Palak and Ansh are the perfect cupids 😳 ❤️

Glad that SP give his consistent without hesitating and that Aarti's dad was trying to persuade to tell Yash the truth and that his family would accept her 😃

Can't wait for more 😉

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

Ashwatha

@ashGC_arja

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#613

The first post i read today as soon as i logged in is "Sparsh"... You just made my day with this fantastic update👏👏👏...

Mishti has been cornered and she does not know it only... How cute these two angels are Ansh and Palak i so love them...

The cafe conversation was the best... Every time he came with a reason to prove her as Mishti that many times she had also defended herself proving him wrong. But Mishti does not know that it is not all and how much ever hard she may try to move away from him that much hard he will bring her closer to him.

Waiting for the next one... Once again beautiful update

Quote

1HappyGrl

@1HappyGrl

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#614

Indu, what are you doing to my emotions, my friend? 👏 The opening interplay between Misthi/Aarti and Yash is so good.

"Uffo papa….He knows because we are going to props to his mumma. He likes you very much…so I told him he can call you papa too. We were talking on phone, and he said you promised to teach him karate. You are the best papa (hugging him)."

Yash hugged her automatically…His eyes were glistening and a soft smile played on his lips……"Mishti…you can't fight our destiny."

If you could see the big smile I have on my face reading that. 😃 Palak is the cutest thing.

And then this part after he's told his family he's ready to get married, but not to Mansi:

Just as she had settled down at her daily night spot, the phone rang. It was him.

"Good evening Aartiji!! It seems you were right. I have some very happy news to share with you. I am getting married!!"

He stood leaning against his car and watched her keep the phone down slowly, throwing her head back against the wall, eyes shut tight in pain…..hands on her heart…a picture of abject resignation. He tightened his fists by his side.

"I am sorry, Mishti. You left me with no other option."

Oh my word, Yash is good! He's got his plan in motion and I like his confidence in the execution (albeit a little "creepy", lol, watching her from his car). I'm excited to see your next installment. 😃

Quote

Shashi1984

@Shashi1984

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#615

Fabulous part. Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

Quote

nirmala

@nirmalac99

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#616

nice update di...atlas mishti get caught...😎

Quote

Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#617

@Vanny: It's Ok...take your time. I'll be right here...🤗

Quote

Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#618

Originally posted by: salvatore-nina
Indu another fantastic and long update! I love Palak, she's so adorable. I can't wait to see how Yash gets his Mishti to realize that her destiny lies with him, that they are meant to be! Looking forward to the next update!

@Nina: Thanks. Kids are always the best motivators...because in their innocence they always do the right thing. Mishti is no different from our PV Aarti in the sense that in trying to do the right thing she is hurting the one person who would have stood by her no matter what and made things go her way.

Quote

MelodiousDreams

@MelodiousDreams

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#619

Apologizing in advance for the outburst...

I LOVE this story! Palak and Ansh are such sweethearts, bless them! Mishti and her determination (and those pangs of jealousy!) And Yash...Oh, that phone call at the end...Aaah, can't wait for the next update!!!

*Reserved*