Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 64

Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Fabulous part. Loved it. Thanks for the PM.

Thank you, Shashi.😊

Originally posted by: nirmalac99

nice update di...atlas mishti get caught...😎

Thank you, Nirmala. Well...Yash was pretty sure from the beginning itself.😊

Originally posted by: pvejani

awsome👏👏👏

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams

Apologizing in advance for the outburst...

I LOVE this story! Palak and Ansh are such sweethearts, bless them! Mishti and her determination (and those pangs of jealousy!) And Yash...Oh, that phone call at the end...Aaah, can't wait for the next update!!!

*Reserved*

@Borna: I love you for being with me throughout...I've kind of come to rely on your hand at the back. 🤗

Originally posted by: Alamelu

fantastic...now you have me on the edge of the chair...i cannot wait for the next update to see what yash has instore for mishty...

@Alamelu: Thank you. Stay with me...🤗

fantastic update loved this one also superb dear

Another amazing update, dear! 👏👏👏 You know what, I read your updates v-e-r-y slowly because I never want the update to end..😆 Reading the words, taking it in, imagining it happen it front of me(which is very easy owing to your wonderful writing style, the way you describe everything in complete detail with even the nuances of expression on the faces of the characters is praiseworthy), thinking it over and reacting to it is a beautiful experience...😃

I absolutely love those pieces of poetry that you incorporate at the beginning. Those lines just set the mood right for the next whirlwind of a ride...😉
I loved how Aarti reacted to the situation... just the way she would... Not giving up... A fighter.😆 And oh, Yash!! 😆😆 He is too smart... He has understood his Mishti perfectly... I loved the way he tried to put her in a fix at every step... wanting to shake hands, huh?😉 But Mishti escaped this time... Next time, I don't think Yash will let her go free...😳

I love Palak... She is cho chweet...🤗 Unknowingly bringing them together... Awww..😳
Another thing I love about your writing is : every character acts according to their age... I can imagine those dialogues coming from Palak or from Aarti's father... Just perfect...

And the ending is again nail-biting...😛 But I love it. Thank you so much...🤗

another heart warming update so beautifully written. Thanks a lot for the PM.

Originally posted by: smiley20

fantastic update loved this one also superb dear

Thank you.😊