Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 60

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

but at the end she is a girl who is insanely in love with her man...so there is bound to be a rattling in the heart on hearing that he is considering another girl.😉


I am always like that i tend to get involved in the story so much, become all the more excited and end up thinking about it all the time😆...
thanks a lot for that cute comment and i have always seen u take to each and everyone's comment and reply them personally... its really very sweet about u😳.
@bold... That's right after all she loves him with all her life and this is surely bound to disturb her. I hope Yash takes this chance to irritate her a little😉😆



@Ash: (Bold) That's so sweet. You reminded me of the story periods I used to take in Class II in a school I taught for awhile. They had two periods per week, and I used to narrate these stories that would carry on for quite a few periods. Before continuing, I'd ask them about where we had ended last, and they would not only repeat verbatim but also come out with plausible scenarios. Kids are amazing.

As for answering everybody personally, that's the least I can do...find some time for the readers who take time out to read Sparsh.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64



@Ash: (Bold) That's so sweet. You reminded me of the story periods I used to take in Class II in a school I taught for awhile. They had two periods per week, and I used to narrate these stories that would carry on for quite a few periods. Before continuing, I'd ask them about where we had ended last, and they would not only repeat verbatim but also come out with plausible scenarios. Kids are amazing.

As for answering everybody personally, that's the least I can do...find some time for the readers who take time out to read Sparsh.😊


How sweet... kids are really amazing. Along with them, they take us to in for a joy ride that we never know the time gone by... making us forget anything and everything.
Fiction stories too always make us involve so much into it that neither we realise the time spent nor the place we last left and end up reading the same thing again and again😛...
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Thank you.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

"You know very well, nothing of that sort happened. Yes…a very grave tragedy occurred…you lost half your family at the hands of that bas***rd, but Mishti didn't die that day…. In fact she is here…now…sitting right in front of me, isn't she? Isn't she, Mishti?"

Mishti was too shocked to react.

😲 Indu, you managed to do it again -- keep me at the edge of my seat. Literally! Fantastic update! 👏 I'm eager to know how the scene continues, my friend.
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Thank you.😊
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Originally posted by: 1HappyGrl

"You know very well, nothing of that sort happened. Yes'a very grave tragedy occurred'you lost half your family at the hands of that bas***rd, but Mishti didn't die that day'. In fact she is here'now'sitting right in front of me, isn't she? Isn't she, Mishti?"

Mishti was too shocked to react.

😲 Indu, you managed to do it again -- keep me at the edge of my seat. Literally! Fantastic update! 👏 I'm eager to know how the scene continues, my friend.




@Jac: Thanks. Glad you approved. 😊Let's see whether I am able to put the next one up before the next weekend.
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Thank you.😊
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Originally posted by: bhuvana90

eagerly waiting...indu...

you were awesome...!!!!!1




Thanks Bhuvana.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

At last!! I got the chance to read your update!!!
Sorry for the late response Indu dear... ☺️
Been busy with the holiday celebration...

Do I have something to say more?? Can I just say "I hate you" for once??!! LOL, as much as I want to but I can't!! I have no reason to do that... The love I have here for u and ur writing is going deeper everytime I read your story... Geez!!! How could you do this to me... Hahaha!!!! 😆

Anyway, kidding aside, you did another stupendous writings dear!!!
I loved how Yash became a good friend to Ansh... Not only that, they're gonna meet again!

The part where Mishti invited Yash to a cafe really makes me feel excited and in my mind saying, "Oh, please let them meet"...
Am just glad it happened!

And the last part, oh Indu, you keep us hanging again, but I love it!!
Wonder what Aarti/Mishti will do in order to defend herself to aggressive Yash...

This is very interesting, love it more and more...


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Posted: 12 years ago
@Smiley: Thank you, pal. No part is complete without your Barbie Doll comments...Those comments made my day. Love you back...🤗

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