Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 63

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Indu loved this update also. The story is becoming more and more interesting after each update. I swear if it was a novel I would have finished it in one sitting, or else have read the ending first after just few chapters, to know how they will confess to each other ( sorry I am a very impatient person 😆 )

Yay Yashji knows that she is his Mishti. Loved how he was testing her and Aarti being so strong won't admit so easily. Yash knows his Mishti is ziddi, she won't give in so easily.

Loved how cute little Palak is 🤗. The conversation between Palak and Yash was sooo loving.

And our Yashji has become a stalker, 😆. For he was standing right outside Aarti's window when he called her at Night Awesome work once again.👏

Thanks for updating so soon.

@Nikki: Thanks😊...Well, the battle of wills has begun. Hmmm...a stalker? I thought it was more like his wanting to be there when he broke the news...to silently share her pain. Plus now he knows she sits there every night, so he waited for her to come and then called her.

Originally posted by: saf24

Gosh Indu I simply love the way this is turning out. Each chapter is better than the previous one. Can't wait to see what you churn out next. Fantastic job 🤗

@Saf: Thanks. Your words mean a lot to me.🤗

Originally posted by: rutu83

even w broken fingers i have to write this: loved it- and the last part.... momentarily, i was feeling her pain. feeling the pain of a fictional character as strongly - THAT's writing. unbelivable...👏

edit:btw, can i just say your writing is exceptional? u used one of my fav words- profundity 👍🏼⭐️. yes, i'm a nerd😃

@Rutu: Thanks...for your appreciation as well as for pointing out a blatant error.😳

I am so grateful to you that in spite of your hurt and grave discomfort you took the effort to pen down these sweet words. I am just so overwhelmed.🤗

Originally posted by: SAnonymous

Awesome Update Indu

Yash will work out things with Mishti. He is determined to bring back Mishti into his life.

The next update is becoming more interesting.

Indu you have kept us all Spellbound with your Superb Narration of Sparsh

Please update the next part soon

@SAnonymous: Thanks...I am just satisfied that the narration is not jarring to you and you like the pacing. There's not much left in the story, except the final thrust. Hopefully I won't disappoint you toward the later part.Thanks for being there.🤗

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

Mind blowing as usual Indu.. I read all the parts once again in one go and Indu trust me when I say, you're a born writer. Everything fell into place so perfectly and the naration was just superb. There were no gaps, breaks, nothing. It was more than a pleasure to read. I just love the way the story unfolds itself one part after another and I was entirely transfixed to each and every part. Fantastic job and here's another humongous hug from me to a brilliant writer...🤗

@Sheema: Thanks...Hey, tell me honestly, did you really mean it when you said you didn't find any break in the flow when you read the earlier parts? I am always so apprehensive regarding that. I have not even visited them, except to pick up lines for flashback. Your words gave me such relief...And the hug is very much awaited now after each part...taken and returned...🤗

Originally posted by: J.M.Singh

This is great! Loved the update

Thank you.😊

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Sheema: Thanks...Hey, tell me honestly, did you really mean it when you said you didn't find any break in the flow when you read the earlier parts? I am always so apprehensive regarding that. I have not even visited them, except to pick up lines for flashback. Your words gave me such relief...And the hug is very much awaited now after each part...taken and returned...🤗

Yup I really mean what I said.. It's really well connected from one part to another. I've already start compiling it and read it like a book.. There were no "uh wait where did this come from or how did this get there" so it was really good. It's like you wrote everything at once then just broke it into parts for us to read. It was awemazing (awesome + amazing).. can't wait to use the word legendary when you finish this story..😆

Originally posted by: Zetter

Well you did again Pal 👏 👏 👏...I love the confrontation in the cafe, they were trying to outsmart each other the push and pull dialogue between them was to awesome but Mishti thought she had the last word when she dropped that bomb about the double wedding on Yash but little did she know that he would the one to have the last say 😛 😆

Though I know he hated hurting her hat way but like he said she didn't leave any choice...Could those two precious angels be anymore sweeter Palak and Ansh are the perfect cupids 😳 ❤️

Glad that SP give his consistent without hesitating and that Aarti's dad was trying to persuade to tell Yash the truth and that his family would accept her 😃

Can't wait for more 😉

@Zet: Ah...I am so glad you approved of the Cafe convo.🤗That bit was important for Mishti to make her stand clear and for Yash to put a seal on any misgiving regarding her identity. It was supposed to be Mishti coming away thinking she succeeded when actually she did the opposite...made him sure. As for Yash, he knows he has to draw her out, because he knows how stubborn she can be once she has decided on something. He had rattled her hoping she'll make mistakes. Let's see how this proceeds.

Well it's like Mishti's little family...all three of them...are ready to embrace her, if only she got out of her moral wagon.😛

Originally posted by: ashGC_arja

The first post i read today as soon as i logged in is "Sparsh"... You just made my day with this fantastic update👏👏👏...

Mishti has been cornered and she does not know it only... How cute these two angels are Ansh and Palak i so love them...

The cafe conversation was the best... Every time he came with a reason to prove her as Mishti that many times she had also defended herself proving him wrong. But Mishti does not know that it is not all and how much ever hard she may try to move away from him that much hard he will bring her closer to him.

Waiting for the next one... Once again beautiful update

@Ash: Thank you.🤗
Yup...Mishti thinks her secret is safe and that Yashji's doubts are all cleared up. She was prepared with her responses because she knew that there are chances of meeting Yash when she was transferred to Bhopal...and so she was readying herself all these days. She totally underestimated Yash's awareness of her that he had imbibed in his blind state.

Originally posted by: 1HappyGrl

Indu, what are you doing to my emotions, my friend? 👏 The opening interplay between Misthi/Aarti and Yash is so good.

If you could see the big smile I have on my face reading that. 😃 Palak is the cutest thing.

And then this part after he's told his family he's ready to get married, but not to Mansi:

Oh my word, Yash is good! He's got his plan in motion and I like his confidence in the execution (albeit a little "creepy", lol, watching her from his car). I'm excited to see your next installment. 😃

Hey Jac...I am glad the interactions are not jarring the readers' sensibilities. You and everyone here are being such great support by giving me such awesome feedbacks that I don't know what to say at times. I almost wish for someone to tell me "What the hell...that didn't make any sense or that the flow was shaky"...so that I can work on the flaw.

I enjoyed writing the Palak/Yash interaction the most. That was playing in my mind at the same time as I was writing...so you can say it is a close to a reality show as one can envision. 😊
As for Yash, he just wanted to be close to her when he hurt her...😳