Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Kesha_H.

@Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#491

hmmm... awesome update so Aarti finally found out tht Yash was never married and he is gng to get married to some khandaani girl... hmm intereresting😊

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kdsubs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#492

@Indu - lovely. Sigh - i had quite a bit to catch up to and they made such lovely reading. Arpita as Yash's best friend makes total sense - i really liked the twist with that. And did Yash just find a way to send his parents' to clear any misconceptions Mishti had? Really liking the flow and weave here Indu - but then you are a master story-teller.

Not sure when i can catch up with your future updates. Still not well enough, so am rarely coming online. Do let me know when you update though and i will eventually make my way here.

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Morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#493

Part 6

🥳 This is for self-appreciation. Palak is not Yash's biological daughter. This is something I believed in from the time we know about Palak. Very rarely my guess comes true. So a small celebration. 😃 😆

Arpita is Yash's friend and she helped him to live with Aarthi's feelings.

"I won't marry you, Yashu...I won't do to Mishti what Gaurav did to me...and I won't let you also."

-- Even in her terrible situation she thinks of her friend's happiness. What a beautiful heart she has!! I am so touched and proud about Yash's decision for her and her baby.

Aarthi avoids talking to and shaking hands with him so he could not recognise her. What about your eyes, Aarthi?? Yash who could read them through his heart/soul when he was without sight, dont you think he'll easily connect to you through them now. See dint I tell you? Your eyes, your hair and your presence near him, everything about you is already invoking his inexplicable feelings which were dormant all these years.

Loved the bond between Neema and Aarthi. Its difficult to get friends who'll just stand by you in times of your need without questioning/judging you. So I liked Neema's presence.

Both Yash and Aarthi had/have wonderful people around them. They both are such wonderful people so should not be surprised with this but really happy for them.

Aarthi Y. Dubey?? - Has she taken Yash as her middle name?

Will be back after reading the remaining parts. 😃

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Morris

@morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#494

Part 7

BEAUTIFUL, Indu. 🤗 🤗

Oh Yash has built her dream villa. The way Aarthi told about the tower to Yash reminded me of another novel that I read during my college days. Though I dont remember the title or characters names now, I always remember that story. Tower which is a pleasant memory here is more of love with mystery there. Both the instances tell me the pain of the heroines. May be falling in love comes with both pleasure and pain. Sorry, I think I got carried away.

That's when he noticed her in the lawn, Aarti Dubey, looking up at the building. He stood transfixed as he saw her slowly take in the view from one end to the other…and then something happened. She stood still and then her eyes looked over the roof…as if seeking something. He saw her stagger back…and automatically his hand reached out and touched the window….

I loved this part especially the bold one where Yash could feel her though still unsure of her identity.

Both the kids are friends. Aarthi - Our Yashji heard your voice:).

Will be back after reading Part 8. 😊

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Morris

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Posted: 12 years ago

#495

Part 8

Oh no, another misunderstanding on the way. 😕 I almost thought they'll meet this time. It looks like I should wait for some more time.

Gayatri, Gayatri - "...but either the family was not up to the mark or the girl was either a widow or a divorcee... She belongs to a khandaani family and is an only child. She is perfect as the elder Scindia bahu….Yash too approves of her." Did anyone ask her about Yash's approval? Then some people dont need others permission to express their opinions. 😳

I loved the para where Yash drinks her sight on windowsill from distance and how Aarthi's heart suffered knowing his loss though she herself was going thru a lonely life. Sometimes distance never matters when the hearts could always feel each other.

And what to tell about my kids. 🤗 🤗

They both grinned at that and shook hands with her in the cozy deal….Palak gave a tight goodbye hug and kiss to Mishti. "I really love this Aunty," Palak thought as she looked at Mishti with worshipping eyes, "Why can't papa make her my mumma? She is sweet, she is fun, and she doesn't get angry. I shall have to talk to papa about it!!"

Children see complicated things in such a simple way due to their innocence. Loved the bold lines more. Why to think about the consequences, worry whether it will happen or not..'she likes Aarthi so she should talk to her dad about making her as her mom.' Such a simple and straightforward matter na..we elders twist everything and cry. Lets see what Aarthi does.

Please continue soon. 😊

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Mahalakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#496

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Maha: The dancing Mishti is such a doll...I love it. Thanks a ton. 🤗

welcome dear 😳

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Indu Ghosh

@InduG64

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Posted: 12 years ago

#497

Originally posted by: J.M.Singh
Nice update ! You are a great writer

Thanks J.M. It feels good to have your support after each part,

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#498

Originally posted by: Prasadini
Lovely work again my sweet indu😛

Aww...a baby Santa!! Thank you so so...so much Prasadini for such a cute, festive gift...complete with mistletoe and candle and the trademark bell, and the sweet Santa smile...🤗

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#499

Originally posted by: lulujjj
@Indu Wonderful write up dear loved it yash going in search of his
misti , and the convo between the senior scindias and the
mam. Insha Allah waiting for the next part please update
soon.

@Naeema: Thank you my friend. I appreciate you commenting after each part...You have no idea what a huge morale booster that is to me.😃

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#500

Originally posted by: doratalk
Gooose bumps- Indu! Loved it. And I couldn't resist reading it in the middle of a very busy workday! 😕 Waiting for Part IX! 😃👏👏

@Dora: Whoa! I made you play truant...😃 You deserve a beeeg hug for flouting rules for moi. 🤗 Thank you so much