Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130)

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#471

Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Oh gosh! The updates are beautiful.. Story getting awesome and interesting! I can't wait anymore for the next update! So, please update ASAP! 😛

Thanks Isya... Give me a couple of days. I was somewhat drained out with this one.😊

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#472

Originally posted by: saf24
Gosh Indu that was simply a beautiful update. I love how the truth is being revealed to both Yash and Aarti. This was a perfect start to my morning 🤗. Your writing never ceases to amaze me.

@Saf: I consider this an honor that I could elicit such an unusually. eloquent response from you. Thank you. Love you back.🤗

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Indu Ghosh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#473

Originally posted by: nirmalac99
it was a wonderful line...found once and lost twice...felt very bad 4 mishti😭...Thanks for PM di...

Thanks Nirmala. 😊

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Mahalakshmi

@maha9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#474

Wow wonderful dear yash finally

found his mishti

But poor mishti shocked to hear yash's marriage news.

Please continue soon dear

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 12 years ago

#475

Yes I'm loving it very very much 😃

It's the battle between his mind and his heart where is heart is gonna win in the end 😉

Really excited about the next chapter ❤️

Keep up the great job Love 🤗

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thechoice

@thechoice

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Posted: 12 years ago

#476

Hi Indu. Logged in here after so long and got the treat of the day!!!! You are such a gifted writer...you really should do professional writing.

This story is so so so so so brillant. I read all the parts at one go and now I am craving for more. I love the way you have weaved this tale...I felt the tremblings of love, anticipation of wait, pain of separation and hope all in the 20-30 mins it took me to read all the parts!!!!!

You are a genius for sure. I must have missed so much of your writing in DC...I am sooo annoyed with myself now.

I hope you will be updating the story soon...cant wait for their first meeting heehee

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Ahandu

@AngeloScuro

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Posted: 12 years ago

#477

I remember reading books of long ago where every chapter starts with a poem. Love how each poem reflects in each chapter!

I thought I had commented here but my power got cut that day and I forgot to come back to comment here.

Just like the phone slipped out of Yash's hand he will remember that he will need to pick up the phone from where it fell : so shall he have to pick up his life!

So far such a beautiful story!

Edited by AngelDark - 12 years ago

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Banana

@Mr.Chief

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Posted: 12 years ago

#478

Nice update ! You are a great writer

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rutu83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#479

Originally posted by: InduG64

Your wish...my command!!!😛 Thanks. How's the hand? Take care.

😃 hand hurts

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#480

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Saf: I consider this an honor that I could elicit such an unusually. eloquent response from you. Thank you. Love you back.🤗

@ Indu: As I've said before if you ever decide to write a book make sure you let me know so I can get my hands on a copy 🤗