Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 33

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Posted: 12 years ago

I couldn't resist myself😆 and plus,I have an easy exam tomorrow,so I can have some time of my own.😉Just read the second part and What!...So,there are two Aarthis,one is our Aarthi/Mishti and the second one is Aman's wife.Prashant,why always,he is the troublemaker.And,our Aarthi,can do anything for her Yashji.Mishti's past is so interesting,it started of as a sad one,but getting the love of Mother/sister.Mishti,I love this name,you have given our Aarthi,totally apt.You're a Bengali,right?Indu Ghosh! Our science teacher,was a bengali and her favourite sweet dish was,Mishti Dohi.Fabuous update,Indu...This is superb! 👏

Now,off to read part 3.😉


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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo

OMG Indu...where do I even begin with... It was just fantastic. I was wondering how aarti would hide who she really is from Yash and you penned it out amazingly. Aarti Y. Dubey!!! Does the Y stands for Yash?? I really feel it does.

Spectacularly written and please please please update soon.




@Sheema: Thank you. The sweet words are a huge support...Believe me, I am constantly apprehensive whether what I want to convey will get through to the reader or not. Your observation is my appreciation.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Pearl: You catch up...and then I'll follow up on your responses. I am glad you liked Part II. My daughter's pet name is Mishtu...so I didn't have to go far for the name.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 3...Mishti dies,what?! You seriously had me with this one,I know,Mishti is alive,but really eager to know,what happened.I love this,I so love this,Indu!👏 You are spectacular.I just read your reply to Borna and trust me,I feel the same way with my story.First of all,it started,just like that...and after the first update,I didn't know what I'll come up with next or what I am gonna do with the story,and then that,insecurity that how will people react to it.


P.S I am so glad that I am reading,these parts now,because otherwise,I would have gone mad with the curiosity.🤣So many Questions!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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P.S I am so glad that I am reading,these parts now,because otherwise,I would have gone mad with the curiosity.🤣So many Questions!



@Pearl: Yeah...I realize now that I was a little hard on everyone...but the characterizations were such that I couldn't unfold all at one go...Thankfully, from Part VII till the end, the story will be in set in the present...so everyone has breathed a sigh of relief...including moi..😉 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4 I have to read it two times,It kinda confused me...or I was not able to get it.But now I am clear...Yash is married,another loop! Mrs D is Aarthi/Mishti...but why Mrs? I know the answer...Read the next part.


Mishti is such a sweet name for your daughter and I know,it totally suits her.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: InduG64




@Sheema: Thank you. The sweet words are a huge support...Believe me, I am constantly apprehensive whether what I want to convey will get through to the reader or not. Your observation is my appreciation.😃


Apprehensive?? don't ever be.. You convey your thoughts so precisely that I can imagine what is happening as if it's right in front of me. Continue the great job..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 5,made things clear! Wow!! This is the word,for your writing....Indu! Fantabulous!👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
@Sheema: Aww...thanks pal. 🤗



@Pearl: Oh Goody!! You are with me till now...Great! And thank you so much...🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb,Fabulous,Fantastic and all the praising words for you for this latest update! Indu,I am totally into it now,and trust me...this was one of the best piece of writing I have ever read.

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