Sparsh (An SS)--- Part XIV (Pg 130) - Page 32

@Zet: Thanks...and thank God...I am so relieved. I was so skeptical about this one...This was all about touch of friendship. Mishti and Arpita made sparsh with each other through Yash...They got to know and respect each other through him...

This was almost like why I love you, or Kadeen, or Borna, or all the friends I have made here...beautiful persons whom I know not by their faces but by the touch of their words, by the feel of the warmth behind those words. Why do you think we all rush to the forum at the first instnce, even though we all have flourishing family and social life in the real world. It's for that special sparsh... 😊

Love you for loving it...🤗



@Saf: Thank you so much my silent friend. Your one word of appreciation is worth many drops in an ocean. 🤗


@lovely_nikki: Thank you...Oh, I hate separations too...so I am patient with the ones I come across as long as there's an eternal union at the end.😃


@elanpremi: Thanks...I am trying to update at least twice a week. 😊

Ahhh...so finally we have gotten the answers to our questions!!!"where the one beside him was a stranger...and the one behind was not. Hold on! Where did that come from? Yash suddenly realized the feeling that had hit him when he had first looked at Mrs Aarti Dubey...and that was of familiarity...as if he had known her from before. But why?"

"He halted and slowly turned around..."

@Kadeen: Thank you so much, lil sis. I am speechless...I don't know what to say to the fantabulous feedback, except that I am touched...very touched. You were in my head, Kadeen...you were with me every step of the way with the feel of the conversation ...you pointed at nuances I felt while writing. I know you will know what I mean when I say, "While writing Sparsh, I don't plan, I don't think, I don't even know what happens next...situations happen, Yash reacts, Aarti reacts, the others pitch in as I go along...It's strange in many ways." Thus, the first part happened as I wrote along...it was the most instinctive dialog I must've written...and it went nonstop...Your analysis on each sentence was spot on...You made me happy, and I love you for that.🤗

The intro part of your response was mindblowing. 👏I loved your write-up on Sparsh...and I agree to all of that. Of course, I knew of the twins case, but to hear it in context here made me emotional. This brilliant feedback has humbled me. You have given me more than I deserved...I am looking forward to the other parts...Take your time...😊




@Rutu: I have to thank you especially for the name error. My apologies...I know how jarring to senses such errors are.😳



@Ash: Thank you, my friend. Isn't it quaint that of all the things it is the senses that are playing the cupid here? As you pointed out, all of Yash's senses are on high alert...yet the mind blocks the obvious.😊

I'll let you know in the next update why she goes by the name Aarti Y Dubey.😃

Beautiful part dear Make yash and arthi united soon dear

@Aditi: Thanks...Yeah, Yash's heart has already recognized. He just has to connect the dots now, and he'll know his subconscious was already aware of Mishti.😊


@Deepti: Thanks...Aha, you may call them mahaan, but they look upon these kids as their own, and not some obligation. Glad you liked this part of sparsh.😊



@Isya, elanpremi, custodian: Thank you so much. I really appreciate that you took time out to comment. 😊



@Dora: Thanks...You are so right. This can't go on forever...she will have to look for another way out.😃

@Naeema: Thank you. 🤗You summed this part beautifully in this sentence of yours...<<...but the fragrance and air they have no restrictions they have joined their hands for a good cause, to bring them closer.>>

Mishti thinks her exposure will disrupt his family life...What she doesn't know is that she is the family he so aspires for.😊



@Nirmala: Thank you...😊


@Shobha: Thanks...Which sparsh did you mean my friend? "Touch is memory"...remember?This could be the touch of voice, breath, fragrance...anything.😊


@Maha: Thank you...😊


@ummisco: Thanks pal. The hand of destiny is indeed unfolding. Yash is getting all sorts of signals...he just needs to decode them.😃

@Indu Thanks for your compliment i get such ideas very rarely.

OMG Indu...where do I even begin with... It was just fantastic. I was wondering how aarti would hide who she really is from Yash and you penned it out amazingly. Aarti Y. Dubey!!! Does the Y stands for Yash?? I really feel it does.

Originally posted by: InduG64

@Shobha: Thanks...Which sparsh did you mean my friend? "Touch is memory"...remember?This could be the touch of voice, breath, fragrance...anything.😊

Originally posted by: ssroomani

Even if it is something intangible, it would be "sparsh" which leads to recognition! 😛

@Shobha: Aha...now we are on the same wavelength. Anyway, I totally get what you mean...but shshh...😛