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Deepti1808

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Posted: 13 years ago

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@Kat: WOW !!!!!

How brilliantly you captured Sneha's emotions.

I felt sorry for her.

I could understand her being distant from Aarti.

Only yesterday i was telling someone how i could not think about Aarti and Aman in that way but when you said it in the story above even that made sense.

Great work Loved it

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Sunrio80

@Sunrio80

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

What an update. Beautiful, overwhelming, wonderful I think those words were just an understatement for the update that you did. But I'm so sure with this --- I LOVED IT SO MUCH!❤️👏

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Zetter

@Zetter

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

@Kat: That was so beautiful that you made me cry reading it 😭😭...Aman & Aarti are connected through their parents and through the wonderful bond they share w/ each other

I loved Aman's description of AarYa's love ❤️

Can't wait for what comes next...Great job!

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@Koolsmile

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

Beautifully written dude plus fabulously portrayed 👏
I never thought to b enjoying it this much 😛

Naureen 😃

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Pearl

@Pearl_27

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

That was painful Kat,you portrayed Sneha's dilemma wonderfully.
It was a whole piece of overwhelming emotions
Fabulous Part!👏

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hana_y

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

lovely update yaar snena wanted amaan to marry arti wow thx for pm me

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

lovely part you did it was emotional too sneha wanted to marrt aman with arti i dont have words to say how it was waiting for next

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny
Kat, would you believe me if I said I let a few tears escaped whilst reading about Sneha's dilemma? Because I honestly did. OMG! Every choking emotion resonated! 😭😭 And that says alot because only Danielle Steel and Nicholas Sparks ever made me cry whilst reading!!!

I love the way you made her a strong person! She's what I would call a phenomenal woman! 👏👏

Aman's realisation was much much needed! I'm glad you took care of that early and not made a big deal out of it!

And that last speech she gave to Aman was as heart-wrenching as her marriage life! 😭😭

I hold high respect for the Aman in your story! 👏👏

Fantastic!!! 👏

Vanny - if it didn't churn your emotions I am not doing my job right. From your writings I suspect you are like me - a tough nut to crack when it comes to emotional moments in fiction. Since this piece led to a few escaped tears - that's a big compliment. Thank you!

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: MelodiousDreams
You've done it again, Kat.

Immediate reaction after a first reading: stunned and overwhelmed...

This is such a beautifully-written story, and this part left me speechless.

*Reserved*

Thank you Borna. This story is going to be more sombre than my other fictions. Its a bit emotionally overwhelming for me too - and why I chickened out from writing it for so long. So, if it overwhelms you, at least I am able to bring the emotions out through the story.

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kdsubs

@kdsubs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: Deepti1808
@Kat: WOW !!!!!
How brilliantly you captured Sneha's emotions.
I felt sorry for her.
I could understand her being distant from Aarti.

Only yesterday i was telling someone how i could not think about Aarti and Aman in that way but when you said it in the story above even that made sense.

Great work Loved it

Deepti - thanks. Sneha has had a tough life, but I hope she came through as a positive character despite her way of treating Arti - a character most of us are in love with.

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