PV FF: Soul Connection - PART 5 NOW UP (Pg 19)

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

I'm too lazy I'll read it ummm tomoro or l8a😆

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Yes my name is Kat. Sneha explains herself in part 2.

And thanks - I know you are busy with your exams.

ahhh just got my results for another exam I did really good I'm on a roll

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PADMA VARANASI

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

I really feel sory for Sneha. Her emotions came thru in your story. Fabulous writing.

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Didi...sigh... First of all thank you for the poem. Secondly, you just spared me that promised paragraph of part 1 by answering my Sneha questions😆. Now I have to reread this part, read it in splits because of the office, but I did read most of Sneha's confession the first time around, and it was 😭😭 (Kadeen speechless?😆), and I say take a bow Didi👏👏👏

*RESERVED*

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elanpremi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

I fell in love with this story dear, wonderful.

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Mohini Singh Narayan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

Vanny - if it didn't churn your emotions I am not doing my job right. From your writings I suspect you are like me - a tough nut to crack when it comes to emotional moments in fiction. Since this piece led to a few escaped tears - that's a big compliment. Thank you!

You're welcome! 😃

Yes, I totally dislike anything that goes beyond real and OTT! And what you write, made me feel that all this can be experienced by someone!

And are doing an exceptional job! 👏

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saf24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Kat this is beautifully written. I was actually overwhelmed while reading it. Can't wait for the next part.

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Kesha_H.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

@KAT: Omg!! this must've been so hard for Sneha to care of the daughter of the woman whom her husband always loved I feel such pity for her😭 and Arti and Yash's relationship sounds good coming frm Aman's pov btw I really miss this guy the show would've been more fun if he was still there but wen Arti and Yash get over this prashant and baby worries they might make up for tht but putting myself in Sneha's shoes boy that's one tough situation to handle but atleast she never physically abused Arti😃

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lulujjjj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Fantastic write up dear loved it
very emotional 😭 waiting for next part
Insha Allah👍🏼❤️

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Taahir

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Now I understand why Sneha always treated Aarti in that manner , Aman I think loves Aarti but perhaps more of an sister/friend type of love ...ok I'm just gonna wait until you reveal it

Aarti and Yash sense each other yes this is also a deeper kind of love

once again I enjoyed reading this part , I just felt so sad so Sneha her whole life she had to go thru been 2nd fiddle