23/7 Dragon Club:Bua Vs AarYa:Who wins ? - Page 19

Samana ... that was fabulous ! ... I second Indu ... you didn't need any approval to post this !

@Indu: Phew...Thanks. 😊 Actually, now that you approved I can let the cat out of the bag. This piece didn't start out as a stand alone and I had a story mapped out for teenage Palak and Ansh, but if I write it I have to think of all kinds of out-of-canon things like whether Aarti and Yash have more children, as well as what happens to Prateek and Paridhi, and their kids as well. I don't know if I want to stretch that far beyond the current story... but then I am tempted because I want to explore Palak, Payal and Ansh more. Still thinking...

@Jyo: Thanks! That is exactly what I wanted to show, that Palak and Ansh will never stop competing with each other, but the way they do it can become so different. I have a feeling when these two sort things out they really will be the best of friends, most of the time. 😉😆

@Z: Even I loved the whole principle and AarYa convo .. it was quite nicely done and for once the principle was not accusing both but was trying to explain them the real issues which I liked 👍🏼..Even though precap is disturbing but so far precaps hv been mostly misleading and since they gave it away in the precap already that Aarti will b blamed again by Yash , so I m hoping that it turns out to b fake to expose bua so that the theory of misleading precaps can continue further 😆😆😆😆

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

@Red: 😆 Totally got the sarcasm but I interpreted the meaning behind it too literally.

It would have definitely been more gratifying if the principal had asked the questions you mentioned. A much simpler solution that loving each other would be if they just talked to their kids, something that Aarti used to be great at, which is why Ansh took to Yash, on deepening levels, so quickly. But the dunce doesn't even know her own power and gives her hero, Yashji all the credit. Aside from being painfully corny, that is dangerous because it shows how little she understands what actually worked for her kid in this whole process. Like we were discussing over the weekend, it worries me that Aarti's worship of Yash is coming in the way of her solid parenting chops pre-marriage, same with Yash, though his chops were not quite as solid.

@Jyo: Thanks. 😊You know in our society, not knowing how to tend to your child is deemed as a failure...nobody seems to realize that parents can be total illiterate where handling a child is concerned and that even they need guidance and experience. A child comes with lot of learning to acquire...even the husband/wife have to redefine their relationship. But yes, in a remarriage with children, the process is difficult because the entire journey takes a reverse connotation. Here too AarYa became parents first...fine...but their parental journey will stay incomplete if they don't become husband and wife in the true sense (and I mean true sense)...It's only when they shred the last bit of hesitancy between each other will they be able to think with one mind and love their kids jointly. I hope I made sense...and didn't sound too muddled (too many thoughts eddying in my head).😕

@Jyo: Thanks...

@Sam: That is kind of the first serious fan fiction you've written barring the one you did with that phone call between Prashant and Yash.
I loved it as it reads like a novel. It reminded me of some of the young adult novels.👏

@Red: Thanks! I am going to make a new thread for the story. If you wanna transfer your questions there, I would be happy to answer them. I actually thought about what you said for Ansh, but came upon the lawyer thing for specific reasons pertaining to the story in the long run, which I am thinking about actually writing now...

@Usha: Thanks!

@Angel: Yes it is. The Y/P doesn't count! It was just a piece of whimsy. I am glad you liked it and thanks for the huge compliment!

Originally posted by: Samanalyse

@Angel: Yes it is. The Y/P doesn't count! It was just a piece of whimsy. I am glad you liked it and thanks for the huge compliment!

Now I'm wondering where Payal was all this time. Does she go to dance classes and is she into fashion and creative stuff? I'm curious to know where she was the whole time this story was taking place!😆😆

One more question will Ansh be fighting with Palak for Dhristi's attention?😈

Here is the new thread:

Kal (An OS/maybe FF)

I am also going to do a mass PM now, so please just ignore it if it's redundant. 😛