FF - |As Fate Would Have It| Chapter 9 June17 - Page 15

Liked all d parts. FF is genuine and straight. What help can Paridhi do in this matter? Maybe yes. Prateek Paridhi are quite close to Yash.
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amazing...loved it...the scene with aarti and maansi was fantastic and displayed her emotions so well...paridhi being at the door was not a surprise...please cont soon...

Wonderful update! Yash is already falling for Aarti. And poor Aarti with such a painful past and all she has ever wanted in her life was for her husband to love her. I can't wait for your next update!

I love the story so far. Great job. please update soon!😊⭐️

This is the first time that I post a comment to your FF Scripted😊, and it's due to my workloads in my job that I doesn't have time to post a comment to every chapter that you write. But as what they said better late than never so here I want to thank you for giving us readers an excellent and awesome FF stroy that you write. I love the way you describe Aarti and Yash in the story. I love your characterization from being a simple yet well defined and well cultured girl of Aarti, her character as a strong woman and independent is very amazing. As for Yash I love his selflessness, the way he make-up his mind to take the responsibility that he is the one to be blame for his wife present situation. Some parts of the story made me laughed while reading. I love your choice of words from the sad part to the funny side of the story and up to the romantic part of the FF... You are really an awesome writer, the last part in chapter 8 broke my heart that I literally cried while reading that part when Aarti open-up to Maansi and shedding her tears. It was as if I am Paridhi who also felt the pain for Aarti's past experience in life. Hoping that Aarti no longer felt that pain anymore... I know Yash will be the one who can make Aarti happily ever after (just like in fairy tales)😳😳...

Awesomeee update!

Loved the whole FF in one go 😛

I know Chapter 8 has already been updated and this is like super, duper late, but I had so many social obligations lined up that I didn't have a lot of time to be on here! So even though everyone has already done a breakdown of Chapter 7, I am still going to go ahead and do mine because I just adoreddd it and I have been dying to put my thoughts to certain scenarios/dialogues!

How do girls do this on a daily basis, and live to do it again the next day was beyond him.

This chapter depicted a whole spectrum of emotions, and one of my favorite things about it was the subtle humor that you had injected throughout mostly at the expense of Yash! This line here cracked me up right from the beginning because it is such a typical guy thing to wonder, and seeing such a normal thought coming from Yash was kind of surprising after watching his character on the show! Your Yash is extremely endearing, he is a flawed character, just like in the show, but the liveliness and sense of humor hasn't left him. 😃

Had she known she would be subject to his fingers all over her back - grazing, touching, holding, steadying - she would have ripped the offending dupatta off her body many hours ago. How she exercised her restraint, and remained straight-spined throughout the ordeal was a secret only she knew the answer to.

Aww man, poor, poor, poor Aarti! I can just imagine the havoc that Yash's fingers must be created on her body, mind and heart as they grazed throughout her back, and I have to give it to her for sitting still like a statue and not letting any of her internal conflict reflect on the surface! This is the exact attitude of hers that is going to drive Yash insane and her talent of being able to hide her emotions so well will be his undoing just like her blush was! It is amazing how much she is effected by him, by his presence, and yet Yash has absolutely no clue about it because of how she portrays her indifference! Yash still has a guilty conscience because of the lie he had told her and he wants to rectify that immediately but I have a feeling that Aarti is going to leave him extremely frustrated before he he bursts out the truth in front of her!

@bold: LOL 😆 Desperate times would have called for desperate measures had she known that this is the torture she would have been subjected towards! But hey, at least they're both just as attracted towards each other and this will lead to some delicious friction down the road!

Raising his eyebrows in mischief, Yash explained, "Well, that it was a good idea our night shaped the way it did. Had I had to do this on the marriage-bed, not only would the mood have dampened, but our frustration levels would have soared."

OMG this is hands down my favorite part of the entire chapter! I almost choked when I read it because I couldn't believe that Yash Scindia would be bold enough to say something like that out loud 😲😲😲 especially considering they were both in such an awkward position right there! The innuendo behind his words was even more striking because just a couple hours ago he told Aarti that he was in love with another and now he was teasing about their own wedding night! It was extremely bold of him to say and it's obvious that the words slipped out of his mouth before he could think them through but it was perfectly timed and I just loved it! I am sure if Aarti was those emotional/dramatic types she would have slapped him in that instant 😆

Fully changed into a sari - one that she pinned only once, and one, which would not require any assistance in undoing - Aarti fumed. The gall of the man to make innuendos to her while having a lover stowed away someplace! A lover, he had met no less than an hour ago.

And Aarti's reaction to his words was spot on! I couldn't have expected her to think anything different, I mean the guy is coming off as completely bipolar towards her...one minute he tells her that he loves another and then goes to "meet" her and on the other he is talking about his wedding night and what it entails in the most casual manner as if the past couple of hours hadn't even transpired between them! Her anger and frustration is completely justified and beautifully portrayed because of what she thinks she knows about him, so you have laid out a delicious conflict here and the more it unravels the more fun times it will bring for us readers!

Also loved the contrast between Aarti tying her sari with just one pin so she wouldn't need to ask for anymore help and Yash's scandalized thoughts that the sari's blouse triggered! Once again he shocked me in the most amazing ways at his immediate reaction to seeing Aarti in the red sari! The guy is a total goner and he hasn't even been married a day! Aarti has taken over his mind and heart without having any intentions to do so and that's what makes this relationship so perfect! Right now Yash has accepted that his parents chose a good bride for him, and I can't wait for the day where he realizes that there couldn't have been anyone better than Aarti for him!

As they laughed, Aarti lowered her eyes, lest anyone notice a distinct sadness within them. Yash, noticed however, and called himself fifty kinds of fools. He would, he decided, make it up to Aarti, and clear the misunderstanding between them as soon as he had a quiet moment between them.

Aww I felt for Aarti in this moment! Every new couple is subjected to teasing the morning after their wedding and AarYa were no different, but after everything Aarti went through in what was probably the longest day of her life, these comments though harmless probably felt like taunts because just like always life has put her in a situation where she was not wanted! To be faced with such a setback and heartbreak on her wedding night, just when she was thinking that everything will start falling in place again, just makes my heart break for her and I want to slap Yash for being so tactless and blurting out such a harmful lie without even thinking about its consequences! I feel like Yash needs to find out about Aarti's tragic past ASAP so that he can realize just how much his actions and words have damaged her and so that he can rectify the situation accordingly!

No sooner had his mother finished talking, that Yash bolted towards his car.

Yash's eagerness is once again endearing! The guy may be impulsive but he can immediately accept where he went wrong and goes around to make things right as soon as possible! I don't think it will be very easy for him to come clean because they will get interrupted the first couple of times, but it will be interesting to see what Aarti's reaction will be when he finally comes clean to her! I am sure it won't be very pleasant and she will retreat even further within herself!