AarYa FF: From a Place of Silence

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mitul

@123mitul

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

awesome update👏👏

& i really loved other members comments too...

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#72

really nice update!!!!!!!👏⭐️

i would like to start wid the first lines-

Aarti was busy and happy, and, Yash was restless and agitated😆

seriously i liked the update frm this very first line.👍🏼.u very well described the state of mind of yash n aarti after that park scene.😳...loved the part where yash was trying to concentrate on business talks while his mind was wid aarti...imagining again their not so real kiss.😆😳

so finally aarti came out of his past.😊...gud now she can concentrate fully on her new relationship...not only as a mother but also as a wife...i think she need some hint frm yash's side that he is also willing to give more to their relation apart frm being a gud father of their children.😍

liked the way u portrayed their confusion..make them realise their feelings soon.😉

continue soon.😊

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Fabulous update ... Mira ... Take a bow, dear ! 👏

Loved how you weaved in the bathroom scene in this part !

I pity Yash, he's not going to escape that easily, is he ? Sharma from Lucknow or 'whoever' from 'whereever' ... no refuge !!!

He's till going to be lost in that magical moment albeit his dream moment !

Loved Aarti's moment of realisation ... finally she feels she is free of the baggage of her prev marriage ... beautiful !

Plz continue soon. ... I know we're all acting like as if you dont have a life outside of writing this FF ... 😳 ... Sorry ! ...

But really really waiting for the next part ...

PS: I have a small request ... Can you plz put the links of all the updates on the first page ? You know I often go back and read the whole story once again and I'd love to do it without having to search for the updated pages ... Please ? 😳

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Pd2012

@Pd2012

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

OMG. Such an amazing FF. accidentally i came to your post. This is first I read FF. excellent. Please update next part as soon as possible.

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Thanks everyone! 😊

Borna and Maham you are too funny...😆 LOVED your analysis!!! I never re-read anything I've written, so it was a treat to read your commentary! 🤗

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: rusha4003

PS: I have a small request ... Can you plz put the links of all the updates on the first page ? You know I often go back and read the whole story once again and I'd love to do it without having to search for the updated pages ... Please ? 😳

Done...😊

Edited by narangi_77 - 13 years ago

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rusha4003

@rusha4003

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: narangi_77

Done...😊

Thanks Mira ... ! 🤗

Are we going to be fortunate enuf to get an update today ??? 😆

My weekend is almost over and would love to enjoy another fab part before the weekly grind starts !

Edited by rusha4003 - 13 years ago

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aanyakunat

@aanyakunat

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#78

what an adorable update! you write so well i could imagine everything perfectly in my head..

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whatthewhat

@whatthewhat

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Thanks Mira ... ! 🤗

Are we going to be fortunate enuf to get an update today ??? 😆

My weekend is almost over and would love to enjoy another fab part before the weekly grind starts !

I'll try Usha 😊 ...if not today, I'll try get one out during the week