AarYa FF: From a Place of Silence - Page 10

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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
wow what a nice update!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️

i liked the part where evrybody was busy in giving instructions to yash.😆...n he was irritated wid that😆😆😆...he was only waiting for aarti...aww so cute.❤️..but as usual aarti was busy in her own thoughts of their encounter in bathroom.😳...she was feeling the same guilt n confusion which yash was going through.😳..ohh i think both need to get out of it n except their feelings wid much clarity😊

n poor yash he is feeling double guilty.😔...first because he is feeling sumthing for aarti n secondly because according to him he is cheating on arpita...i think he shud be the one who shud first try to break the ice wid aarti...first he shud cum out of his guilt of cheating arpita...then make a first move towards aarti...start frm friendship if not a full fledged husband wife relationship...as u described aarti's character in ur ff..she is never going to make first move...and it was yash who said it very clearly that he only wants a mother to his daughters...and aarti has respected his decision...so when he is willing to accept her in a wife's role...he shud make things right between them.😍

u r fantastic in describing any character's emotion👏...so i think when this thing will happen we'll surely have mindblowing updates.😍

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: arp04srocks

Wonderful update.

I just love how yash missed aarti in the goodbye😆

and poor aarti...too busy thinking her hubby doesnt want her......oh well i see these two still dont like to communicate 😆

And i must say i absolutely LOVED the older couple...it was wonderful to see how yash and aarti might be years from now, the subtle love, the joy in the kids the raised together...

but then you had to go and ruin my gushy moment...by introducing the bhoot's name😲 😆

Cant wait to see whts in store...

keep up the wonderful work...


Thanks!
@ bold 😆 😆 😆

This whole Arpita thing in the show is getting on my nerves...I need to dispose of her in my FF...
ah the wonders of controlling your own story 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Maham,

As always, thanks for the insightful reading! 🤗
Edited by narangi_77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: esha

Awesome update...

This is the first time I react to your fanfic...I read all the pages last night only and I must say you are a very talented writer...amazingly brilliant.
Everything flows together and when I first started reading, I was not even aware that tears were rolling down my cheeks...I could simply feel Aarti's pain while reading. And normally I am not such a senti person, but really your story touched something inside me.
Keep writing...you are brilliant 👏


Thanks a lot esha, that's very sweet 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: angake

Mira, so beautiful. I was waiting for this update. I can so imagine GC and KS in the scenes you have described. I can imagine every nuances in their expressions when they go through the feelings you have described. I love how you have Yash's thoughts in italics.

Using our words to express our thoughts, our opinions and our feelings is on of the most precious and natural gift given to us human beings yet sometimes it is the hardest and one that requires the most courage, isn't it? Who will be the first courageous one to reach out to the other person. Can't wait for the story to unfold both on screen and on your FF.

If you don't mind, as I was reading your latest update I imagined Yash sitting in the plane and listening to this song and thinking about Aarti. The lyrics are so apt for Yash's feelings, I think. :)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vBeEy1QT2qY&feature=relmfu


Thank you so much! And thanks for the song link...i hadn't heard that before...and i really liked it. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: rusha4003

Thank you Mira ... you updated ... 🤗


Brilliant ... as usual ... loved to see how restless Yash is becoming. He cant say anything to Aarthi and yet wants her to understand his thots ! Pretty unreasonable ... but then a man whose heart is leading him into hitherto unknown territory, knows no reason ,,, right ??? 😆

And poor Aarthi ... she's feeling so guilty ! She feels she has to honour Yash's undying love for Arpita and keep away from him ... but that decision makes her all the more restless ... it's like she's yearning for something that she's not even aware of !

Keep up the good work Mira ... looking forward to the next part !


@bold...you know it! 😆 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Thanks everyone for reading and commenting...I really love reading your comments and feedback!😊


Edited by narangi_77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow narangi this is amazing...i just came upon it by chance and loved it...read the whole fic in one go...cant wait to seewhat happens next and hope to see some bonding of our yash and aarti soon...please cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
lovely update.👏👏...waiting for the part when they share thier feelings with each other...cont soon...waiting for the update...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: narangi_77


Thanks!
@ bold 😆 😆 😆

This whole Arpita thing in the show is getting on my nerves...I need to dispose of her in my FF...
ah the wonders of controlling your own story 😉


@red : I fervently second that ! 👍🏼 ...

The CVs aren't going to let go of Arpita in the serial that easliy ... at least let us have the pleasure of 'bhootless' story in your FF ...😆

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