Take a bow Mira 👏... what an awesome update !!
I cant tell you how much in awe I am at your brilliant idea to introduce the Bhool-bulaiya which is sooo apt for Yash's state of mind now !!!
*standing ovation*
And Yash unburdening himself to a complete stranger ... fab touch !
Sometimes it helps to see things objectively thru the eyes of a stranger !
I could feel Yash's pain and guilt as he confesses that he was angry with Arpitha for giving up on life ... It has totally shattered him ... Yash such a strong individual ... reacted in the only way he could ... withdraws into a shell and went into total mourning . Maybe only his daughters kept him afloat ... just about.
So here he was living his life like a robot and suddenly Aarthi comes into his life. True to character he decides he will wed her only for his daughters and remain faithful to his wife's memory, little knowing that life has other plans in store for him ...
A year into the marriage ... and his life has taken a 180deg turn. He has started feeling again and his carefully sanitized life is all awry now.
And it needed a spell of losing himself in the labyrinth ...literally & figuratively ... and the objectivity of a stranger's views before he could see things that his mind had refused to acknowledge so far ...
That simple acknowledgment .... I want her ... Sighhh ... beautiful !
He laughs ... he is out of the labyrinth he had built around himself ... he's out in the sunshine and life's beckoning him ...
Finally ...
He had to get home.
Right away.
To Aarti.
Once again 👏 👏 👏 👏 take a bow my dear ... SUPERB writing !
PS: You did promise 2 parts ... remember ?? 😳
Edited by rusha4003 - 13 years ago