AarYa FF: From a Place of Silence - Page 12

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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u for the update...ur update is something i look forward to during weekends😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Take a bow Mira 👏... what an awesome update !!

I cant tell you how much in awe I am at your brilliant idea to introduce the Bhool-bulaiya which is sooo apt for Yash's state of mind now !!!

*standing ovation*

And Yash unburdening himself to a complete stranger ... fab touch !
Sometimes it helps to see things objectively thru the eyes of a stranger !

I could feel Yash's pain and guilt as he confesses that he was angry with Arpitha for giving up on life ... It has totally shattered him ... Yash such a strong individual ... reacted in the only way he could ... withdraws into a shell and went into total mourning . Maybe only his daughters kept him afloat ... just about.

So here he was living his life like a robot and suddenly Aarthi comes into his life. True to character he decides he will wed her only for his daughters and remain faithful to his wife's memory, little knowing that life has other plans in store for him ...

A year into the marriage ... and his life has taken a 180deg turn. He has started feeling again and his carefully sanitized life is all awry now.

And it needed a spell of losing himself in the labyrinth ...literally & figuratively ... and the objectivity of a stranger's views before he could see things that his mind had refused to acknowledge so far ...

That simple acknowledgment .... I want her ... Sighhh ... beautiful !

He laughs ... he is out of the labyrinth he had built around himself ... he's out in the sunshine and life's beckoning him ...

Finally ...


He had to get home.
Right away.
To Aarti.

Once again 👏 👏 👏 👏 take a bow my dear ... SUPERB writing !

PS: You did promise 2 parts ... remember ?? 😳
Edited by rusha4003 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
sooo finally yash got to know that he needs to accept his relation with aarti😆
update soon pls
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome Update!!!!😛
Plzz continue!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Astonishing update ❤️
You did an incredible job 👏
Can't wait for Yash to admit his feelings to Aarti & see how she's gonna react 😃
Plz update soonish 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow what an amazing update!!!!!!!! 👏really superb!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️

each n every word of the update specially the convo between yash n stranger was deep, true n somehow recognizable not only wid yash's life...but wid the life of each n every person. sometimes in our life we all feel as we r moving in a labyrinth unable to come out of it n need help n support...so for me this update was more than mere a ff based on AarYa...this was something like reality of life which we all face at sum point...sum day...😍...ok ok i knw i m being too philosophical abt this.😆😆😆...but its not my fault...infact its yours.😆...that u r one fantastic writer...kinda captured my mind wid ur talent.😍...seriously, i mean... HATS OFF to u for following lines-

No matter how terrible the grief, no matter how deep the wound, it is in our natures to get past the worst, to survive, and to move forward. Of course, you can stay shut up with your grief, shut up with the memories of your first wife. You can keep your grief alive, even if you have to fight yourself for it. You can pick away at your wounds, keep them fresh, even if they have healed. You can do that. Certainly. In the end it's your choice. Do you choose the dead? Or, do you choose the living? Do you choose to listen to what your heart is telling you? And accept what it has decided? Are you brave enough to accept the end of grief? Brave enough to embrace the beginning of a new life? That is a choice only you can make and I can only hope that you choose wisely.


these were my most fav. frm the update😃...feeling like preserving it sumwhere.😃

ahh...hope in the show also CVs can put some brain in the yash n aarti's mind like this...now after reading this i have high hopes frm the show...specially abt the dialogues...they have to be as gud as urs or else i'll be disappointed.😒

continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
So Borna has basically analyzed every bit of the chapter and I have been nodding along her whole take, so I won't add much to that, but I will say my two cents on what I feel Yash should do next!

Personally, I don't feel like an immediate verbal confession is going to work, especially since Aarti is 100% convinced that Yash will never accept her as his wife. And with what happened on the day he left for Lucknow, her impression just keeps getting stronger and stronger. She took the first step, asked him if he needed help, she forgot about their deal as well just for a few seconds and became a wife, but just as quickly as her hope and happiness rose, they were immediately dashed by his cold and indifferent attitude (I don't really blame him though, but Aarti felt that got another dose of the cold reality that was her marriage).

So if he comes running back from Lucknow and tells her that they I got an epiphany while I was gone, and now I am in love with you, she'll think that he's completely lost it, and it will be very difficult for her to trust me. I mean how does a man who has been so aloof towards her till a couple days ago be confessing his feelings for her? It would make absolutely no sense and it might even force her to pull away from him even more. So what Yash needs to do is start showing his feelings through his actions, the very first and most important one being to rid their room of all of Arpita's memories, as in her pictures. He need to take them off the walls and put them away, he needs Aarti to feel comfortable in that room, to feel as if she belongs there. She will literally get the shock of her life when she sees the empty walls and after that Yash needs to find ways to make her spend time in their room, initiate one on one conversations, make her comfortable around him and once that happens the rest will be history.

With Yash's realizations of his feelings comes a huge responsibility, like I have been saying he is the one who needs to be taking all the initiatives in their relationship. Aarti has already been burned, and the last thing she wants to do is feel like she is imposing on his life and so she stays away. Now that Yash no longer wants the deal he needs to show it to her through his actions, and with their anniversary coming up so soon and Prateek/Paridi's elaborate plans for celebrating it, this should really, really work in Yash's favor. What a better way to start their romance than on their very first anniversary! This is really is how I want to see things develop in the show and since this feels so close to it, I though I'd leave my own opinion, but I have complete faith in you, I know you will do full justice to both these characters and their love story, and now that we're at the turning point, I can't wait to see how things unfold from here!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks everyone! So glad you enjoyed it.
I will reply to your comments/observations tomorrow. I did promise to get the next part out this weekend, but I'm sorry I've been unable to...real life you know 😊

It will have to wait till next weekend, I'm afraid. In any case we have a whole week of fun to look forward to!



Edited by narangi_77 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Mira: We'll be looking forward to the next part eagerly no matter when you post it, so take as much time as you need! 😊 As long as you don't completely abandon us at this juncture, that is! 😆 As for the whole week of fun, as you put it...I'm hoping that it will indeed turn out that way...*prays*
@Maham: I promise a reply is coming up. Can't resist the urge to discusss the things you've written about! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
*sigh* Mira, you're such a heartbreaker 💔 But that's ok, real life takes priority and I totally understand that! I am sure that this week's episodes are going to keep us plenty entertained whether it be with drama or romance, and I am going to love every minute of it! So it should make the wait for the next chapter pretty easy, can't wait for it though, now that everything has finally fallen in place in Yash's mind I am desperate to see where you take it from here! So take your time, but like Borna said, please don't desert this, my poor heart won't be able to take it!

Borna, waiting, waiting, waiting for your take 😆

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