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Amy

@Amy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: brainychild92
wow, i just finished reading this when i got a pm! great part.. i doubt it will be like this because from the promo's i think yash believes that arthi is a widow... but i like ur way better.. but we'll see how it goes...

i wouldn't mind if u continued! if u do, please me pm!

thank u😊
i think u r right abt yash not knowing her to be a divorcee...but i wanted him to knw...may be just him..
continuation, may be another part...
will PM u when i am ready with another random OS😃

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Amy

@Amy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: dona86
awsome os...
thanx 4 d pm...

thank u😊

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Amy

@Amy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: harshithaaa
its an awesome imagination...i loved the way arti helped payal...loved it...

thank u😊
the mothers touch😃

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Sherida Gunness

@nishersal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

absolutely l❤️ved it...You are really talented as a writer👏. Loved that you showed Aarti interacting with Payal, and Yash finding out that Aarti is divorced...and the hockey stick reference was nice too Look forward to your update. Thank you for the PM🤗

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Durga

@mrk-1

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

i loved it ya ..well written ..

i suppose the person whom prashanth was talking over in phone must be his second wife/lover or something ... when he himself is in a relation why dont he just let go of aathi instead of threatening her ????

if yash had decided to give his life a chance , that would be the most fantastice ones ..

would like to see more scnes on how yash and aarthi have a heart to heart talk ..

pls do continue soon and add me to ur pm list ...

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melody442

@melody442

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

very nice update. thnx for pm.

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Break.The.Code

@Break.The.Code

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Just beautiful Amy...Well written and executed..wanted 2 c the same😊*Hugs*PS-add me 2 your PM list..

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devibabu

@devibabu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

wow its nice... i like it yar...

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sanu3108

@sanu3108

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

hey Amy ... welcome to the forum ...

loved ur writng ... and am waiting to read more and more and more ...

and plzzz can i kill that creep prashant.. Grrr.. the nerve of that man ... even after giving her so much pain .. and has the face to come back and talk to her with such authority ... as****e ...

continue super soon ... plzzz