OS: The Eavesdropper - Page 4

wow, i just finished reading this when i got a pm! great part.. i doubt it will be like this because from the promo's i think yash believes that arthi is a widow... but i like ur way better.. but we'll see how it goes...

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Awesome job dear.i liked it very much

thank u😊

Hey!! I absolutely loved the OS!! You should really consider turning it into an FF or an SS.. would love to read more on this.. thank you for the PM

Originally posted by: shah10

wow..love it

thank u😊

Originally posted by: rechus

Superb..pls continue...

thank u😊

Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Really great Di! I love the way you bring out their feelings, even with the simple things. More!🤗

thank u 😊
more...umm...may be a bit more😉

awsome os...

Originally posted by: moksha89

Great job!

As a OS its great, but so good i wish there were more parts 😳😆

really loved the hockey stick ending, and you captured aarti's fear of trust so well !

thank u😊
more parts ...umm may be, defenitely another part.
to turn this into an S i will wait to see how the story progress...
but i may come up with more random OS😃
Arrti will find it so difficult to be in another relation..wonder why the show is not focussing on her insecurities😕
u r the only one to comment on the hockey stick part😃...cudn't resist that to give Yash a bit of a sense of humour, he aught to have it don't u think with Prathik as a brother

its an awesome imagination...i loved the way arti helped payal...loved it...

Originally posted by: vibz88

Hey i read the first part dint scroll down for the second!!! Its a well written os!!hope u continue this!the scene between payal and arti was really cute!

thank u😃
i feel yash has to see for himself that she will be a good mother to his daughter before accepting😊