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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
wow, i just finished reading this when i got a pm! great part.. i doubt it will be like this because from the promo's i think yash believes that arthi is a widow... but i like ur way better.. but we'll see how it goes...

i wouldn't mind if u continued! if u do, please me pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: samiya.059

Awesome job dear.i liked it very much


thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!! I absolutely loved the OS!! You should really consider turning it into an FF or an SS.. would love to read more on this.. thank you for the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: rechus

Superb..pls continue...


thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kittya_Cullen

Really great Di! I love the way you bring out their feelings, even with the simple things. More!🤗


thank u 😊
more...umm...may be a bit more😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awsome os...
thanx 4 d pm...
Edited by dona86 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: moksha89

Great job!

As a OS its great, but so good i wish there were more parts 😳😆
really loved the hockey stick ending, and you captured aarti's fear of trust so well !


thank u😊
more parts ...umm may be, defenitely another part.
to turn this into an S i will wait to see how the story progress...
but i may come up with more random OS😃
Arrti will find it so difficult to be in another relation..wonder why the show is not focussing on her insecurities😕
u r the only one to comment on the hockey stick part😃...cudn't resist that to give Yash a bit of a sense of humour, he aught to have it don't u think with Prathik as a brother
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its an awesome imagination...i loved the way arti helped payal...loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: vibz88

Hey i read the first part dint scroll down for the second!!! Its a well written os!!hope u continue this!the scene between payal and arti was really cute!


thank u😃
i feel yash has to see for himself that she will be a good mother to his daughter before accepting😊

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