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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyamvada

Awesome, loved the updates.. my like button wasn't responding, but I will let you know I LOVE YOUR STORY :) lol! Please continue and do pm me plz..


thank u for commenting...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: *Maleena*

I love this story! Please continue this, I can see that Aarti is afraid to trust another man because of how much pain Prashant caused her. Please continue this it's a great story.



thank u😊
it is difficult to trust again when you are betrayed in love😭
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thank u😊
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#24

Originally posted by: narangi_77

Hi,

I'm a silent member of this forum but I felt I had to congratulate you on 'The Eavesdropper'. It's brilliant - well-written, engaging and by far the best ff I've read. I do hope you continue with this story and that you continue writing.

Looking forward to lots more from you.

Cheers!

Mira


thank u Mira😊
i think i will stick to random OS for a while...and then may be once i gain enough confidence an FF😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan

heyyy... m really loving it...
i loved d way u picturised evrythin...
the turn up of events.. Aarti takin care of Payal...
Yash always being there to see Aarti...
amazingly thought..
i truly truly loved it...


thank u 😊
chance meetings... but i wanted the proposal to be more than just arranged
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: SriB

You write beautifully. Awesome OS.please do continue


thank u😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome job dear.i liked it very much
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Really great Di! I love the way you bring out their feelings, even with the simple things. More!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great job!
As a OS its great, but so good i wish there were more parts 😳😆
really loved the hockey stick ending, and you captured aarti's fear of trust so well !
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Hey i read the first part dint scroll down for the second!!! Its a well written os!!hope u continue this!the scene between payal and arti was really cute!

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