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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Priyamvada
Awesome, loved the updates.. my like button wasn't responding, but I will let you know I LOVE YOUR STORY :) lol! Please continue and do pm me plz..

thank u for commenting...😊

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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: *Maleena*
I love this story! Please continue this, I can see that Aarti is afraid to trust another man because of how much pain Prashant caused her. Please continue this it's a great story.

thank u😊
it is difficult to trust again when you are betrayed in love😭

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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: gafulu14
Welcome

thank u😊

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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: narangi_77
Hi,
I'm a silent member of this forum but I felt I had to congratulate you on 'The Eavesdropper'. It's brilliant - well-written, engaging and by far the best ff I've read. I do hope you continue with this story and that you continue writing.

Looking forward to lots more from you.

Cheers!

Mira

thank u Mira😊
i think i will stick to random OS for a while...and then may be once i gain enough confidence an FF😃

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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: AbbyluvsMaan
heyyy... m really loving it...
i loved d way u picturised evrythin...
the turn up of events.. Aarti takin care of Payal...
Yash always being there to see Aarti...
amazingly thought..
i truly truly loved it...

thank u 😊
chance meetings... but i wanted the proposal to be more than just arranged

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Amy

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: SriB
You write beautifully. Awesome OS.please do continue

thank u😊

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samiya.059

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Awesome job dear.i liked it very much

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Kittya Cullen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Really great Di! I love the way you bring out their feelings, even with the simple things. More!🤗

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moksha89

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Great job!

As a OS its great, but so good i wish there were more parts 😳😆

really loved the hockey stick ending, and you captured aarti's fear of trust so well !

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-Eris-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Hey i read the first part dint scroll down for the second!!! Its a well written os!!hope u continue this!the scene between payal and arti was really cute!

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