ViSa OS: I Own the Bloody Shop!!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: nandinidavid96

I am Nandini from Hyderabad. I am Research Scholar and development professional

Seems to be very interesting.

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jyothi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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amazing os I totally loved the title

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jyothi_cool
amazing os I totally loved the title

Thank You Jyothi. I wanted a crazy title and so is this😊

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I am Madara. I am Kira.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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This was going so good but then you started writing in Hindi and I had to abandon this. I like the starting though! A suggestion can you put the English in brackets if you're continuing this story please. :/

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Pallavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Aww...This is such a fantastic OS, dear! I could actually picture this in my mind!😃

Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece!😊😃

Keep posting such OS and entertain us whenever time permits, dear!😊

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pein
This was going so good but then you started writing in Hindi and I had to abandon this. I like the starting though! A suggestion can you put the English in brackets if you're continuing this story please. :/

Thanks dear

I'll try to rewrite the parts in English, probably tomorrow...but this is one shot no continuation

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: wupa
Aww...This is such a fantastic OS, dear! I could actually picture this in my mind!😃
Thank you for sharing such a wonderful piece!😊😃

Keep posting such OS and entertain us whenever time permits, dear!😊

Thanks Pallavi...glad you like it

This OS is brain child of the phrase "aww...he is so hot" (Eijaz Khan) that turned into OS; Now when I read this OS, I found it nothing but stupid...but I wanted to write something and it turned something else

I'll try to post whenever I can...for writing on Eijaz/Akdu I have plenty of time😆

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Pallavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Your random ramblings and stupid OSs are fantastic FFs for me.😃 So now I am imagining how outstanding a proper fic from you would be like!

I am greedy and I need to satisfy my gutter needs frequently!😆😆 And I am darn glad that you have all the time to write Vikrant FF to do just that! Now that puts my mind at ease!😆

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Naikravina
awsome...

Thank you😊

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Nandini Swarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: wupa
Your random ramblings and stupid OSs are fantastic FFs for me.😃 So now I am imagining how outstanding a proper fic from you would be like!
I am greedy and I need to satisfy my gutter needs frequently!😆😆 And I am darn glad that you have all the time to write Vikrant FF to do just that! Now that puts my mind at ease!😆

Better don't imagine any perfect FF/OS from me...they are still in making, doubt will ever get ready for you to read😉😆

Of course I have all time to write on Eijoo but did I say I have the mood🤣

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