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Posted: 12 years ago
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Raj: what is someone else's I don't care, but if something is mine, then I can Do anything to get it back!
Vikrant: what has already been made mine no one can take it away from me!!
Raj looked at Vikrant with a strong ego in his eyes!
Vikrant gets a phone call.
SARITA
Vikrant answers the phone. "Hello!"
Abhi: Hello daddy?
Vikrant: kya hua abhi? (What happened abhi?)
Abhi: daddy... Woh mama...(daddy...mama...)
Vikrant got a little scared hearing Sarita's name. "Kya hu mama ko?"( what happened to Sarita?)
Abhi: woh mama niche ghir gayi aur per mein moch aa gayi aur abh woh kadi bhi nahi ho rahi. ( mom fell down and sprained her ankle and she can't get up!)
Raj was looking at Vikrant anxiously trying to figure out what happened.
Vikrant: tum fikar maat karo abhi, mein abhi aati hoon! ( don't worry abhi I'll be there.)
Vikrant turns to leave.
Raj: kya hua Sarita ko ( what happened to Sarita?)
Vikrant: nothing. Bas moch aa gayi. (Nothing just a little sprain)
Raj; mein chalo? ( can I come?)
Vikrant looks at Raj.
Vikrant: thanks but mein apni biwi kha khayal achi taarha se aur khood rakh sakta hoon. ( thanks but I can take good care of my wife all by myself)

Vikrant left a stressed and shocked Raj behind.

In Vikrant's room.

Sarita was sitting on the floor with her hands around her foot. Vikrant quickly walked over to her and sat next to her.

Vikrant: tum theek ho? (Are you okay?)

Sarita: lag raha hai? ( does it look like it?)

Vikrant gets mad. "Tum har baar jagda kyun KARTI ho, tumse pyar se baath nahi hoti kya? ( why do you always have to fight, can you ever talk nicely?)

Vikrant looked at Sarita and she had hereyes closed in pain. He moved closer to her and picked her up.

Sarita: yeh aap... (What are you...)

Vikrant: shut up!!!!

He put her on the bed and he was about to get up and find balm but got pulled back towards her because her mangalsutra got stuck in his shirt button. They gazed at each other. But, Sarita's leg pain made her come out. Vikrant tried to take the mangalsutra out, but wasn't getting very far so Sarita decided to help him out. They finally got out and Vikrant got up to get the balm but abhi was standing there with it in his hands. Vikrant applies it to her ankle and right when he finished there was a knock on the door. Vikrant got up to get it. He opened the door and it was raj and divya. Raj almost pushed Vikrant over and both Vikrant and Divya noticed that.

Sarita: Raj ji, aap? (Raj?)

Raj: aap theek hai? (Are you okay?)

Vikrant and Divya walked in.

Vikrant: Sarita bilkul theek hai Raj. tumhe chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi. ( Sarita is absolutely fine, you don't need to worry raj.)

Sarita tried to get up and both Raj and Vikrant extended their hands for help. First raj and then Vikrant's. Sarita's hand hovered over Raj's hand. But she moved her hand towards Vikrant and held on to it to get up. Vikrant was beyond happy. Even though it was a small step, Vikrant had shown raj that Sarita was now his and his only.

Hey guys hope you guys liked the OS. I'm not going to be continuing this because I will fail to do so. So I don't want to give you guys false hope, but if you would like to continue then you can post the next part and I will update the title for you. Thanks guys. And don't forget to
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh..I feel sorry reading that you will not continue this but anyways I LOVED it!..very nice OS👏I hope someone else continues it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was very good! Please try to continue if possible.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was good.. i wished u had continued!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow super nice os minding blowing
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovelyyy... plzzz try to cntinue it buddyyy... waiting..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This was amazing! I could actually imagine the scene with the characters!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it was cute...

finally raj gets some piece of mind...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awww nice OS.. write moreee :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you thank you 😃

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