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Posted: 15 years ago
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arre mein abhi se tuned hoon....sirf aap ki fab update ka wait kar rahi hoon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: letsrockshona

arre mein abhi se tuned hoon....sirf aap ki fab update ka wait kar rahi hoon



sorry je
i m late
but may b by 2moro i will post part 2 .....
wo kya hai na coll k assignments k waghe se bhaut busy hu and time nahi milta.....
well der is a surprise for all in d next part
will update by 2moro
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: nitali



sorry je
i m late
but may b by 2moro i will post part 2 .....
wo kya hai na coll k assignments k waghe se bhaut busy hu and time nahi milta.....
well der is a surprise for all in d next part
will update by 2moro

arre koi baat nahi
take ur time
mein tho mazaak kar rahi thi
study comes first like rakhi di says
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks for sharing dear...Indeed the update was very nice sweetie!⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Humrazz- Part 2

Prithvi naughtily smiled and step foreword to enter d house . he moved 2-3 steps forward and stooped . den his hands went in his right pocket of his pant and removed d keys of d house den he inserted 1 key inside d door lock and unlocked d door .he moved his right leg forward and stepped on d door mat which looked like dis .

Them prithvi moved further towards the living room area and moved inside d living room which was traditionally decorated and most of d decorations used light colors .
now we can c d living room.

prithvi moved 2-3 steps further but stooped . den he waited der and thought for a sec " aaj ghar mai koi dikh nahi raha ! sab kaha chale gaiye ? den he thought something again and moved 2words d staircase which was to the left but a bit 2 right of d hall . he hurriedly ran towards d staircase and climbed up
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a girl in a room is standing facing her back to d door and she herself facing to d window
usne apne haat mai phone pakad kar rakha tha. Phone ko aapni jagha par rakhne kliye wo turn huie & she kept on its respective place and now standing at d ame place where she was standing b4
den suddenly when she was about to turn back and leave d room she again got dos blur images
whatever she could c was a couple driving a car , happy with each other , smiling giggling , looking at each other then suddenly samne se eek truck aaiye with full speed den……
den suddenly a man came and encircled his arms around her waist .
This hole incident was blurb to her but whenever she remembered this she was left shattered and confused . confused becoz whenever she use to get these blur images it were not complete it was always left half and d scene was much scary ….
Her thought broke as a man encircled arms around her waist and she came back to reality.
The man said , " my sweet heart " and her on her neck . she recognized who it was .
The girl turned and looked in the sparkling eyes of d man who was smiling .
D man again encircled his arms around her waist and pulled her towards him .
Girl- aap itnee jaldi aa gaiye prithvi.
The cameras facing him , dat man was none other dan prithvi encircling his arms around d girls waist
Prithvi – aab agar meri patni mughe miss karti ho and mughe aapne paas bula rahi ho to mai ye kyoon nahi karta
Den prithvi turns her
now we can c d face of d girl...


[Sanyogita Prithviraj Raichand ]- prithvi ki wife, uski life , uska sab kuch .
she's sweet , she'sinnocent ... a bit darpok...and bit bindas...but ye sahibaa jo hai prithvi ki jaan hai .
prithvi insee jitna pyaar karte hai ye bhe unse utna he pyar karte hai....
inn dono mai eek dusre ki jaaan basti hai ...
prithvi and sanyo ki shadi ko 1 year 6 months ho chuke hai . ye dono eek dusre se bachpan se pyar karte the likin ye dono ye bat samaj nahi paiye...den while doing der bachlors hey realized this and made confession of der love.
Presently their life is going on smooth but there r some secrets hidden behind d door ...

Then prithvi ne eek thandi and sukunbhari saas le kar kaha " sanyogita"
sanyo ne phir kaha – ha …
then prithvi ne apni aake band kar k kaha I love u
and sanyo said I love u too . and they shared a passionate hug…
prithvi den released her and uske khando ko pakad kar and sanyo ki aapko mai aakhe dal kar kaha
" mai thumare liye kuch laya hu . " sanyo was completely lost in his sparkling deep black oceanic eyes .
Prithvi ne sanyo ko notic kiya and found her dreaming . phir prithvi ne uska name liya" sanyo !" par uske nahi suna . den wapus uska name pukara sanyo ! lekin nahi suna den tang ho kar prithi ne thode loudly kaha sanyogita
Prithvi ki aawas sun kar she became a bit shok and came back to reality.
Prithvi – sanyo kaha kho gaiye .
Sanyo ne aapni aakhe jhuka kar thoda Sharma kar kaha
"Kahi nahi"den she again said " aap kuch kehe rahe the ki aap mere liye kuch laiye hai , kya laiye hai aap mere liye ?
Prithvi came close to her and said "aapni aakhe band karo".

sanyogita again left completely looking at him and den slowly closed her eyes
prithvi for a while lost In her mesmerizing beauty . he wondered "how beautiful she is , with such a childlike innocence , her beauty and everything of hers is so beautiful and life with a person like her is even move beautiful . he continued " your nature , behavior , d way u behave with others , way u respect and everything is like a girt to me . your r very precious to me sanyogita . I will never let any 1 harm u and I will always protect u .
his thought broke when sanyo said "prithvi , prithvi kya hua ? jaldi mughe aapni aakhe kholni hai "
prithvi – ha eek min .
den prithvi ne aapne cort k aandar wale pocket se eek box bhar nikala and removed a diamond necklace
which looked like this

then prithvi ne uss bok ko side pe rakha and bade romantically sanyo k neck ko sehalaya and kissed her neck .
sanyo was left shocked and innocently and blushingly said "prihtvi!!! What r u doing?"
then prithvi ne aapne head ko thoda raise kar k , sanyo k ears k paas aa kar uske kan mai kaha
"ssshhhh…"
Sanyo blushed .
Den prithvi ne wo necklace liya and sanyo ko phenaya . sanyo could feel every single touch of his.
Den he turned her towards d mirror which was kept in north south direction and romantically asked her to open her eyes.
Sanyo opened her eyes and found a beautiful necklace on her neck.
she was completely surprised and so happy and continuously looking at d necklace but soon her eyer shifted to prithvi who was indeed looking at her.
Sanyo was looking at prithvi with her beautiful black eyes . she was very happy and wanted to say many things but was not able to . sanyo ne aapni aakhe jhukhai and prithvi ko aapne gale laga liya .




NOTE:- GUYS AT D STARTING OF DIS PART I HAVE MENTIONED A DOOR MAT SO AS U CAN C DER R MANY PICTURES . SO OVER HERE D VERY 1ST DOOR MAT DAT IS D ROUND 1 IS PREFERRED BY ME.
MY SILENT READERS PLEASE COMMENT .



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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

wow,wonderful update.

Just too good.Loved the description of their home.
So, prithvi and sanyogita married .good.
Sanyo ko kaunsa dream aata hain and suspense aacha dia.
loved the conversation between sanyo and prithvi. loved their sweet and cute love .
continue soon nitu.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
nitali thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27


rakhi what reserve
read and tell me how is it
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28
Thanks for sharing its lovely dear!👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: nitali



rakhi what reserve
read and tell me how is it

it's wonderful part nitu.Meine comment kar dia nitu jee.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
wow nitali
a lovely update
enjoyed reading the whole update it was fab.....loved all the scenes
it was well written
the best part was where prc gifts sanyo a necklace....such an adorable scene
the pics u used they were lovely too
overall a superb and a fabulous update
thanks for sharing
update the next part please

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