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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: sweet_kanika

hey wow...

wat an emotional story..........👏

thanks dear for loving this story, yes it's emotional story😳.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow sweetheart,...
itni emotional story............😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: niyaati

wow sweetheart,...

itni emotional story............😭

Thanks niyaati for loving this one shot ff.
Yes, it's emotional story but next one will be happy one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

An Board meeting will be held after 2 hours. Everyone boards of directors are very tensed .M.D of the company is Mr.Prithviraj Sahani and Manger in Purchase is Mrs.Sanyogita Sahani. Both are very tensed not only the cause of loss of the company beared in this year, they were argue with each other and give blame to each other.

After 8 hours, board meeting was just end , evry board members are angry on prithvi and sanyogita. Prithvi and Sanyogita looks devastated.

Prithvi:-just beacause of u everything was lost.Our company is suffering big lost just because of u.Meine kaha tha, iye maat karo nehi, tumhe to risk lena hain,

Sanyo: - Wow, mr.Sahani, what do u think of himself, iye loss mere wajay se hua hain. Iye tumhara galati hain mere nehi, meine kaha tha uss Priya partrust mat karo nehi tumhe toh aapno se jada doosre pe jada believe hain.

Prithvi:-Are aapna galati kyuon uss pe de rehe ho.

Sanyo:-Mera galati,

Prithvi held her arms fiercely and said wrong galati mera nehi tumhara hain.Tum agar zidd nehi kati toh hum iye loss nehi karte.tumhara haar lerki jo mere sath work karta hain usse jalna, iye sab ka result hain iye loss.meine kaha tha tumhe hum dono pati patni hain par jab isss office mein aayenge tab hum sirf professional relationship maintain karenge.Par nehi tumhe toh mere piche iha aanatha sirf aapna galat soch ko prove karne ke liye.tum kehethe ho, business, hum don one toh kabhi ek aache pati patni iya dost ka rista bhi nehi nivaya. Haar baat pe ek doosre pe ka galati search karna haar baat pe ek doosre pe iljaam dena iye toh humne kia, tumhare wajay se mere beti mujhse door chali gayi , sirf aur sirf tumhare wajay se.Aab kaya mujhe se aur door send karna chahate ho.Aapna so called ego satisfied karne ke liye.

Sanyo who hava tears in her eyes not because of prithvi hurting her but the rude word which are piercing her heart and shattered her heart into million pieces.

Prithvi:-Don't u think ki tumne kaya kaya kia mere sath,

Sanyo:-Prithvi, Aditya ne mere wajay se nehi oh ek ?.. accident tha? aur uss time pe tumbhi nehi the mere paas tumne aapne? business meetings pe jada busy the, ? meine phone kia tha tumhe par tum?..

Prithvi:-Aapna galati mere upar maat do, sab tumhare wajay se hua tha aur hain.tum sirf tum sab kia zimmedar ho.

Sanyo:-jhooth, sab jhooth, tum kyuon aapna galati mere upar de rehe ho.

Prithvi just free Sanyogita forcefully and left the cabin,

Sanyo sit in the floor and cring in a loud and heard a loud slaamed in the door.She thinks kaya galati ho gaya mujhse, kaha galati hogaya muhse. Kyuon ?Kaha kho gaya humara pyaar, oh kasme ..Ek doosre pe trust karne ka.Kaha kho gaya and suddenly relasie a loud pain in her stomach and then she loss her conscious.

Here in the prtivhi after left the office, Prithvi sit in the car and thought she thinks kaya galati ho gaya mujhse, kaha galati hogaya muhse. Kyuon ?Kaha kho gaya humara pyaar, oh kasme ..Ek doosre pe trust karne ka.Kaha kho gaya..Prithvi did not realize when his tears flowing from his eyes continuously and Suddenly a Truck come with a full speed dashed on his car and his car loss the control and gir gaya cliff se and blast the car.

Here in the hospital, sanyo ko admit karaya uske assistant miss kapoor and after some time Dr. said pls inform her husband and her family.

Miss Kapoor:-Ok, dr.But pls tell me madam kiase hain.Is she ok now?

Dr.:-No, she lost her child and She is in coma due to lot of stress, shocked, and loss of blood.

Miss Kapoor:-What? Is this a joke or anything? R u serious Doctor.

Dr.;-Yes Miss kapoor.

Miss Kapoor Jaldi se phe kia prithviko par his phone said unreachable.then, she called prithvi's parents and tell them everything.

Here, near in the prithvi's car,prithvi's almost in his last stage and his eyes looks at the sky and searching for sanyo face.He said to himself I'm sorry sanyo, meine aapna har promise broke kar dia, nahi tumhe koi happiness de paya nahi tumhare sath aapna jeevan ? and ?his breath is stopped there in the same time sanyo pluse rate became slower and then she also take her last breath .

Nurse:-Dr.come here pls.

Dr. enter the cabin and said Oh no.He check sanyo's lifeless body and said she is no more.

Then , he said this to her family and this a phone came and they heard about prithvi's accident and he also no more in this world.

Prithvi and sanyo's parents break down in the hospital and cryin loud their for lost their child.

Hum kabhi kabhi aapne pyaar se jada aapna ego ko importance dete hain.Aapna possesivenss ko itna barne dete hain kabhi kabhi jada importance dete hain?hume aapna pyaar se jada aapna ego pyaari hota hain jisse hum kabhi kabhi na chahte hue bhi aapne chahane wale ki hurt karte hain?.

Jab do log ek doosre ko pyaar karte hain tab ek doore ko acchai ke sath sath burai ko bhi aapna nate hain par jab bhi humara ego saamne aajata hain tab hum aapne chahane wale ko dard dete hain.usse samajh ne ki koshish nehi karte?.

Hum jab bhi humara chahane wale ko jab bhi dard dete hain bahar ki duniya ke baat sunte hain tab humara pyaar se jada ego samne aajata hain aur isse hum sirf aapna chahane wale ko hi nehi aapne aap ko bhi dard dete hain.

Jab hum kissi ko pyaar karte hain toh usse pura beive karna chaiye , humara ego ko door karna chaiye?..Nehi toh isska ek hi result hota hain dard, judaai.

Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Humko mili uski sazaa
Hum jo khata kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Kitni akeli thi woh rahen hum jinpe
Ab tak akele chalte rahen
Tujhse bichhad ke bhi o bekhabar
Tere hi gham mein jalte rahen
Tune kiya jo shiwa
Hum woh gila kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake
Tumne jo dekha suna sach tha magar
Itna tha sach yeh kisko pataa
Jaane tumhe maine koi dhokha diya
Jaane tumhe koi dhokha hua
Is pyaar mein sach jhooth kaa
Tum faisla kar naa sake
Hum bewafa hargiz na the
Par hum wafa kar naa sake

rakhi di ye aap ne kya kia...aap ne mere prithvi ki ghari ka accident kara dia.....so sad

anyways well written....and a very lovely piece of writing....jaldi write further ....am very eager to read on

as always a wonderful update

and thanks for pm me

love u loads ...maharani ji

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Posted: 15 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

rakhi di ye aap ne kya kia...aap ne mere prithvi ki ghari ka accident kara dia.....so sad

anyways well written....and a very lovely piece of writing....jaldi write further ....am very eager to read on

as always a wonderful update

and thanks for pm me

love u loads ...maharani ji

Oh my little princess sorry dear, but don't feel sad, next one is coming and that'll be very happy one dear.
Thanks shona for loving this one shot ff.
Yes dear,I'll post next one very soon dear.
welcome dear.
Love u too my little princess.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Oh my little princess sorry dear, but don't feel sad, next one is coming and that'll be very happy one dear.
Thanks shona for loving this one shot ff.
Yes dear,I'll post next one very soon dear.
welcome dear.
Love u too my little princess.

my pleasure di....wud b waitin 4 ur nxt wonderful update......dil khol ke aur sab kuch thor ke
i really love reading ur ff's.....am a big fan of ur ff's...so can i have a autograph please...lolzzzz
anyways do pm me my love
love u loads ma maharani ji
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Posted: 15 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

my pleasure di....wud b waitin 4 ur nxt wonderful update......dil khol ke aur sab kuch thor ke

i really love reading ur ff's.....am a big fan of ur ff's...so can i have a autograph please...lolzzzz
anyways do pm me my love
love u loads ma maharani ji

Thanks dear for waiting.Yes, dear,I'll try my level best dear.
Thanks dear for loving my all ffs .Awww....
ofcourse dear mn when I'll update any of my ff.
love u too my sweet little princess.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Thanks dear for waiting.Yes, dear,I'll try my level best dear.
Thanks dear for loving my all ffs .Awww....
ofcourse dear mn when I'll update any of my ff.
love u too my sweet little princess.

luv u too maharani ji.......aur haan....please update ur other ff.....u know where prc aur sanyo dost hothe hai...aur ab unki shaadi bhi hogaye hai
that one
i really love that one please
aur haan aise kaam nahi chale ga
i wanna a autograph too
love u loads
aur haan ye bhi update karo
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Posted: 15 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

luv u too maharani ji.......aur haan....please update ur other ff.....u know where prc aur sanyo dost hothe hai...aur ab unki shaadi bhi hogaye hai
that one
i really love that one please
aur haan aise kaam nahi chale ga
i wanna a autograph too
love u loads
aur haan ye bhi update karo

Yes, dear.I'm writing my other ff and Yes, I understand dear tum kaunsa ff ke baarein mein tum bol rehe ho .I'll be post invery soon just wait 1 day.
Oh so sweet of u.
Iye sirf ek shot ka tha iska aur koi part nehi hain ha par I'll post another one shot ff and that will be happy one.I think when u'll read that one u loved that one also.
Love u too my litlle princess.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
its really gud yaar. but Rakhi yeh kya tumne itni tragic ending kyun dikhaya. i wanna c them happily 2getther again. Anyways the story is nice n liked ur idea of the song as I like that bewafa song very much.

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