Pyaar Ki Nishaniyaan! Part 5: Pg 20! - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

the man turns around and we see his face, he is the one and only Prithvi Singhania, the most charming personality of P&R industries! he is the co-owner of P&R!

Rahul enters the room, where the meeting is taking place! he dressed up professional enough to present himself, in light pink shirt, with black blazzer and black trousers, looking dashing as ever! as he enters, all the gazes shifts to him, with the noice of door opening. he walks in and his gaze moves towards, where prithvi is sitting!
he takes his seat! its great to see ur own brother after such a long time, he thought, after seeing prithvi sitting in the room as well!
rahul and Prithvi are the partners of P&R industries. even though they are brothers, they shared a more of a business partners relationship than brothers. its such a pity that despite the fact, we live in same city, are business partners, they live seprately, he complained, cursing the reason of their sepration, and sanyo was one of them for sure, he thought! he always liked sanyo, he considered her as his little sister, but what she did to his brother was unbearable! he could not tolerate this, and broke all the bonds with sanyo!
he jerks out of his thoughts as Prithvi starts the presentation!
an hour later, after meeting:
the board of directors are really impressed with prithvi's presentation. they decides to give the contract to their company! hearing this, Prithvi was more than delighted, he suddenly runs up to Rahul and huggs him tightly!
for a second, he was taken back, but the next second he huggs him back tightly! it feels soooooooooo great hug u after 5 years champ, he thinks to himself, while a tear escapes from his eyes!
Prithvi, all getting emotional, hugging his brother after 5 years. it feels safe bhai, he thinks, i miss u bhai, miss u loadzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, even he gets teary!
they both break apart, after a 5 long minute hug, felt as if took 5 years distance away form prithvi and rahul!
Prithvi: sorry woh.... (goes away from there)
Rahul: (the word SORRY, broke all the hopes he just wished right now) its ok (but before he could finish his sentence, prithvi goes away from there)
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Sanyo enters the office, in blue long skirt with white starp t shirt, hugging her body tightly, with blue heels to match with her dress looked perfect on her!

As she enters the office, the recptionist greets her!
Receptionist: morning maam (she greets with a smile)
Sanyo: morning jeny, (smile faintly) wts the plan for today?
that was her daily routine, to ask jeny to prepare for the ajenda of the day! she preffers it this way, so if there is nothing important she can spend time with chahat!
Receptionist: (takes a paper from her desk, hands over to sanyo) here it is maam!
Sanyo: thanks jeny (saying she walks towards her office)
she is busy looking at the agenda, when she bangs her head into her office door, which she didnt pushed! as she bangs the door, she screams a little, but it was loud enough for jeny to hear! she quickly comes near her she sits down, to pick those papers and files which were in sanyo's hand a minute ago, but fall down due to the accident! she picks it up and gets up to look towards sanyo!
Jeny: maa, r u ok? (she asks with concern)
Sanyo: (rubbing her forehead) yes im fine! thanks!
jeny opens the door for sanyo, go get access inside her office! she walks through to it, while jeny following her behind with the papers and files!
Sanyo: thanks jeny, u can keep them here, (pointing the files)
Jeny: (while keeping them on the desk) ok maam, i'll leave now!
Sanyo: ok jeny!
jeny leaves, leaving sanyo lost in memories, memories of Prithvi, when they met for the first time!
Flashback:
Sanyo walking into the office of P&R Industries, for an interview! She dresses up in white collor shirt, with blue coat and black troursers, looking as professional as possible! he hair tied in pony, in order to avoid blowing hairs in A.C. room! she walks towards the reception, chanting the hanumaan chalisha, with her eyes close! hey god, plz plz plz mujhe ye job mil jaye, she makes prayer in her heart to god! she looks up and says, plz haan? shaking her head!
suddenly, someone comes from the front and bangs himself with sanyo! the file that sanyo was carrying eariler falls on the floor, plus she was about to fall too, but 2 two strong arms catched her in his arms! well, it was none other than Prithvi! Sanyo slowly opens her, just to find the most charming man in front of her sights. his magical brown eyes, met with sanyo's (prc sanyo tune in the background) and the obvious thing happened. they both stared at each other for about 30 secs! realising where she was, Sanyo quickly broke the eye lock session and looked at him with peirceful eyes!
Sanyo: can u plz leave me?
Prithvi: r u sure u want me to do that? (he asks with mischevious eyes)
Sanyo: yes please (she says with anger reflecting in her eyes clearly)
Prithvi: ok
saying this, he left sanyo, to fall on the ground, in front of all the office workers! sanyo could not believe he just did that. she quickly gets up from the floor, to avoid further embarassment!
she picks her files slowly!
meanwhile, Prithvi was enjoying this, the way she fell, her expressions!
Sanyo: do u have any manners? (she asks as rudely as she can)
Prithvi: excuse me? manners? u told me to leave u, so i obeyed u! (he replied grinningly)
Sanyo: ya right? anyway i dnt like talking spoilt brats u see? (she answers with a smile)
Prithvi: wt was that? (confused?)
Sanyo: oh i guess tumhe english nahin aati, spoilt brat means bigda raish, which is u of course! (she replies politly)
Prithvi: what? u dnt knw who u talking to, mate? u wild cat, junglee billi (he says, proudly)
Sanyo: what did u call me? wild cat, junglee billi?
Prithvi: yes i did!
Sanyo: fine!
saying this she goes away from there to the washroom! and prithvi goes in the other direction!
Present:
a telephone ring jerks sanyo out her thoughts! what a meeting it was, she thought, bigda raish, her eyes start getting teary! but she control her self, as she at least learnt to do that in these 5 years! she wipes her tears off before it could come out!
she picks up the reciever at the sixth ring!
Sanyo: hello
Jeny: hi maam, jeny here, there is a call for u from london!
Sanyo: get me through it! (she says rather rudely)
Jeny: yes maam just hold on a minute! (she reply politely)
finally, jeny conneted the phone!
Sanyo: hello
Nupur: hi sanyo, aaj teesti baar phone kar rahi hoon, woh bhi ek hi din mein!
Sanyo: haan bol ,kya kaam hai? (she says, ingoring her last line)
Nupur: BY GOD, kya mein tumhe aise hi phone nahin kar sakti? (she replies in her nautanki style)
Sanyo: nupur, mein office mein, aur mujhe bahut kaam! jaldi bol kya kaam hai?
Nupur: (surprised at her behaviour) whats wrong? koi problem hai?
Sanyo: there is nothing yaar, kuch kaam ho to bol, varna mein phone rakh rahi hoon (she says rudely, she knew she was being rude to nupur, but she couldnt control herself! she wanted to take all her anger out on someone, so it had ot be nupur)
Nupur: fine, i just ran to tell u that mayank has emailed the flight info to ur account, just check it! bye (she was heart broken, sanyo never talked to her like this before)
Sanyo: hello (before she could say anything, nupur already disconnceted the phone!)
so guyz, here it is!
hope u like it!
do comment!
love Zoah

that is so emotional
well written zoah
great
update the next part please
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Posted: 15 years ago
@shona di: thanks sooooooooooooo much for commenting di!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

awwwwwwwww thanks so much jaan!

glad u liked the hug and flashback! i love the Fb specially the part before that😉 wen sanyo banged her head on the door😆
yes huni, me too miss show like anything 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
next update on monday! that means today?🥳
BTW when u updating golden moments, its been a month since u updated now? yeah i knwww...even i want to write it but kya karoon...m stuck with it...hopefully with update once i get a grip on the storyline🤗
plz make it quick!

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Posted: 15 years ago
really sorry huni!
couldnt make it today!
will defo tomorow, i have got day off from college so will update!
plz do continue urs soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

@shona di: thanks sooooooooooooo much for commenting di!

arre bena .....my pleasure.....i jus loved this update....especially prc aur sanyo ka scene
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Posted: 15 years ago
muahh zoah..
wat a lovely ud...
flashback scenes r so gud...claps claps
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: niyaati

muahh zoah..

wat a lovely ud...
flashback scenes r so gud...claps claps

thanks soooooooooooo much yaar!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 5
finally, jeny conneted the phone!

Sanyo: hello
Nupur: hi sanyo, aaj teesti baar phone kar rahi hoon, woh bhi ek hi din mein!
Sanyo: haan bol ,kya kaam hai? (she says, ingoring her last line)
Nupur: BY GOD, kya mein tumhe aise hi phone nahin kar sakti? (she replies in her nautanki style)
Sanyo: nupur, mein office mein, aur mujhe bahut kaam! jaldi bol kya kaam hai?
Nupur: (surprised at her behaviour) whats wrong? koi problem hai?
Sanyo: there is nothing yaar, kuch kaam ho to bol, varna mein phone rakh rahi hoon (she says rudely, she knew she was being rude to nupur, but she couldnt control herself! she wanted to take all her anger out on someone, so it had ot be nupur)
Nupur: fine, i just ran to tell u that mayank has emailed the flight info to ur account, just check it! bye (she was heart broken, sanyo never talked to her like this before)
Sanyo: hello (before she could say anything, nupur already disconnceted the phone!)

In London:

Nupur (muttering under breath, rather pretending to act abgry, but she knew she cnt be angry with sanyo for a long time): kya samjati hai who aapne aap ko? I m not guna talk to her now.

Saying she starts moving towards the sofa but another phone ring makes her stop right there. She turns towards the phone, with furious expressions on her face. She moves form there and goes to pick up the phone. But before she picks up the receiver in her hand, she calm herself down.

Nupur: hello (trying to greet as calm as she could)
Other side on the phone: hello
Nupur: (felt as if she knew who that person was, still just make sure she asked once again) who is it?
Other side: (just silence came as a reply)
Nupur: karan bhaiya? (now she was sure that it is Karan, Sangita's elder brother)
Nupur: haan nupur, mein karan bol raha hoon (he finally spoke up)

Nupur is fully surprised, shocked at a time. She could not belive that the voice she is hearing is actually reality, and not a dream. She did wanted to this to come out as a dream, but it wasn't. Karan Chauhan, the person who ruined her best friend's life, is ringing her, but why, all of a sudden how did he remember nupur? Where was he in last 5 years, did her ever try to find out about his sister, simply no then whats up with him today? All these thoughts ran in nupur's mind?
Coming out her thoughts

Nupur: why did you ring after 5 bloody years? (she asked nearly yelling on him)
Karan: please listen to me, i knw what i did was absolute disgraceful, but I regret it now (he cries)
Nupur: whats the point now bhaiya? its just useless now. (she pauses for a while) why did you ring?

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Singhania Mansion

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Prerna is sitting in the main hall reading a magazine article, when a man enters the house. Prerna didnt look up until she sense some familiar fregrance near her. she closes the page she was reading, keeping the magazine on the table, she slowly looks up to find apple of her eyes standing in front of him, looking dashing as ever, with faint smile of his face!
Prerna: (with big broad smile on her face) Prithvi
out of happiness, she moves ahead to give prithvi a warm hug. she gives him a warm hug, prithvi hugges her back, but not with the equal amount of happiness.
prerna finds peace, having her son in her arms, what more can a mother ask for?
they both break apart from the hug, prerna, quickly wipes her tears which did not go unnoticed by prthvi!
Prithvi: maa please
prerna: ok ok kaisa hai tu? (she asks cupping his face)
Prithvi: (ignoring the question) app kaisi hai?
prerna: all good beta
suddenly, Anjali comes there , and is surprised to prithvi talking to prerna.
Anjali: (with great surprise) Prithvi/ tum yaha?
Prithvi: kyun? can't i come here? i knw i live in seperate house, but it doesnt mean i cnt come here or does it? (he asks, which stunned prerna and anjali)
Anjali: of course u can (clarifying herself) i really didnt mean that.
Prithvi comes and gives her warm hug.
Prithvi: i was kidding bhabhi, how r u?
Anjali: (rubbing her hands on prithvi back) im good buddy, tum bolo?
so guyz, here was the update!
i knw its really short, but college work is a big time headche!
so hope u guyz understand!
love ZoaH
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Posted: 15 years ago
It's wonderful update sweety.I loved this.tumne iha ek suspense dia, iye karan ne kaya kia hoga 5 saal pehele jisse sab kuch badal gaya.
It's ok dear.Take ur time.
Wait for the next part also.
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Posted: 15 years ago
nyc ud..
hey ye karan ne kya kiya 5 yrs pehle....jaldi suspense kholo naaaaaaa

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