PRC&Sanyo-Pyar Ki Imtihaan*New Ch14 added on pg24*

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SandstarQueen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Oh my god, seriously thank you all so much for liking my story outline and wanting me to continue,i'm a bot emotional😭. I wrote it before i went away to Scotland for a short holiday and you won't belive it but i was so worried that you would all hate it and was so nervous when i logged onto today😳 (my sister forbid me from taking my computer).
I will try and post an update later today or tommorow, and will try my best to add in some Hindi but am much more confortable writing in english😳😳.
Again thank you all so much it really means a lot to me you have all made me really happy😊

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Adi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen
Oh my god, seriously thank you all so much for liking my story outline and wanting me to continue,i'm a bot emotional😭. I wrote it before i went away to Scotland for a short holiday and you won't belive it but i was so worried that you would all hate it and was so nervous when i logged onto today😳 (my sister forbid me from taking my computer).
I will try and post an update later today or tommorow, and will try my best to add in some Hindi but am much more confortable writing in english😳😳.
Again thank you all so much it really means a lot to me you have all made me really happy😊

Diii loved ur ff a lottttt😳...Desper8ly w8in 4 d next part!!!😳....Hope u had a nce holiday😃....n Nce 2 c u bck!😳..lve ya lodzzz!!!😳

Edited by mirchy - 16 years ago

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Megha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Ohhh seriously sady u wrote very well buddy...Waiting for the next part eagerly!😳😃👏

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SandstarQueen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Hi everyone thank you all for waiting for my update sorry for the delay, hope you like the update.😊

Recap: Prithvi and Sanyogita married with a little daughter called Nandani. Sanyogita wakes up one morning and can not find her daughter, as she gets worried Prithvi walks in with there daughter. Sanyogita happy to see her daughter, takes her into her arms.

Chapter 2:

'Sanyogita, Kya Hua?' Prithvi asked as he moved across the bedroom to the bed where his wife and daughter were.
'Kuch Nahi Prithvi' Sanyogita answered as she drew Nandani closer to her chest, to try and reassure herself that her daughter was really back in her arms. As she ran her hand over her daughters lovely curly brown hair, and bent to kiss the top of her head, Sanyogita felt her tears start again as Nandani reached up and put her arms around her neck before kissing her on the cheek.
Prithvi stood by the bed silently watching his lovely Sanyo and precious Nandani and felt his heart expand in pride and love as he witnessed the affection between mother and daughter. However, suddenly his heart tightened in pain as he watched tears form in Sanyo's eyes and he was already on the bed ready to catch the first tear as it fell from her eye.
Catching Sanyogita's tear in his hand he closed it into a fist and brought it up to his lips and kissed it, then using both hands to raise Sanyogita's head so they were eye to eye he said 'Meri Pyaari Junglee Billie Istra Itney Kemthi aasu bahoge tho sari duniya mein adasi chaal jaye gey' and then learning forward he kissed her tenderly on the forehead.
Sanyogita looked into the lovely chocolate brown eyes of her husband and saw not only his love for her but his confusion and she knew that she could trust him with her fears the same way she already trusted him with her life. Taking a deep breath, Sanyogita spoke.
'Kuch nahi Prithvi, Nandani hum ko nahi milli tho hum daar..before she could finish Prithvi had enveloped her and Nandani into a hug so tight that she could swear that she heard his heartbeat.
As he held the two most precious things in his life in his arms, Prithvi was in turmoil thinking that his Sanyo had been keeping all her fears to herself. He knew his lovely wife had matured alot since their first meeting at the Koteshar Mandir to become the only woman worthy of being Delhis Maharani, but Prithvi had forgotten that Sanyo hadn't grown up the same way that he had and that she wasn't used to living with fear and caution having grown up as the shelterd daughter of Maharaj Jaichand.
Drawing away from Sanyogita, Prithvi looked down at his daughter who had fallen asleep in her mothers arms and knew that his life would be over if he ever lost either of his two girls. Lightly brushing back the hair that had fallen over his daughters' eyes he bent his head and softly placed a kiss on her head. As he lifted his head, Prithvi saw Sanyo was watching him.
'Prithvi, Hum..' before she could finish Prithvi brought a finger up and put it across her lips to silence her and then he spoke in his soft velvety voice.
'Pagaali, tum ko paatha nahi ke jub thak Prithvi or Sanyogita is duniya mein hain thab thak un ki Nandani ko koi bi haath nahi laga saktha'
Looking into her husbands lovely eyes Sanyogita was reminded that this was the man that had faced and overcome challenges as a boy that had defeated the men before him, she saw Delhi's Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan instead of just her beloved bigdaa Rahess and she finally belived that if there was a threat to her or her daughter then this man, her precious Prithvi would make sure that they were never harmed. Seeing the smile on Sanyos face, Prithvi felt himself begin to smile aswell.
Leaning forward carefully Sanyogita reached up and put her arms around Prithvi's neck and then whispered softly 'Ha Prithvi, jub thak Prithvi hain thub thak Sanyogita or Nandani ko kuch nahi hoga' in his ears before kissing him on the cheek. Prithvi grinned at Sanyo and seeing her blushing face her started to laugh softly.
Sanyo watched her husband and knew that he was going to say something to make her blush more by the twinkle in his eyes.
Picking up Sanyo's hands so that he could lace their fingers together Prithvi whispered 'Sanyo, humari nani si pari so chuki hain, kya hum bi...
'Prithvi, Bhabi...'
Prithvi quickly released Sanyogitas hands and moved sligtly away from her as Chand started speaking.
'Marf kardo Prithvi..' Chand started to say as he came to a sudden stop in the middle of the room after spotting Prithvi and Sanyo together, 'Hum...' but before he could finish he fell facedown on the floor with the breath knocked out of him.
Prithvi watched with a mixture of annoyance and amazement as one by one like a chain of dominos Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir ended up in a pile in the middle of his and Sanyos bedroom. As he started to speak the sound of Sanyo's laugh made him forget everything else. Turning to look at her Prithvi was left speechless, her eyes were twinkling like diamonds, her smile was the widest he had seen it since there little miracle was born, her skin had a glow and her cheeks were rosy red, she was simply stunningly beautiful.
Before Prithvi could say anything his attention was caught by a small hand and a pair of curious brown eyes. As his daughter saw that she had his attention, she lifted her arms up, smiled and said 'Papa' in that sweet little voice of hers that always melted his heart and made him her willing slave. Lifting Nandani out of Sanyo's arms he kissed her on the head and then threw her up in the air and caught her in his arms again just to hear her sweet little laughter. As she was sitting on her fathers shoulders Nandani spotted some of her favourite people.
'Thathas' cried Nandani unable to pronounce her c's, as she saw Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir.
As she started to kick her legs and pull his hair Prithvi knew that his choti billie was ready to be let down. Lowering her to the ground Prithvi watched as she made her way over to his friends but then suddenly stopped half way there and turned around again to come towards the bed and her mother.As she reached Sanyo she put her arms out to and waited until Sanyo picked her so that she could put her arms around her neck and kiss her, once she had done that Nandani walked over to Prithvi and pulled him down so that he was kneeling on the floor and then put her arms around his neck and kissed him to, before making her way back over to his friends.
Prithvi sank back onto the bed as Sanyo leaned back into his arms she said to her husband 'Prithvi,Humari Nandani such mein Bigri Billie hain' as she watched her daughter sweet talk Sanjum into lifting her onto his shoulders.
'Nay Sanyo, Humari Nandani pari hain. Humari pyari choti pari billie' Prithvi said laughingly. Then when Sanyo had stopped laughing and was silent Prithvi spoke again.
'Meri Pyari Sanyo, Hum bi Akeley Hain....'

I hope you all enjoyed the update😊

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mehraan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: SandstarQueen
Oh my god, seriously thank you all so much for liking my story outline and wanting me to continue,i'm a bot emotional😭. I wrote it before i went away to Scotland for a short holiday and you won't belive it but i was so worried that you would all hate it and was so nervous when i logged onto today😳 (my sister forbid me from taking my computer).
I will try and post an update later today or tommorow, and will try my best to add in some Hindi but am much more confortable writing in english😳😳.
Again thank you all so much it really means a lot to me you have all made me really happy😊

u desrve a clap dear👏👏👏 u r simply gud!!!

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mehraan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

saima im here 1st 2 comment...sweety u left me spellbound as 2 wat u hve written..the sec update is so romantic..so much carng ...wid love n affcetion at its best...i think im readg a novel...i jus want 2 hug u 4 writg it so beautifully...its so touchng in a way...dunno how 2 xplain it dear....wat i liked i begin wid

Catching Sanyogita's tear in his hand he closed it into a fist and brought it up to his lips and kissed it, then using both hands to raise Sanyogita's head so they were eye to eye he said 'Meri Pyaari Junglee Billie Istra Itney Kemthi aasu bahoge tho sari duniya mein adasi chaal jaye gey' and then learning forward he kissed her tenderly on the forehead.

wow so beautiful...so much care......simple situations wid so much emotions conveys the message...tats wat i liked abt tis!decribed the situation so well..no words 2 tell how much i loved tis!

she knew that she could trust him with her fears the same way she already trusted him with her life

wata line is tis...vid indept meaning!!!so true..

'Pagaali, tum ko paatha nahi ke jub thak Prithvi or Sanyogita is duniya mein hain thab thak un ki Nandani ko koi bi haath nahi laga saktha'

im in love wid tis guy..always..wat atrue lover,son n a bro.hubby n now a gud father..

Looking into her husbands lovely eyes Sanyogita was reminded that this was the man that had faced and overcome challenges as a boy that had defeated the men before him, she saw Delhi's Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan instead of just her beloved bigdaa Rahess and she finally belived that if there was a threat to her or her daughter then this man, her precious Prithvi would make sure that they were never harmed. Seeing the smile on Sanyos face, Prithvi felt himself begin to smile aswell.

saima tis paragraph is brillinatly written..inshort the whole stry of his life n struggles r summed up so beautifully...jus luv sanyos fears n her realization tat wen prc is around no1 cud harm her or her daughter..her complete trust on him n his undenying assurance n his everlastg n undying love 4 her...i simply cant think or put words...its jus tat u hve written it so well!

Sanyo watched her husband and knew that he was going to say something to make her blush more by the twinkle in his eyes.
Picking up Sanyo's hands so that he could lace their fingers together Prithvi whispered 'Sanyo, humari nani si pari so chuki hain, kya hum bi...

oh so rmantic...prc is always ta his naughty self...the twinkle in his eyes says a lot!!!i jus love the lacing of fingers 2gther...his romantic notions...aww so cute!!

Prithvi watched with a mixture of annoyance and amazement as one by one like a chain of dominos Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir ended up in a pile in the middle of his and Sanyos bedroom. As he started to speak the sound of Sanyo's laugh made him forget everything else. Turning to look at her Prithvi was left speechless, her eyes were twinkling like diamonds, her smile was the widest he had seen it since there little miracle was born, her skin had a glow and her cheeks were rosy red, she was simply stunningly beautiful.

i loved his frends piling down like dominos...well xplained bt the mst imp of tis paragraph is prcs gaze shifted 2 sanyo...the description of hers is so nicely written ...no wonder he lost his heart 2 her!!i miss prc n sanyo so much onscreen...wish v cud hve got 2 c all tis!!even prcs single gaze or stare speaks of his passion n luv 4sanyo

As she was sitting on her fathers shoulders Nandani spotted some of her favourite people.
'Thathas' cried Nandani unable to pronounce her c's, as she saw Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir.
how cute...saima ur intricate details makes ur ff really diff...wow...u hve gvn so much importance 2 small thngs

thathas instead of chachas...mindblowin...simly im lovng each n every bit of wat u hve written!

'Prithvi,Humari Nandani such mein Bigri Billie hain' as she watched her daughter sweet talk Sanjum into lifting her onto his shoulders.
'Nay Sanyo, Humari Nandani pari hain. Humari pyari choti pari billie' Prithvi said laughingly. Then when Sanyo had stopped laughing and was silent Prithvi spoke again.
'Meri Pyari Sanyo, Hum bi Akeley Hain....'

aww prc lukg 2 spend sme time wid his lovely wife...hes so shy bt definately so much in luv...love tis couple a lot!!

pls saima continue...one word simply a masterpiece... u hvehad written the poem so well b4 tat i simply liked the words n the emotions bhnd it...tis update of urs so sweet n touchng...the way u hve described each n every situation so much in detail n so beautifully..lukg 4ward..keep it up!!!

Edited by mehraan - 16 years ago

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Wow👏.U written it very well,I'm speechless.Very good written.

Sanyo aur prithvi ka understanding , trust, love ,dosti etc all is too good👏.Prithvi ka aapne beti ka sath jo bond hain👏.I'm commenting in deatails later.pls wait.Cannot wait for ur next part.Pls post soon dear.

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iqra11

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

o wow, fabulous, amazing, awesome
saima behna kya jadoo thum ne sprinkle kiya, i jus loved nandini the way she called prc's frends thatha, so sweet, plzzz continue it was fantastic, hot and sizzling, nxt update aaj karo plllzzzz, if u love us and show some romance, and if u excuse me tho hum phir se read karege

Edited by letsrockshona - 16 years ago

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SandstarQueen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: mehraan
saima im here 1st 2 comment...sweety u left me spellbound as 2 wat u hve written..the sec update is so romantic..so much carng ...wid love n affcetion at its best...i think im readg a novel...i jus want 2 hug u 4 writg it so beautifully...its so touchng in a way...dunno how 2 xplain it dear....wat i liked i begin wid

Catching Sanyogita's tear in his hand he closed it into a fist and brought it up to his lips and kissed it, then using both hands to raise Sanyogita's head so they were eye to eye he said 'Meri Pyaari Junglee Billie Istra Itney Kemthi aasu bahoge tho sari duniya mein adasi chaal jaye gey' and then learning forward he kissed her tenderly on the forehead.

wow so beautiful...so much care......simple situations wid so much emotions conveys the message...tats wat i liked abt tis!decribed the situation so well..no words 2 tell how much i loved tis!

she knew that she could trust him with her fears the same way she already trusted him with her life

wata line is tis...vid indept meaning!!!so true..
'Pagaali, tum ko paatha nahi ke jub thak Prithvi or Sanyogita is duniya mein hain thab thak un ki Nandani ko koi bi haath nahi laga saktha'

im in love wid tis guy..always..wat atrue lover,son n a bro.hubby n now a gud father..

Looking into her husbands lovely eyes Sanyogita was reminded that this was the man that had faced and overcome challenges as a boy that had defeated the men before him, she saw Delhi's Maharaj Prithviraj Chauhan instead of just her beloved bigdaa Rahess and she finally belived that if there was a threat to her or her daughter then this man, her precious Prithvi would make sure that they were never harmed. Seeing the smile on Sanyos face, Prithvi felt himself begin to smile aswell.

saima tis paragraph is brillinatly written..inshort the whole stry of his life n struggles r summed up so beautifully...jus luv sanyos fears n her realization tat wen prc is around no1 cud harm her or her daughter..her complete trust on him n his undenying assurance n his everlastg n undying love 4 her...i simply cant think or put words...its jus tat u hve written it so well!

Sanyo watched her husband and knew that he was going to say something to make her blush more by the twinkle in his eyes.
Picking up Sanyo's hands so that he could lace their fingers together Prithvi whispered 'Sanyo, humari nani si pari so chuki hain, kya hum bi...

oh so rmantic...prc is always ta his naughty self...the twinkle in his eyes says a lot!!!i jus love the lacing of fingers 2gther...his romantic notions...aww so cute!!

Prithvi watched with a mixture of annoyance and amazement as one by one like a chain of dominos Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir ended up in a pile in the middle of his and Sanyos bedroom. As he started to speak the sound of Sanyo's laugh made him forget everything else. Turning to look at her Prithvi was left speechless, her eyes were twinkling like diamonds, her smile was the widest he had seen it since there little miracle was born, her skin had a glow and her cheeks were rosy red, she was simply stunningly beautiful.

i loved his frends piling down like dominos...well xplained bt the mst imp of tis paragraph is prcs gaze shifted 2 sanyo...the description of hers is so nicely written ...no wonder he lost his heart 2 her!!i miss prc n sanyo so much onscreen...wish v cud hve got 2 c all tis!!even prcs single gaze or stare speaks of his passion n luv 4sanyo

As she was sitting on her fathers shoulders Nandani spotted some of her favourite people.
'Thathas' cried Nandani unable to pronounce her c's, as she saw Chand, Sanjum, Arjun and Pundir.
how cute...saima ur intricate details makes ur ff really diff...wow...u hve gvn so much importance 2 small thngs

thathas instead of chachas...mindblowin...simly im lovng each n every bit of wat u hve written!

'Prithvi,Humari Nandani such mein Bigri Billie hain' as she watched her daughter sweet talk Sanjum into lifting her onto his shoulders.
'Nay Sanyo, Humari Nandani pari hain. Humari pyari choti pari billie' Prithvi said laughingly. Then when Sanyo had stopped laughing and was silent Prithvi spoke again.
'Meri Pyari Sanyo, Hum bi Akeley Hain....'

aww prc lukg 2 spend sme time wid his lovely wife...hes so shy bt definately so much in luv...love tis couple a lot!!

pls saima continue...one word simply a masterpiece... u hvehad written the poem so well b4 tat i simply liked the words n the emotions bhnd it...tis update of urs so sweet n touchng...the way u hve described each n every situation so much in detail n so beautifully..lukg 4ward..keep it up!!!

Mehr, thank you co much for your comments you all ways leave me in depth comments which i really appreciate it as i am never certain that what i have written is good so it is realy nice to have feeback and appreciation. Thanks😊

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SandstarQueen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: veersherafan1
Wow👏.U written it very well,I'm speechless.Very good written.
Sanyo aur prithvi ka understanding , trust, love ,dosti etc all is too good👏.Prithvi ka aapne beti ka sath jo bond hain👏.I'm commenting in deatails later.pls wait.Cannot wait for ur next part.Pls post soon dear.

Thanks for liking the update😊 Will wait for your indepth comments😉