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koi baat nahi jaan good luck for ur exams
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Best of luck for ur exams & no probs...we will wait for the next update buddy!
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😆thank u guzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do u have any idea tat how sweet u ppl are?
soooooooooooooooooo many thanj yaar .... i ll try to update as soon as possible😆
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we will wait and do good in ur exams
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: junglli billi

sorry guz i am really sorry ............... the thing is i am under exam pressure so couldnt post it ...but i ll do it soon as soon as i wil finish😛

It's ok dear.Take ur time dear.
Anyway,Best of luck for ur exam.
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Posted: 16 years ago
😉 hi guzzzzzzzzzzzzz......... thanks ppl ......... here i hav finished m exams ............................... yepppppeeeeeeeee ........ n here goes your nex few parts ...... i am sorry ppl , i think its bit .... u know but its continuation wil be perfect..... i assure u tat..... plz do read n comment ppl......... out there.........
hope u l lik it

*******************The plan**************

Veer n gang returned home n asked permission to go yatra to stop the smuggling of the weapons in the yatra

M A: gives the permission……….

But

Nivi: in sab ko to abhi gurukul jaana hai…( terrified) aur veer to…..

M.k: chinta mat karo nivriti …yeh sab bade hogaye hain…….. aur apni zimeedaari achi tarah se samajh te hain ……( kissing dharam veer's head….)….jao…..(to veer) jao,aur apne pitaji ka sar garv se ucha kar do….

Nivi… does tikaa….. Thy took blessing and they were off …….

Veer goes to yatra as a merchants son………….with his frds…

N sia was also getting frustrated so she took permission from her mum n went off for the yatra…

N here Sumy went back n caught the man and got her tax…. N her baba and dadi mom decided that they won't send her any where alone……

Sumy was upset so were her frds……

A messenger comes and gives her a scroll from Awadhi …it was from sia…. She normally ignores the messages from Awadhi…becoz it upsets her more and her maasa (sia's mom) and pitaji…. Asks her to com back which she can't do…

But this time she opens the scroll and reads it…..

Here it goes…

Meri pyaari sumyukta,

Kaysi ho?... bas dua karti hoon..ki tum mere is sandesh ko pado…. Tumhe to pata hai na ki meri shaadi Aryanagar ke rajkumaar Dharam se tay ho chuki hai…. Bas tumhare aate he hum gurukul chale jayenge…. Aur phir meri shaadi hogi……(sumyukta didn't know tht ) …mai mehal mai reh-reh kar thak gayi hoon isiliye me koteshwar mandir ki yatra ma jaa rahi hoon….

Mujhse milne ek baar zaroor aana ……

Tumhari pyaari behan,

Sia………………………

Sumyukta jeers up………… she asks her dasies to get all the previous scrolls n reads them wit her friends ……

Sia wrote every thing about dharam then their meeting….

Sumy: yeh ……… dharam to wahi h na,…..jo use bigde raise …….hamara matlab h ….vo veer naam ka….

Chemki: haan ……. Vahi h(excited )…………..

Rudali:to…vo log Aryanagar se the….. tabhi m soochu … us ladke maathe pe vo sury ka chinh kyun tha…….

Sumy: kya matlab?,……………

Vyshali: appko nahi pata…dharam, veer aur Arjun ….teeno rajkumaar hain aur baaki unke dost………..

Sumy: acha, tabhi hum sooche ki ….. vo ladka itna ghamandi kyun tha…..

Rudali: vo ghamandi nahi…….

Chamki: bas…vo tha…………

Sumy: ignited…: bas……………..(gets up frm her bed) ….. then calmly..: vyse sia ne bilkul theek ladka chuna h…….,aur bahadur bhi h………humne to uska theek se swagat bhi nahi kiya… ,aur sia…(she stops n turns gracefully…….looking through frds faces : beseechingly : humme ….humme sia ke paas jaana ha……..

Chamki , vyshali, Rudali: kkya………………….? Nahi aysa nahi ho sakta………

(they knew her ….now she wont leave her plan…..)

Chamki: abb kuch nahi ho sakta (giving her frds a look as though saying they are gone)

Vyshali: terrified: hum sab kase…?

Sumy; excitedly… her eyes sparkling: hamare paas ek yojana hai……….

Sumy acts in front of her dadi as though she was very upset…n her grand mom couldn't c tat ……………. So agreed to send her wit her frds, surali n some dasies to the yatra ……… n disguise …………………..

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THE YATRA

N they reaches the yatra place from where it was going to start ( it was just lik the prc 's yatra…………… (old) of rajat…

Veer was wearing blue embroidered full sleeved kurta n matching dhoti …n a scroll tied on his waist wit a long pearled chain around his neck n a dollar thing on his fore head….looking dashing ………..he tried his level best to hide his royal ness … but couldn't……….. he had his usual sun's radiance on his face…………

They were looking here n there .n dharam's sight stopped on sia . …….. she was coming frm the other with her dasies ….smiling at him….they hugged ….veer smirked ….

Then she told her part of the story….

They were taking every ones introduction ….the main pandit came n announced tat they wil start the yatra after 2 days and it will be of 3 padaav's …. N 14 days ….

Once they ll start the yatra, they wil have to complete it … n they were also accompanied wit 2 princesses …… sia n rajkumaari indirawati (daughter of Maharaj Ansh (the villain)) …

When they were going to there allocated tents...

A person came shouting…,…

rajkumaari indirawati padhaar rahi hain…………..

every onewent to tat spot.she got out off her paalki ….she was beautiful ….. She was wearing purple colored robes with accessories …her hair was tightly tied into a bun of her head… she gave everyone a haughty look … she looked proudly…. (She was glittering wit gold)

Arjun: kitni khuubsuurat h yeh,…..

Sia: sniffed loudly…………..

Then from the side came a woman troop …

Veer in their direction, A gal who walking in front of the other ladies was awesome ….he thought…he felt the same way … wen he tat gal in jungle……….

But this gal was completely dark … her waz curled a bit n jet black …. She was wearing white embroidered dress wit matching accessories … she was walking gracefully forward …wit soft smile on her face …excitedly looking everywhere….raising her eyebrows …Gleefully ….she had some type of radiance. She was carrying a plate of rose petals …. She accidentally dashes Indirawati who turns abruptly n falls down ….n veer catches Sumy ….it was familiar fragrance too… he thought n she had same large beautiful sparkling eyes hiding many things in them …. She batted her eyelids slowly …as she was also lost in his…

Indirawati who was still on ground shouts ….veer makes Sumy stand properly ….n still looks at her ….

Sumy: comes to halt, hatred fills her: tum…... phirse… (She shouts…..)

Veer: thought she was jst the shadow of shera…..n watches her frds…. N looks at her again…: suspiciously: tum, mujhe jaanti ho…?

Sumy: widens her eyes n looks at her frds… they were terrified….then shakes her head: nahi to….nahi jaante…

Veer: pointing his hand at Chamki….cutely confused: phir, tumhari VO notched… mera matlab h VO saheli kahan h? (Moving his hand)

Vyshali: kyun? …. Acha…. Vo… vo to vahin h….

Veer kyun…? (Demanding)……………

Chamki : furiously: kyun.. …? Use aur choot pohuchani h kya?

(Veer recalls n feels very guilty)

Then Indirawati stands up n shouts at Sumy. She just opens her mouth to say … But veer speaks out for her n says tat it was her fault…

His handsome face … Stands rooted at the spot… every one go off, amused Indirawati. Indirawati swears tat she will not leave him n her….

However, veer was confused …. He had seen her before…. However, shera's hair was completely straight …. N she was damn fair…

Veers frds were speaking about the ppl in the fare….

Veer: in m se ve koi bhi nahi hain…

Dharam: hain par pata chale bhi to kayse ………. Ki in m se ve log kyon hain….

Sanjum: hum ne sab ka saamaan dekh liya h …isme aysa kuch bhi nahi mila h …

Pundeer: haan…

Veer: jayse panditji ne kaha tha, ke … ke doosre aur teesre padav m bhi loog yatra m shamil honge, humme sab pe kadi nazar rakhni cahiye…, aur yatriyon pe bhi khatra mandra raha h…..aur ajj se mera naam surya h….

Wit this every one went off sleeping…in there tent….

N a woman enters Sumy's tent n tells every thing her heard in veers tent … she was Rudali …

Sumy: tabhi hum sooche …, ki vo bevakuuf bigda raiise yahan kya kar raha h… aur usne apn naam kyun badal liya…

Chamki: sumyukta …

Sumy: nahi…, ab hamara naam …yahan sumyukta nahi… balki nandini hoga…..Varna hamari saari mehnat sia se chipne ki, bakaar ho jayegi….

Vyshali: vyse usne humme se Kisi KO nahi dekha h…

Rudali: lakin VO veer baada ghuur raha tha… us se bachna hoga…

(Now ppl I ll cal her nandini…………….)

Nandini: goes n sits on her bed: vyse sia bohut badi ho gayi h... aur…, khubsoorat bhi…. Lakin VO humme pehchan…. (She comes to halt….) humme use vapas bhejna hoga, Kyunki, yeh yatra to bilkul surakshit nahi h….

Chamki: lakin kase?

Nandini: hum use, bohut tang karenge in do dino m…, phir us surya ko…, aur pitaji ko sandesh bhej do ke sia ko jaldi bulale… abhi…

They obey her n goes to sleep…

Morning every one gets ready quickly…

Sia met dharam in his tent

Veer n gang comes out to give them space ….sumy comes out to give to accomplish her last nights plan...searching sia…. However, she saw veer … he was looking very cute ….n was staring at her …unknowingly she blushes n looks down…. Veers thinks tat something was pulling him to her…. N smiles n turns to his frds

Veer kuch pata chala?

Sanjum: nahi…

Veer: theek h (he turns half but stops looking back) dharam n sia came out…

Indirawati did not know tat sia was going to marry dharam... this was kept secret …. She was always jealous of these sisters (sia n sumyukta)

Indirawati: comes to them looking at them…: in her squeaking kind of voice: arey wah! Abb rajkumaari Sia aam logo se bhi rishta banane lagin hain (lookin at dharam n teasingly)

Veer n gang goes away from her in order to avoid any kind of suspicion …

Sumy: comes near sia: in her cute teasing voice: haan…, ek rajkumaari, aam ladkon se milti h, aur uski Behan, us ka to pata hi…

Sia: ignited n in verge of tears: apna muh band karo… (Dharam tries to stop her) meri behen ke bare m kuch mat kehna… Varna…. Tumhe m nahi chodungi…

She goes off… so does dharam….

Veer was watching all this leaning on the rock wit his leg one leg on rock n the other on ground……..

Indirawati; happily: but still proudly: achaa kiya … naam kya h tumhara?

Vyshali: nandini

Indirawati: tumse pucha mane? (Shouts)

Vyshali shudders …

Indirawati: to nandini: mujhe is se aur is ki behan bilkul pasand nahi h…. vyse tum bhi mujhe zyada pasand nahi ho…… (Looking at her frm top to bottom…)

…kaali ho…. Lakin phir bhi hum dono milke ……….

Nandini: looks at her wit hatred (veer feels as though he got this dose before) guttering her teeth. She goes close to Indirawati…. She was frightened but does not move: duur, duur rehna us se….

Varna tumhare liye bilkul theek nahi hoga samjhi…? Aab jao... Yahan se, (she shouts)

Then turns n looks down…

Veer: goes to her n asks: kon ho tum?

Chamki: pata to h Na … yeh nandini h…

Veer: lakin yeh to bilkul us shera ki parchai lagti h…

Rudali: shudders: haan… kyunki yeh us ki behen h (she comes in front of nandini as he was constantly glaring at her)

Veer: (pushing her slightly away ….to nandini wit piercing stare); mujhe nahi lagta…

Wit his finger he lifts her face up ( a shiver ran through her at his tough) she looks into his eyes veer shudders n takes a step back ….he felt really painful her eyes sparkling were filled wit tears showing her innocent heart ….veer lost in those eyes… a tear tickles down her eye … then she runs away …. However, veer stood rooted

Sanjum: veer. Kya hua…?

Veer kuch nahi …. Pata nahi, aysa laga., jayse m ise saalon se jaanta hoon…, (still looking in her direction…) m… vo ladki jo jungle m mili thi, uski aakhon me bhi aasoon nahi dekh saka …. Aur naahi is ladki nandini…ke pata nahi kyun…

Pundeer: hota h veer …kabhi kabhi….. chalo…..

Everybody goes away…

N the same way nandini annoys sia….n also was Indirawati …but sia gets the msg frm her dad n takes farewell n goes back…

N nandini was happy tat sia was now safe….

N dharam also goes back to Aryanagar to help his dad there n to prepare for coming trouble

**********************PEHLA PADAV**************

After doing puja, everyone heads for the 1st destination…

Indirawati wanted to come in palki but the main pandit denied…n she was swearing tat she wil not leave him… N was planning to trap Nandini…………

N Nandini was planning to trap veer to take revenge n veer n gang was planning to trap their enemies…..

As they were faster than expected … the main pandit announced that for the day….

Main pandit: yeh (showing them a large Waterfall area); pushvali jharna h… kehte hain yahan…koi bhi manta mangta h to puuri, ho jaati h… aur iska paani bhi bohut pavitr maana jaata h …isme nahaane se, tan aur man dono shud ho jaate hain…

Nandini turns: tab…..to hum, zaroor jayenge…. Mannat mangne…. (excitedly)

Veer n gang were walking behind her…

Pandit: lakin vahaan jaana mat, bohut khatra h…

Surali; warning: koi nahi jayega…. (looking at nandini)….

Nandini: smirks n slowly said: hum, zaroor jayenge…, dekhte hain, humme kon rokega, hum apne rajkumaar…

Chamki: claps her hands

Veer: shakes his head: pagal…

Nandini: tum apne kaam se kaam rakho, samjhe... (Pointing her hand to him)

(He gives her a grim smile n goes)

Nandini: ise to hum…

Nandini n her frds sneaks out of their tent n went to the water fall, it was on great height n the flow of water was wild…….the road was too slippery to the top. Vyshali n Rudali stands quintet …n frightened but Chamki n nandini climbs up. While doing Nandini gets her leg scratched but due to her stubbornness, she some how manages to reach the top…

N here Surali came to know tat al the women went missing... n she went to main pandit n tells him, as veer was also present… he predicted …

Veer wit his gang went there n found terrified Vyshali n Rudali. They told them tat nandini had injured her…

Veer n Sanjum climbs up ….

N there she was bit irritated due to her wound on leg trying to ignore the pain……she was trying to put her coin into the water …… bit she couldn't reach it completely…..

Nandini: her eyes closed: says excitedly: hum, … hum chahte hain ki, hamara rajkumaar jaldi aajaye… (As she was not able to throw it, she starts climbing…)

Veer: shouts: ruk jao nandini, vahan khatra h….

Nandini: peeps down n the site of his fills hatred in her: tum …? Tum phir yahan agaye…, chale jao yahan se…

Veer: ignores her: dekho, Aage bohut khatra h, vapas AA jao…

Nandini: nahi aayenge, jab tak hum isme, yeh sika nahi daal dete, hum nahi aayenge…

Veer zid mat karo, kabhi to meri baat maan liya karo…

Nandini: ignores him n climbs up n slips...

Chamki: shouts nandini's name n slips Sanjum catches her,…………and eye lock…..

N here Nadine's coin fell into water n as she was sloping down veer holds her hand n pulls her to him wit his one arm on her waist n other on her arm….

Veer: looking through face: tum, tum sach m bohut ziddi ho… Nandini… (N smiles)

Nandini: unknowingly blushes….

Veer: tum theek to ho Na.?

Nandini: nodes her head not looking at him…

Veer: (watches Sanjum who was still immersed in Chamki above Nadini's head, as she was only 2 – 3 inches shorter than he…was) chale Sanjum…?

Sanjum comes to halt n nodes.

Nandini ws trying not to show her pain n was walking in front of veer…. Nevertheless, she slips again n holds her wit her arms.

Veer mera haat pakkad ke chalo (giving her his hand …. He didn't know tat y was he so comfortable wit this gal)

Nandini: looks at his hand n then at him n looking at ground n starts walking quietly forward blushing wit one hand on the injured leg…

Veer watches her some time then walks in front of her n lifts her up in his arms…

Nandini: aahaann…yeh tum…

Veer: chup raho… varna m tumhe yahin gira dunga…

N walks forward

Nandini went silent… she was watching at her prince charming…. He was so handsome …cute adorable…n strong… her hands went around her neck ….

Occasionally her glanced at her … she was so graceful he thought …so innocent… so beautiful…

Both of them could not hear the swearing n shouting of Chamki at them… who was also climbing wit down Sanjum….

They reached the ground ….veer's frds were giving him unbelievable sort of expressions ….HE WERE LIFTING A GAL IN HIS ARMS… MIRACLEEEE …………

Precap:

Veer: tum itni ziddi kyun ho? M to tumhe kabhi samaj he nahi paunga … (wit this his eyes filled wit tears)

Than u

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey junglii billi
wonderful update
aap ne hume khush kar diya
please continue
its getting exciting and unresistable
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow dear
ur ff is superb
plzz do cont
thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: letsrockshona

hey junglii billi
wonderful update
aap ne hume khush kar diya
please continue
its getting exciting and unresistable



😉 thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu yaar ..........😛 i ll post the next as soon as possible
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